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問題之神之閱讀心得和有獎徵答活動
ENTRY #8
Author: 貓咪面具 Lina
Published:
Mar 29, 2025
問題之神之閱讀心得和有獎徵答活動
Published:
Mar 29, 2025
ENTRY #8
心得部分
Author: 貓咪面具 Lina
Published:
Mar 29, 2025
1 Min Read
319 Words
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對故事有詳細的世界觀描寫並不是什麼壞事，代表作者對自己故事有充分了解，但凡事要適可而止。

以異世界篇章為例：

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主要目地——蒐集大量能量回去原本世界，為此需擊敗魔王獲取能量。

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這是一開始仲介女神跟主角團說的，同時也是作者對讀者說的。

然後回頭看看自己都寫了什麼。

老實說，大部分的劇情壓可以直接帶過甚至不寫，像是那個基本超廢的異世界學院篇，和一堆雜七雜八的劇情。

然後世界觀不用交代的如此詳細，可以省略帶過去。

讀者省略的他們腦中會自動腦補。

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在珍貴的故事前期拼命交代世界觀，結果就像這樣：

穿越時讀者感受——哦～這故事感覺有料

穿越後讀者感受——這都是些什麼東西，無聊透了。

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如果真的想要在前面交代長長世界觀，有一個建議：

把後面的精彩劇情適時插入。這樣才能保持穩定的觀看數。

雖然這樣說有些殘忍，但你沒發現後面觀看數降低許多嗎？

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