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異能英雄討論
ENTRY #2
Author: 小豬瑩瑩
Published:
Oct 22, 2024
異能英雄討論
Published:
Oct 22, 2024
ENTRY #2
小豬的小小心得
Author: 小豬瑩瑩
Published:
Oct 22, 2024
1 Min Read
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建議：初步來看，都是吸引的，但是反派的描述較少，還有他們為什麼要捉六六的謎始終未解，可以透露小小，讓讀者們知道六六的特別，另外，我覺得要多些介紹異能，尤其六六的能力或是進化能力，總不能只說她的社會化進度呀！

喜歡的角色：一定是顧然，雖然男主一開始對六六很粗魯，但是之後對她很溫柔，為了她，他甚至願意去死，雖然有些火爆，但是有正義感，就是喜歡這種真漢子！

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