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某天醒來發現,239Please respect copyright.PENANAhpVkU2ME2d
自己不但穿越到239Please respect copyright.PENANAVbNSK5vQmK
有著神奇力量的魔幻世界,239Please respect copyright.PENANAli3MuCJuQG
身邊甚至有數位美男相伴,239Please respect copyright.PENANARs3bTYN4Zj
每位都還可遠觀也可褻玩,239Please respect copyright.PENANAryQfGQQQ3k
這樣的奇遇你覺得如何呢?239Please respect copyright.PENANACoMx1Eqrl6
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殷璃覺得──簡直糟透了!239Please respect copyright.PENANAa1w8ic4Rv7
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她不過是睡了一覺,239Please respect copyright.PENANAMyovsxbZtj
到底跑到了什麼莫名其妙的地方?239Please respect copyright.PENANAQ1n37wBf9c
還她原本很樸素很普通的生活好嗎!?239Please respect copyright.PENANAhYQekLW5zh
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美男養眼歸養眼,239Please respect copyright.PENANADXowsMwxH9
好吃也確實……咳咳咳咳!239Please respect copyright.PENANAweJCRR18z9
但總之她要求退貨!239Please respect copyright.PENANA0g8PtNtiHR
不知道強迫推銷是可以報警的嗎?239Please respect copyright.PENANAQAV5ZWrPKk
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什麼?239Please respect copyright.PENANAaVtA5SoOGR
不乖乖推倒或被美男推倒會死??239Please respect copyright.PENANAX6XHppAecp
而且推得不夠多也會死???239Please respect copyright.PENANAoWdLi1F6cr
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這哪裡是什麼異世界239Please respect copyright.PENANAYWcFHKKl7C
根本是強迫客人吃霸王餐的牛郎店吧!!239Please respect copyright.PENANARmGuyH1bvL
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[一句話簡介]239Please respect copyright.PENANALGMxoD0Vv3
情慾小白女主在異世界與多位美男吃肉談戀愛的冒險故事
#逆后宮239Please respect copyright.PENANAoAayoUrprQ
#戀愛&情慾239Please respect copyright.PENANAyqVWwl7iWy
#架空異世界239Please respect copyright.PENANAirSgEMfLI8
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作品連結(成人向閱覽注意):
穿越後綁定了六個老公239Please respect copyright.PENANACsdtZEq2uc
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最喜歡的篇章:
文章的 2-17 ~ 2-20 是女主第一次嘗試三人行的部分,有努力描繪出房事新手需要突破價值觀去嘗試新事物的心境,以及那種對未知的刺激又怕又期待的感覺,當然情慾和情感流動也是著重鋪陳的部分,算是自己滿喜歡的篇章。239Please respect copyright.PENANAVFn7lmL6VB
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作者的話:
這部作品是個預估超過百萬字的大長篇,開篇到現在快滿四個月,現在也還在連載中,而整個過程心情其實還滿起伏的。所以發上創挑,也算是想找人聊聊一些遇到的瓶頸吧。
其中感受最深的,就是發現自己原本享受的寫作,一旦放上平台後,便開始不由自主被數據影響。不論是觀看數一路的起起伏伏,或者讀者退讚導致的低潮,都讓我覺得自己需要找回當初寫作的初心,面對這篇仍在連載的文,需要重新檢視一下自己目前寫文的狀態,因此厚著臉皮來請求一些意見。
不論是指教或批評都很歡迎!現在的狀況算是稍微有點迷惘,如果能讓我知道哪裡可以改進或努力那是再好不過了!
最後著重感謝題主舉辦這個創挑,你們是每位只能默默耕耘無法發起的生產者的福音!
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