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收過最讓你印象深刻的留言
ENTRY #2
Author: Ander Wang
Published:
Dec 18, 2024
收過最讓你印象深刻的留言
Published:
Dec 18, 2024
ENTRY #2
嘖。
Author: Ander Wang
Published:
Dec 18, 2024
1 Min Read
144 Words
No Plagiarism!mR2FS2Bvbj1oOL4yS5Rgposted on PＥNAＮＡ

對，就是這麼簡單的一個「嘖。」

222Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVwCiGrNIwG

我寫小說的目的是為了根治我那不愛看書的弟弟，但以前的文法、劇情實在太爛了⋯⋯

222Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡC7KFNJoLyM

不對，不能只用爛來形容了，可以說是垃圾桶中的草稿、廚餘中的劇情、核廢場中的文法。

222Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVRXBvnmaMK

所以為了讓我的弟弟能有繼續看下去的慾望，因此開始練文筆，雖然還有許多不成熟，但也比以前好太多了。

222Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzFTSoH6cYl

沒想到人生第一次寫的小說的評價會是一個「嘖。」

3.129.194.130

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