純粹想寫一些文字收尾，第一次的短篇小說嘗試還不賴，給幾個朋友和老師閱讀都收穫了不錯的評價。老師覺得我的確文筆精煉流暢，感情細膩，但對於櫻和舞的感情可以把伏筆再埋深一點，到最後才一次過揭露，而不是前期每隔數段就滲入。這是一次相當棒的體驗，或許未來會有更多短篇小說的創作喔！《繁花舞落》的篇章暫時告一段落。
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