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來寫OO詩 ⑥：主題詩 (「連結」)
ENTRY #10
Author: 小魚一尾
Published:
Oct 3, 2024
來寫OO詩 ⑥：主題詩 (「連結」)
Published:
Oct 3, 2024
ENTRY #10
線
Author: 小魚一尾
Published:
Oct 3, 2024
1 Min Read
286 Words
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出生的那一刻

臍帶 拴著 高高拉起

掙扎著吸入 除羊水外的東西

一條又一條 類似的線

纏繞了上來

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我是他們的孩子

我是他們的朋友

我是他們的學生

我是他們的手足

線 越來越多 纏繞著 剪不斷  理更亂

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我是誰的孩子啊  我做不到孝順微笑聽話乖巧

我是誰的朋友啊  我做不到溫暖可愛正能量

我是誰的學生啊  我做不到聰明幽默成績好

我是誰的手足啊  我做不到讓梨讓玩具讓最愛吃的雞爪

腐朽的線  緊緊拉住 手上勒出了血

不放  不   放  開 

學著  抓住那些線

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傷口腐爛  緊緊抓著線

暴露在陽光下  灼燒

發email該用你好您好請問甚麼開頭

是否該問問她討不討厭我

愚笨抓不住線沒用的手就應該砍斷

那樣簡單的事  都做不來

我是誰啊他又是誰你又是誰她又是誰為何此世

緊緊纏繞

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放開線  493Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8tFP499rHj

直        直        墜          入                 黑                                  暗

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