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不專業看稿（微狠評）
ENTRY #43
Author: 鶄
Published:
Nov 6, 2024
不專業看稿（微狠評）
Published:
Nov 6, 2024
ENTRY #43
在你筆下，請你延長我的生命
Author: 鶄
Published:
Nov 6, 2024
1 Min Read
146 Words
No Plagiarism!P74enyLhBDNALwMBGZ7Kposted on PＥNAＮＡ

故事名字：在你筆下，請你延長我的生命298Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡD8yw6sAMAv

298Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ7MMKv321P

簡介：在90年代初期的日本，宮崎翔在一個深夜忽發奇想，開始撰寫自己的第一個故事。在他下筆之際，故事裏的角色竟然走了出來，阻止故事的發展？這是一個自覺得世界有所虧欠自己的少年，慢慢尋找自己價值的故事。

序章298Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaJmng6FrTG

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第二章

我想了解一下我這頭三章會不會有追看性，歡迎任何的意見，麻煩你及辛苦你了！

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