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來寫OO詩 ⑦：故事詩
ENTRY #2
Author: 皮皮
Published:
Oct 6, 2024
來寫OO詩 ⑦：故事詩
Published:
Oct 6, 2024
ENTRY #2
樂園/Paradise
Author: 皮皮
Published:
Oct 6, 2024
2 Mins Read
673 Words
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幼時若是感到徬徨不安

只要後背緊貼著妳的溫度

就會知道回家的路

知道燈塔的方向

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在月光下起舞，我以為我們終歸會一輩子如此

可時間還是過於無情

無情到我以為，恍惚沒有妳

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從最一開始

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她們匆匆跑過，那茵綠草原

在有太陽的時候，她偶爾會想起過去

想起那個不見光的地下室，還有與＂她＂的最後一面

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春風會吹過，帶走哀愁

在陽光肆意的午後

書頁被隨意翻動著，直到它結尾

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『我對愛他也沒有那麼大興趣，就只是因為是妳——結果我們互相誕下了彼此最憎恨的模樣。』

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在無數回顧中，在最後加冕上

只有少女讓她停下了腳步

夢境不會說謊

除非它一早就以謊言的形式存在

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「為何妳還要回來呢、艾莉絲？」

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然後向深淵祈禱、向死而生

在火光的盡頭，我追逐、我哭喊

救贖不會到來

正如樂園早已腐爛

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火光紛至的過往中，一分為二的人影搖晃

背腹受敵——她想起＂母親＂的告誡

她不斷張闔開口，呢喃著同一句話

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小偷、小偷、該死的、小偷

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「妳若想要，便自己來拿，王座就在那裡。」

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就那樣斬去她雙翼、割去她聲音——

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聖子啊總會垂憐目光、在流放中墜落

傾聽生命的垂死掙扎、在放逐過後

直到跨越漫長光年

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再次、降臨

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等到放逐天堂

聖星芒將會指引，跨越忒修斯之船，在巴比倫哀嘆之前

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向神祇發起挑戰

成為命運基石、成為永恆夢魘

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那不可違抗，命運

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我，又一次聽見

來自伊甸、迴響

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那是、

屬於新世紀的再降臨

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一切苦難不過是——

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必經之路。

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皮皮的屁話:

「我糾結在乖乖寫稿跟散發思緒中，最後他們打一架，我贏了(???」

 「所以整理了章頭詩，本來主線就藏在裡面，合起來看就是樂園的故事，但不知道是不是寫得太隱晦跳躍了?不過等全篇完結回來看會比較清晰。」

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樂園/Paradise(長篇小說/意識流/奇幻架空，全篇共40萬字上下，接近結尾。)

皮皮:這邊會更新比較慢，以角角者為主，反正也涼了~

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作品連結:https://www.penana.com/story/154984

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大章節視覺圖(圖皆為本人拍攝後排版):

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※章節預計為七大章，目前進度來到第六章，倒數完結※

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