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繁花舞落
ISSUE #7
Author: 樂曦
繁花舞落
Author: 樂曦
ISSUE #7
後記
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純粹想寫一些文字收尾——第一次的短篇小說嘗試還不賴，給幾個朋友和老師閱讀都收穫了不錯的評價。老師覺得我的確文筆精煉流暢，感情細膩，但對於櫻和舞的感情可以把伏筆再埋深一點，到最後才一次過揭露，而不是前期每隔數段就滲入。這是一次相當棒的體驗，或許未來會有更多短篇小說的創作喔！《繁花舞落》的篇章暫時告一段落。

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繁花舞落
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Last updated: Feb 16, 2025
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Total reading time: 9 Minutes
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