No Plagiarism!RrE4sSpYDrdFnFKRQLzhposted on PENANA 嘗試下特別挑戰,複習一部很久以前寫的作品,回顧了十話。8964 copyright protection155PENANAKYiPKFzhvg 維尼
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特別挑戰II8964 copyright protection155PENANA3jMN2RqQzJ 維尼
1.贅字冗詞8964 copyright protection155PENANAdtxpK27Wi2 維尼
- 總結以下幾點:8964 copyright protection155PENANAP1bMsrOMtk 維尼
“了”8964 copyright protection155PENANAjBhOEEBDdN 維尼
- “了”字出現的頻率,多到令人髮指,大概每句一至三個“了”,差點以為自己是“了”的孩子。經朋友提醒才發現,原因是無意識下誕生的產物 _(√ ζ ε:)_8964 copyright protection155PENANAv2E0tAdXEV 維尼
- 自那之後,寫文都會注意“了”字,控制使用它的欲望。8964 copyright protection155PENANAwhqBLHVBFI 維尼
“一”8964 copyright protection155PENANAYlwNH5anWY 維尼
- “一”字出現不多,原因其一跟WIKI上歐化中文提到的相同,其二非中小學語文老師莫屬XD。記得語文課練習,就是要這樣寫。8964 copyright protection155PENANAiq3ZmUFX7h 維尼
- 看了WIKI歐化中文才發現……改了改了了改了了了。8964 copyright protection155PENANAoGHfZDW0bK 維尼
“的”“地”8964 copyright protection155PENANAyY3Gfpytu0 維尼
- “的”“地”同樣,學校教授不少「○○+地,●●+的」,不用就扣分XDDD。讀某些小說和報章,每個形容詞、每句都工整得如出一轍。就算讀完會有閱讀障礙,腦子卡死,也覺得一流小說家都這麼寫文XD。(使用次數不比我的“了”字少XD)8964 copyright protection155PENANAklZ8Z6XNKV 維尼
- 不再用的原因是,別說讀者,自己寫抑或看,都是折磨。8964 copyright protection155PENANAGgFesa53ID 維尼
- 很久以前買了本國內翻譯的《金閣寺》-三島由紀夫,打開一看裡面全是的,看了半頁就把書燒了。8964 copyright protection155PENANApBdtttNtFZ 維尼
“應該”“覺得”“認為”……8964 copyright protection155PENANA0QamUtiuRf 維尼
- 又是受學校迫害,說寫議論文要用這些詞,不能讓人覺得你不夠客觀,未論述完就肯定假設的論點。8964 copyright protection155PENANA65A3BXHZyp 維尼
“然後” “就是”“雖然”“但是”“如果”“現在”……8964 copyright protection155PENANAjPpWWP1ThU 維尼
- 這些就不能怪老師XDD (可惡!(・`ω´・)),算一種生活陋習。平日看到人緊張,就說然後然後、但是但是、雖然雖然,說多就把生活融入寫文,很多但是後面又但是,然後再然後。8964 copyright protection155PENANA897mS4t9vn 維尼
- 連自己都感到煩,努力改正ing。8964 copyright protection155PENANAWJXbF5223N 維尼
語意重疊8964 copyright protection155PENANAabsOpNE18h 維尼
- 舊作常有的事,例如“我”和“了”在一段中重覆又重覆(表達了我!就別再我我我!)8964 copyright protection155PENANAVpZDum7q1j 維尼
- 同一句重覆說兩次,例如:“這棵通天大樹有很多房間,很多房間在通天大樹內。”???(自己都看不懂( •́ὤ•̀)8964 copyright protection155PENANAugz6Fq2gPw 維尼
- 同一個詞在同一句裡出現兩至三次,例如:“這個森林是一個非常危險的森林。”???(我有病 (´ー`)8964 copyright protection155PENANAhvwhKtmwRt 維尼
- 語意重疊的問題,找不到確切原因,最大可能是我腦子有問題。8964 copyright protection155PENANAyAnPivAKZ6 維尼
- 最近語意重疊問題有洞少,努力改正ing。8964 copyright protection155PENANA86j0iLsBSO 維尼
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2.錯別字8964 copyright protection155PENANAdXh5iYqlN8 維尼
舊作十篇裡找出的錯別字,相信不會有人錯這些字。錯要認,在下面列出來給大家恥笑(因輸入法問題的錯字不列出來)。前為錯字,後為正字。8964 copyright protection155PENANAEti400tSGs 維尼
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“好捧”“好棒”8964 copyright protection155PENANAdW3rNFQF8K 維尼
- 這人好奇怪,捧棒不分……8964 copyright protection155PENANATx1hSDIJFm 維尼
“迷”“謎”8964 copyright protection155PENANAI5CNhENK80 維尼
- 你真謎人(శωశ)8964 copyright protection155PENANAv37xQnDS0d 維尼
“火炎”“火焰”8964 copyright protection155PENANAwFBTZH1QMT 維尼
- 焰熱?(‾◡◝ )8964 copyright protection155PENANAqeAPVNyIg2 維尼
“檔住”“擋住”8964 copyright protection155PENANA8cyniIOCcE 維尼
- 部首不分……( ˘•ω•˘ )◞⁽˙³˙⁾8964 copyright protection155PENANAH2VKBewPQj 維尼
“帶”“戴”8964 copyright protection155PENANAHwvY9TI0d5 維尼
- 記得以前我字典裡沒有戴這個字,全都用帶。8964 copyright protection155PENANANhONGf76Hq 維尼
“份”“分”8964 copyright protection155PENANAblxT5WHY5a 維尼
不必說了……8964 copyright protection155PENANAgKhiKJG9Hv 維尼
“發漲”“發脹”8964 copyright protection155PENANAopwSxJnr8l 維尼
漲薪水、股票嗎?沒有!膨脹的只有身材。8964 copyright protection155PENANAboUdKniPT1 維尼
“空擴”“空曠”8964 copyright protection155PENANAh0C4pJPead 維尼
想擴哪個洞……??8964 copyright protection155PENANAyh4PX9ybnr 維尼
“籍口”“藉口、借口”8964 copyright protection155PENANAnmgg7dopCT 維尼
想要戶籍嗎?8964 copyright protection155PENANAJ3zMflu6TD 維尼
“低下”“底下”8964 copyright protection155PENANA6ndG0yzRp9 維尼
別低聲下氣!8964 copyright protection155PENANAY5Xl2R3bsy 維尼
“辦工”“辦公”8964 copyright protection155PENANACFHR4RBMiA 維尼
辦工??8964 copyright protection155PENANAWMwr00Nc94 維尼
“隊手”“對手”8964 copyright protection155PENANAbiPwhFePiZ 維尼
對手:別打!我是你隊友!!!8964 copyright protection155PENANAa9XVPsqbzP 維尼
“遇…遇…”“越…越…”8964 copyright protection155PENANAEUdKn68OGF 維尼
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“無可耐何”“無可奈何”8964 copyright protection155PENANAcLiJxpCC0v 維尼
男人:試試我的耐力,如何?(っ●ω●)っ8964 copyright protection155PENANAFqbh5kqgSy 維尼
“不詳之兆”“不祥之兆”8964 copyright protection155PENANAngw0Ih4rty 維尼
好像可以XDD8964 copyright protection155PENANA5aJwPjRxc6 維尼
“眼框”“眼眶”8964 copyright protection155PENANANuhLmIkXcJ 維尼
你眼睛是戴上去的(΄◞ิ౪◟ิ‵)?8964 copyright protection155PENANAN0RU2Z5ytF 維尼
“與期”“與其”8964 copyright protection155PENANAWwwr6WJKMJ 維尼
預先期待?8964 copyright protection155PENANACDAb64aX6L 維尼
“哪”<->“那”8964 copyright protection155PENANAzTxnXlv4cz 維尼
以前全都用那,為表達清楚,現在會用分開用。8964 copyright protection155PENANAobsNrc3yIc 維尼
好像說“哪”是近代造字,有大神說說嗎?8964 copyright protection155PENANAPaqMUO0NBS 維尼
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- 以下是我很懶,想改又不想改。互通的字:8964 copyright protection155PENANAbbLXiK5EPD 維尼
“什麼” <-> “甚麼”8964 copyright protection155PENANADbdvAjNemn 維尼
“裡” <-> “裏”8964 copyright protection155PENANAoLphHQLSev 維尼
“着” <-> “著”8964 copyright protection155PENANAvNHiqrYVtk 維尼
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- 以前寫完不會核對,造成錯字不斷,重寫後,發現錯字多到離譜,會用檢查工具XD。錯字檢測會用兩個檢測工具8964 copyright protection155PENANAjsA0Cy0OSt 維尼
- 一個是大陸的網絡小說網頁「書旗小說」(好像要實名):https://www.shuqi.com/8964 copyright protection155PENANABQfSt00xwz 維尼
- 主要測錯字和少許贅語。我試過「的地得再在」混淆的也能測,用來快速判別錯字堪用。8964 copyright protection155PENANASn4ZIziRsZ 維尼
- 另一個是繁簡轉換:https://www.ifreesite.com/gbk-big5-gb2312-utf8.htm8964 copyright protection155PENANAf3qKnJBHRF 維尼
- 繁簡轉換後有機會誤判。8964 copyright protection155PENANANeAlqOKJIp 維尼
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3.代名詞8964 copyright protection155PENANAjKuF0a6vQW 維尼
- 我不懂主謂賓定狀補(考試偷看隔壁)……請放過我(´◓q◔`),我下去督督好了。8964 copyright protection155PENANA84yVqKiBJ4 維尼
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督督8964 copyright protection155PENANAbEIZUsnUZn 維尼
1. 創作:8964 copyright protection155PENANAPaJMkbw87z 維尼
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- 繼續寫《鹿尼克晨的晨曦》8964 copyright protection155PENANAkJutYbVQRp 維尼
- 其他文沒有進展。8964 copyright protection155PENANAEuJXQUocpp 維尼
- 正在練一幅畫,看看下星期能不能開始上色。8964 copyright protection155PENANA4VGtg4hqdG 維尼
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- 寫了兩萬左右,改了幾千字。8964 copyright protection155PENANAr6skTNVc8P 維尼
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- 《鹿尼克森》篇章「蘿莉控之丘」完結,本週進入「七色欠片篇」,完結後回歸日常。8964 copyright protection155PENANADIE87Zhjij 維尼
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- 練畫練到畫板會當機XD。8964 copyright protection155PENANAiKw8fFOzFi 維尼
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- 找了些墓碑做參考。8964 copyright protection155PENANAJIm3TdqihK 維尼
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- 今週暫無8964 copyright protection155PENANAjrpySc5k4i 維尼
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2.經營8964 copyright protection155PENANA5QElNDeXhC 維尼
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- 目前在ig,t什麼的放些畫畫練習。8964 copyright protection155PENANAFPDJj9xuvy 維尼
- 繼續在原創星球推推和留奇怪的言。8964 copyright protection155PENANAweVsJ3Dgqn 維尼
- 不考慮youtube,目前會選擇在B站。拍片十月再算。8964 copyright protection155PENANAtl3G7moGS6 維尼
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- 經營慘況:突破三位數追蹤,雙數讚和回應 (っ´ω`c)8964 copyright protection155PENANAII7lPnJKXH 維尼
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3.生存8964 copyright protection155PENANAsuGN6L5IqU 維尼
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- 聽雨聲,睡眠品質有改善(≖ᴗ≖๑)8964 copyright protection155PENANAkT7PaEoq46 維尼
- 手老樣子,繼續物理治療,眼睛沒問題。8964 copyright protection155PENANAFOepwDzBHf 維尼
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- 這週工作有點多,尚能應付,因為下週更多。8964 copyright protection155PENANAPduluiw0Q1 維尼
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- 暫無。8964 copyright protection155PENANA6iloRX1f7e 維尼
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- 我沒朋友 XD8964 copyright protection155PENANAnbXiu6RXPt 維尼
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希望每周都報一下,督督自己٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶8964 copyright protection155PENANAeo5CC7TojG 維尼
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