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沒被奪捨的我卻被邪神賜福
六洲掩霜
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想看什麼自己寫系列之一。

基本架構是想著地下城、怪物、裝備、神明這樣，接著就想著加入一些元素，穿越者、轉生什麼的，隨之而來的就是對世界造成的影響。


自己沒興趣看了，儘管後續架構都早已搭好了就是了。我要去重新審思怎麼延續創作熱情，以及情節鋪陳的節奏安排，現階段個人的解答是先抄套路。

至於這本，大概就更到224，雖說存稿則還有五萬字左右，而後續就是驚懼難度的特色怪物，接著推主線這樣。老實講，這也是我寫到覺得無聊的地方。不是寫著不好玩，就是越寫越覺得無意義，加上有水字數的嫌疑。結論是，我無法拿捏好加深人設的劇情尺度，有的部分寫得很僵硬、毫無靈性。

個人反省是，我寫作是照著腦袋裡構思出的圖片、漫畫、電影這樣保有變動潛力的場景去演繹劇情，但文字跟畫面間保持著一定的鴻溝，所以我一直都不知道怎麼順暢的轉換與轉場，雖說很多劇情也是在推演過程中的一時偶得就是了。這部分不寫覺得可惜，寫了又覺得拖延了主線進度，結果就是越寫熱情越加流失。兼之靈感來源很多，又陷入只想不寫的懶散泥淖，動力直接在過程中燒乾了。


封面:Juan de Valdés Leal - Finis Gloriae Mundi

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