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不專業看稿（微狠評）
ENTRY #41
Author: 湖里
Published:
Nov 5, 2024
不專業看稿（微狠評）
Published:
Nov 5, 2024
ENTRY #41
［暗殺教室同人］交錯的紅色光芒
Author: 湖里
Published:
Nov 5, 2024
1 Min Read
273 Words
No Plagiarism!g8VRERsUZRFgyuKxFxatposted on PＥNAＮＡ

簡介：

曾經的那個充滿秩序的椚丘中學，隨著淺野理事長的辭職一同消失了；取而代之的是，雜亂不堪的校園環境、幫派結黨的威脅利誘，和脫離正軌的高中生活。

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淺野學秀失勢？學生會被雜魚霸佔？

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後山被入侵？赤羽業化身護山使者？

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為了奪回本來該擁有的東西，因緣際會下，兩人決定攜手合作。

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曾經的死對頭，又有沒有可能擦出什麼火花？

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非常謝謝大大舉辦的創挑！本人是第一次寫文，想說機會難得，希望大大幫我狠狠評價，看文筆和內容編排是否順暢，吸引讀者。

這篇同人文會借用原作的一些劇情和人物關係，所以有可能有些地方會看不懂，在此先致歉。

以下是連結：

第一章

https://ios2.penana.com/chapteredit.php?id=168193&chapter=1

第二章

https://ios2.penana.com/chapteredit.php?id=168193&chapter=2

第三章

https://ios2.penana.com/chapteredit.php?id=168193&chapter=3

勞煩大大了！

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