希望大家可以幫我看看，哪邊可以改進，文筆、語助詞、情緒⋯⋯，謝謝大家^ ^
（謎之音：不然他的留言區好冷清。
（作者：你閉嘴！(−_−＃)
350Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlzFOyXctJI
同心蓮（它是仙俠師徒戀，作者的第一部小說）
熙陽照疏影（別看名字這樣，它是校園小說和遊戲世界）
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Published:
Feb 14, 2025
ENTRY #99
【宣傳宣傳，衝個流量(?)】推廣我的作品
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