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女主心地善良。8964 copyright protection179PENANAoea5EpKAfV 維尼
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黃毛登場,藉由對話來描寫人物的個性。8964 copyright protection179PENANA3ePK2wA6wo 維尼
再次提到十年前的湖事件~作為結束。8964 copyright protection179PENANAnkLXAiCCTL 維尼
這就會讓人好奇,嗯......接下來的事情,是不是也會像十年前那樣呢?8964 copyright protection179PENANAecvSQS410d 維尼
好了,各位~所以呢。8964 copyright protection179PENANAlsW7IkqW4p 維尼
這個事件出現了三次,也因此會在讀者心中留有印象。8964 copyright protection179PENANAtjXfyCIgHC 維尼
你可以說這叫做前後呼應,什麼圈圈蛋的寫作技巧名稱。8964 copyright protection179PENANABby3oDC3yR 維尼
但重點,他出現次數多,就越能吸引讀者的注意力。8964 copyright protection179PENANAtIBJNnO2uE 維尼
像你日常生活看到的廣告一樣!8964 copyright protection179PENANAMlMf5wQjDt 維尼
所以,這個技巧可不是菜根鬼扯的喔~~8964 copyright protection179PENANA8Pyurd7fBH 維尼
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原來黃毛是失憶的阿~8964 copyright protection179PENANAU8DvWjUvRy 維尼
系統又出現了呢~8964 copyright protection179PENANA0D0bKypYUD 維尼
解釋了些名詞,但基本上還是要去看設定集才行,嘆。8964 copyright protection179PENANAiDtqOJ3DL3 維尼
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嗯嗯,藉由小孩老媽的問答,來解釋名詞、順便描寫黃毛的人格特質。8964 copyright protection179PENANAGFyeV09rb6 維尼
然後新的圈圈降臨了,黃毛敵不過天降的劇情嗎?8964 copyright protection179PENANAj8B0eXdxdx 維尼
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風向在變~暗喻法。8964 copyright protection179PENANALi7tYg1rrM 維尼
然後接著說過去那些不屬於他了。8964 copyright protection179PENANAaNERWDySbx 維尼
可能黃毛要搞事了吧?8964 copyright protection179PENANAvFqoUGhpDe 維尼
這裡展現了女主沒啥情感的事情~8964 copyright protection179PENANAvGGDeoLWwt 維尼
或是說頑固~不知變通~8964 copyright protection179PENANA6VXc9npBVw 維尼
黃毛的愉悅只維持一個晚上,讓讀者繼續往下。8964 copyright protection179PENANADGMwNLo0Im 維尼
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開頭插入短暫回憶,大概是描寫瑪麗安吧~8964 copyright protection179PENANAkONVec6FId 維尼
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新人對系統輸入了個名字。8964 copyright protection179PENANABDkZIJF1fN 維尼
黃毛忌妒~8964 copyright protection179PENANAk5V799qDLH 維尼
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看來黃毛的記憶和湖有點關係~8964 copyright protection179PENANAgZJ1TvnCio 維尼
從這裡,看出大家都很習慣系統這玩意呢~8964 copyright protection179PENANAGC1gEGHIQV 維尼
黃毛原本要坑黑毛,但黑毛態度挺好的。8964 copyright protection179PENANA6cOC0MfCBe 維尼
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這裡透過問答解釋了圈圈碎片像是穿越者的記憶和實現願望的代幣~8964 copyright protection179PENANABGsGSz4dZ5 維尼
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黃毛被壞事了~首抽,恩恩~很遊戲感。8964 copyright protection179PENANAb9DlRjW3Mx 維尼
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這裡黃毛描寫比較好呢。8964 copyright protection179PENANALOdDF0T8Et 維尼
成功壞事了~8964 copyright protection179PENANAmrm3R1guAK 維尼
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搞不懂,為啥要選女的。又要去看設定嗎?8964 copyright protection179PENANAKH5lZ9gKWa 維尼
嗯嗯~~8964 copyright protection179PENANA5kFKZmyf3f 維尼
黑毛一見鍾情了~8964 copyright protection179PENANA8kheGsuEQU 維尼
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戰鬥描寫有魄力~8964 copyright protection179PENANA4AiqhGs8EO 維尼
女主看來要反殺了~8964 copyright protection179PENANAsHHGRZNYZk 維尼
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女主打爆了對方~嗯嗯。8964 copyright protection179PENANAd6ThCi4G6L 維尼
黑毛畢竟剛到,還很天真~嗯嗯~8964 copyright protection179PENANAtygWk4IVCN 維尼
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黑毛很善良。凸顯伊奴的低下地位。8964 copyright protection179PENANAOGZHHjw2xW 維尼
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目前累積128分鐘8964 copyright protection179PENANAQw3YicXIPt 維尼
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好的好的~今天把全部殺光吧!8964 copyright protection179PENANAnjL8Xr8nYh 維尼
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這裡加入地下水有血的線索。8964 copyright protection179PENANA3nXIMooKMa 維尼
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價值觀衝突~恩恩。鎮長正在釣魚中~8964 copyright protection179PENANAqzTdgomTnF 維尼
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聖杯的意外大概解鎖了什麼東東,在後面會凸顯出來?8964 copyright protection179PENANAaj2INyN4JJ 維尼
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男孩遇到女孩。8964 copyright protection179PENANAtWfop3ICnf 維尼
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練騎馬。8964 copyright protection179PENANAA3JhkMLQJo 維尼
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總算有點互動了,雖然說算是幸運色狼的事件。8964 copyright protection179PENANAQ3rfSu74s5 維尼
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開頭有一點男女互動。似乎到了女主的老家?8964 copyright protection179PENANAkxINszDrFF 維尼
推進了主線劇情。8964 copyright protection179PENANAO1zXWH0rTG 維尼
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總共時間,204分鐘!8964 copyright protection179PENANAqIwR2jQGxE 維尼
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這是一部慢節奏的奇幻小說。8964 copyright protection179PENANAoq4N1lPDSY 維尼
然後鉅細靡遺的描繪地區和提供主線謎團線索。8964 copyright protection179PENANAqfclWs3c6a 維尼
在戰鬥的描寫上相當不錯,但是在劇情上的鋪陳略顯過長。8964 copyright protection179PENANA3wMbRfPcXD 維尼
大概一節會得到一個或零個謎團線索。8964 copyright protection179PENANA3uuzefbaku 維尼
由於一切相當白話,所有的伏筆感覺也一目了然。8964 copyright protection179PENANAI4AqgPH7Sy 維尼
大概只會看一次。8964 copyright protection179PENANAN5ayOpkjZT 維尼
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若菜根還是學生,就會追這作品。8964 copyright protection179PENANAQzGMDdF3R9 維尼
故事架構,是解開十年前的真相,解開之後可能有什麼問題需要解決。8964 copyright protection179PENANACqHdNeA38Q 維尼
日常則是描寫男女主和另一派黃毛的價值觀衝突。8964 copyright protection179PENANA71bBeidMkz 維尼
男女主角隨著一系列浮現出來的事件、共同的價值觀慢慢培養感情。8964 copyright protection179PENANAnxT2wKCUiU 維尼
黃毛之後可能會被唾棄之類的走向。8964 copyright protection179PENANAfjhyLOO0HN 維尼
由於是讀者魔,因此分析至此。8964 copyright protection179PENANAXoWn28soZr 維尼
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