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**黑暗**超破詩集**（大誤）
ISSUE #3
Author: 陽壽木魚
**黑暗**超破詩集**（大誤）
Author: 陽壽木魚
ISSUE #3
「戰場的黑日」
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王啊！

揚起戰矛吧！

天真的少年，

你可知道，

槍鋒所指的地方乃是太陽？

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風啊！

帶走命運吧！

無名的詩篇，

你可耳聞，

足音迴響的盡頭乃是虛空？

279Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaxnrBSi0ij

神啊！

攜來煙硝吧！

狂妄的人子，

你可記得，

染血荊棘的王座乃是故鄉？

作者的感想：

我喜歡對稱的句式，寫的很爽，然後，此詩是在寫我小說一個還沒出場的角色，好奇別人看到這首詩會對他有什麼想法。

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**黑暗**超破詩集**（大誤）
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Last updated: Apr 15, 2026
Total word count: 1,144
Total reading time: 4 Minutes
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陽壽木魚
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