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來寫OO詩 ⑥：主題詩 (「連結」)
ENTRY #8
Author: 啊溫
Published:
Oct 2, 2024
來寫OO詩 ⑥：主題詩 (「連結」)
Published:
Oct 2, 2024
ENTRY #8
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Author: 啊溫
Published:
Oct 2, 2024
1 Min Read
299 Words
No Plagiarism!5ut6BWTXm1sHWalZWm63posted on PＥNAＮＡ

從母親那

牽一條好長好長的線

過好幾年都拉不到盡頭

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禮堂，聽周遭的泣聲和

祝賀，看台下的母親

線已無法拉長

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開始可以

自己去城市

玩樂，吃喝

悄悄把線縮回

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數次把線剪斷

但它總能回到手心

於是點燃慶祝成年的煙火

把線炸了

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竟又長回來

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於是背著行李跑到

好遠好遠的地方

線斷了，也終於

不再回來了

一種得到自由的喜悅

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獨自在街上

看行人牽著各自的線

交疊彼此，成一張結實的網

把冷隔絕在外

看著手中的斷線

有股把根丟失的悲傷

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牽一條隱形的線

對它講話，傳訊息

找回了從前，只是這條

不夠暖

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不知何時，斷掉的線偷偷

長出皺紋和雀斑

慢慢把自己收回

我沒有發現

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當沿著痕跡回到家時

原來的線已經找不到了

急忙地四處尋找

最後終於在棺材裡

找到完整無缺的線

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靜靜躺在那的

失溫的線

試圖給予溫度但

依舊冰冷

216.73.216.217

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