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【雷迪】長期書評直播開跑！
ENTRY #3
Author: 對酒當歌
Published:
Nov 20, 2024
【雷迪】長期書評直播開跑！
Published:
Nov 20, 2024
ENTRY #3
【奇幻】五芒星的祈願
Author: 對酒當歌
Published:
Nov 20, 2024
1 Min Read
227 Words
No Plagiarism!qYrvt2OoKrDhJFXMCWyLposted on PＥNAＮＡ
大家好，本人第一次在網絡上寫長篇小說，希望看過後可以給我一些評語，令我可以進步。

「不要相信人類，人類都是邪惡的，為了權力，金錢，色慾，嫉妒，

人類都可以毫不猶豫的使用暴力，欺騙別人，利用別人，殺死別人。」

千年前魔物突然出現，嗜食人類，

人類完全沒法抗衡，

直到數百年前人類得到操控自然力量的能力，

開始獵殺魔物。

不過當人類生活得安穩時，

無止盡的欲求就會侵蝕人心。

國家和國家之間開始戰爭，

互相吞併，死傷的人更多。

在遠離塵世的諾亞村長大的路卡，

為了尋找五芒星而假扮人類走進人類世界，

等待他的卻是無止盡的惡意……

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【奇幻】五芒星的祈願

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