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人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
ENTRY #104
Author: 貓咪面具 Lina
Published:
May 3, 2025
人在做天在看！你在寫我評判！【試水第一期】（出題者到5／16）
Published:
May 3, 2025
ENTRY #104
鑑賞家：影子
Author: 貓咪面具 Lina
Published:
May 3, 2025
1 Min Read
210 Words
No Plagiarism!uj7f4xt63CW6arL5R0pIposted on PＥNAＮＡ

看完後，我一直在想一件事。

每個人的影子長短不同，且與身高成正比。

在故事主角的眼中，影子的長短與影子主人的壽命相關？

那壽命不就與身高成正比？

後面主角看到一家三口中的孩子影子，比父母的還要短，主角的內心不禁沉了一下。

但，小孩的影子比父母的影子還要短不是正常的嗎？這段邏輯真的挺奇怪的。

最後的結尾主角看著自己腳下，一動也不動。

這裡應該是想讓讀者留一個懸念，但寫的有些簡略，所以效果感覺不是很好。

建議可以在後面加：466Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9USGWOJklD

剎那，刺眼的遠光燈伴隨著玻璃破碎的聲音……466Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2JLQUvowv9

什麼……也感覺不到了……

216.73.216.67

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