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某天醒來發現,168Please respect copyright.PENANAmmJxueqTJe
自己不但穿越到168Please respect copyright.PENANA12J5WoutOV
有著神奇力量的魔幻世界,168Please respect copyright.PENANAOSYC1Vvvk2
身邊甚至有數位美男相伴,168Please respect copyright.PENANAdgB6G56r9I
每位都還可遠觀也可褻玩,168Please respect copyright.PENANAMS8DV3HJS8
這樣的奇遇你覺得如何呢?168Please respect copyright.PENANArqVCy1bhb1
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殷璃覺得──簡直糟透了!168Please respect copyright.PENANAlqveWv2eXO
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她不過是睡了一覺,168Please respect copyright.PENANAjbzZN0ANFB
到底跑到了什麼莫名其妙的地方?168Please respect copyright.PENANADytYfegE0Y
還她原本很樸素很普通的生活好嗎!?168Please respect copyright.PENANAWjMMRbfemw
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美男養眼歸養眼,168Please respect copyright.PENANASGkQUYf0Ud
好吃也確實……咳咳咳咳!168Please respect copyright.PENANAJJft9UnYu6
但總之她要求退貨!168Please respect copyright.PENANAnfayUT76vA
不知道強迫推銷是可以報警的嗎?168Please respect copyright.PENANAf7OiQd8yQg
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什麼?168Please respect copyright.PENANAfCXyAHxK3s
不乖乖推倒或被美男推倒會死??168Please respect copyright.PENANAFhzTQXyKQd
而且推得不夠多也會死???168Please respect copyright.PENANAn2WZSHjOZA
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這哪裡是什麼異世界168Please respect copyright.PENANAn5LMljvMG8
根本是強迫客人吃霸王餐的牛郎店吧!!168Please respect copyright.PENANA721QH63LOR
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[一句話簡介]168Please respect copyright.PENANAPrIqE1igGE
情慾小白女主在異世界與多位美男吃肉談戀愛的冒險故事
#逆后宮168Please respect copyright.PENANAPSn1hjrHN3
#戀愛&情慾168Please respect copyright.PENANAoIdPgV6RPe
#架空異世界168Please respect copyright.PENANABAhod4lIN9
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作品連結(成人向閱覽注意):
穿越後綁定了六個老公168Please respect copyright.PENANAiXlI0MGC4K
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最喜歡的篇章:
文章的 2-17 ~ 2-20 是女主第一次嘗試三人行的部分,有努力描繪出房事新手需要突破價值觀去嘗試新事物的心境,以及那種對未知的刺激又怕又期待的感覺,當然情慾和情感流動也是著重鋪陳的部分,算是自己滿喜歡的篇章。168Please respect copyright.PENANAvHVuX1d04G
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作者的話:
這部作品是個預估超過百萬字的大長篇,開篇到現在快滿四個月,現在也還在連載中,而整個過程心情其實還滿起伏的。所以發上創挑,也算是想找人聊聊一些遇到的瓶頸吧。
其中感受最深的,就是發現自己原本享受的寫作,一旦放上平台後,便開始不由自主被數據影響。不論是觀看數一路的起起伏伏,或者讀者退讚導致的低潮,都讓我覺得自己需要找回當初寫作的初心,面對這篇仍在連載的文,需要重新檢視一下自己目前寫文的狀態,因此厚著臉皮來請求一些意見。
不論是指教或批評都很歡迎!現在的狀況算是稍微有點迷惘,如果能讓我知道哪裡可以改進或努力那是再好不過了!
最後著重感謝題主舉辦這個創挑,你們是每位只能默默耕耘無法發起的生產者的福音!
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