No Plagiarism!GA847xEXXyytDrzuYKg1posted on PENANA 嘗試下特別挑戰,複習一部很久以前寫的作品,回顧了十話。8964 copyright protection105PENANATPmsY5pUaF 維尼
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特別挑戰II8964 copyright protection105PENANAmFl1w1Kcr1 維尼
1.贅字冗詞8964 copyright protection105PENANAZFdN7aOagx 維尼
- 總結以下幾點:8964 copyright protection105PENANAvoAPjWA826 維尼
“了”8964 copyright protection105PENANAJHkffGnvbG 維尼
- “了”字出現的頻率,多到令人髮指,大概每句一至三個“了”,差點以為自己是“了”的孩子。經朋友提醒才發現,原因是無意識下誕生的產物 _(√ ζ ε:)_8964 copyright protection105PENANAkhThrFL7eP 維尼
- 自那之後,寫文都會注意“了”字,控制使用它的欲望。8964 copyright protection105PENANADH66DhsMTo 維尼
“一”8964 copyright protection105PENANA4CuwwGgOfB 維尼
- “一”字出現不多,原因其一跟WIKI上歐化中文提到的相同,其二非中小學語文老師莫屬XD。記得語文課練習,就是要這樣寫。8964 copyright protection105PENANAFa0QeSg0w2 維尼
- 看了WIKI歐化中文才發現……改了改了了改了了了。8964 copyright protection105PENANAgr1NFeRONk 維尼
“的”“地”8964 copyright protection105PENANA6g2b38oeM3 維尼
- “的”“地”同樣,學校教授不少「○○+地,●●+的」,不用就扣分XDDD。讀某些小說和報章,每個形容詞、每句都工整得如出一轍。就算讀完會有閱讀障礙,腦子卡死,也覺得一流小說家都這麼寫文XD。(使用次數不比我的“了”字少XD)8964 copyright protection105PENANAAGQ7dKIV0T 維尼
- 不再用的原因是,別說讀者,自己寫抑或看,都是折磨。8964 copyright protection105PENANATa8l4hKMJT 維尼
- 很久以前買了本國內翻譯的《金閣寺》-三島由紀夫,打開一看裡面全是的,看了半頁就把書燒了。8964 copyright protection105PENANATTHL7Y6jhr 維尼
“應該”“覺得”“認為”……8964 copyright protection105PENANAtUBb5mPJD4 維尼
- 又是受學校迫害,說寫議論文要用這些詞,不能讓人覺得你不夠客觀,未論述完就肯定假設的論點。8964 copyright protection105PENANANjqSFFbWNs 維尼
“然後” “就是”“雖然”“但是”“如果”“現在”……8964 copyright protection105PENANAiIiy0ceLHI 維尼
- 這些就不能怪老師XDD (可惡!(・`ω´・)),算一種生活陋習。平日看到人緊張,就說然後然後、但是但是、雖然雖然,說多就把生活融入寫文,很多但是後面又但是,然後再然後。8964 copyright protection105PENANAiCwcefJ5gw 維尼
- 連自己都感到煩,努力改正ing。8964 copyright protection105PENANAQ65orVvz1I 維尼
語意重疊8964 copyright protection105PENANAuOPma4wVum 維尼
- 舊作常有的事,例如“我”和“了”在一段中重覆又重覆(表達了我!就別再我我我!)8964 copyright protection105PENANAT0LK3NIZIo 維尼
- 同一句重覆說兩次,例如:“這棵通天大樹有很多房間,很多房間在通天大樹內。”???(自己都看不懂( •́ὤ•̀)8964 copyright protection105PENANA4ysR3FF0Qs 維尼
- 同一個詞在同一句裡出現兩至三次,例如:“這個森林是一個非常危險的森林。”???(我有病 (´ー`)8964 copyright protection105PENANAjwTyCcioZ4 維尼
- 語意重疊的問題,找不到確切原因,最大可能是我腦子有問題。8964 copyright protection105PENANAyRJyxU59AC 維尼
- 最近語意重疊問題有洞少,努力改正ing。8964 copyright protection105PENANAr8QBw5WRxU 維尼
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2.錯別字8964 copyright protection105PENANAZqt8WWN8Ve 維尼
舊作十篇裡找出的錯別字,相信不會有人錯這些字。錯要認,在下面列出來給大家恥笑(因輸入法問題的錯字不列出來)。前為錯字,後為正字。8964 copyright protection105PENANA98QdGlnRgC 維尼
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“好捧”“好棒”8964 copyright protection105PENANAdEGWJelovC 維尼
- 這人好奇怪,捧棒不分……8964 copyright protection105PENANAQKyMQQDeBt 維尼
“迷”“謎”8964 copyright protection105PENANAIqNFfT7tZ2 維尼
- 你真謎人(శωశ)8964 copyright protection105PENANAlLYyyWclZm 維尼
“火炎”“火焰”8964 copyright protection105PENANA6bdUfsHTuS 維尼
- 焰熱?(‾◡◝ )8964 copyright protection105PENANALUiUXIqKoE 維尼
“檔住”“擋住”8964 copyright protection105PENANAizIaddgkfq 維尼
- 部首不分……( ˘•ω•˘ )◞⁽˙³˙⁾8964 copyright protection105PENANA61MeoOkH1j 維尼
“帶”“戴”8964 copyright protection105PENANAewRIsX0tKT 維尼
- 記得以前我字典裡沒有戴這個字,全都用帶。8964 copyright protection105PENANAzY0XOqtjiM 維尼
“份”“分”8964 copyright protection105PENANAkWRD22Hq4i 維尼
不必說了……8964 copyright protection105PENANAoJXD8jZCNm 維尼
“發漲”“發脹”8964 copyright protection105PENANAjUEkRZyvjR 維尼
漲薪水、股票嗎?沒有!膨脹的只有身材。8964 copyright protection105PENANAynUTsWyeui 維尼
“空擴”“空曠”8964 copyright protection105PENANAgkGBKHBEwi 維尼
想擴哪個洞……??8964 copyright protection105PENANAp5WsOBHzcT 維尼
“籍口”“藉口、借口”8964 copyright protection105PENANApZqpJ01R8x 維尼
想要戶籍嗎?8964 copyright protection105PENANA0mpqxblLro 維尼
“低下”“底下”8964 copyright protection105PENANAvcwtzMJdTS 維尼
別低聲下氣!8964 copyright protection105PENANAb0QTNrEznv 維尼
“辦工”“辦公”8964 copyright protection105PENANA4bB747bdSN 維尼
辦工??8964 copyright protection105PENANAl8k7Vs9GNx 維尼
“隊手”“對手”8964 copyright protection105PENANAk3hCMlV2qX 維尼
對手:別打!我是你隊友!!!8964 copyright protection105PENANAsqTUQJQtiG 維尼
“遇…遇…”“越…越…”8964 copyright protection105PENANALbotNRhvhi 維尼
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“無可耐何”“無可奈何”8964 copyright protection105PENANAojOqn5oogI 維尼
男人:試試我的耐力,如何?(っ●ω●)っ8964 copyright protection105PENANAWQKgMVM5T1 維尼
“不詳之兆”“不祥之兆”8964 copyright protection105PENANATTK3hhPb3A 維尼
好像可以XDD8964 copyright protection105PENANAgPmhkbKXrZ 維尼
“眼框”“眼眶”8964 copyright protection105PENANAqmTOJ22jwZ 維尼
你眼睛是戴上去的(΄◞ิ౪◟ิ‵)?8964 copyright protection105PENANAaP5Vl1f6hC 維尼
“與期”“與其”8964 copyright protection105PENANAFLPN7Vy6vC 維尼
預先期待?8964 copyright protection105PENANA3aVyZOZ1j2 維尼
“哪”<->“那”8964 copyright protection105PENANAIAv8GBCjRj 維尼
以前全都用那,為表達清楚,現在會用分開用。8964 copyright protection105PENANAjCW94PPf94 維尼
好像說“哪”是近代造字,有大神說說嗎?8964 copyright protection105PENANAs0XenegS4e 維尼
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- 以下是我很懶,想改又不想改。互通的字:8964 copyright protection105PENANAsoHe8SjIln 維尼
“什麼” <-> “甚麼”8964 copyright protection105PENANAeWjRnPGXFb 維尼
“裡” <-> “裏”8964 copyright protection105PENANA1MuFnFT6Dh 維尼
“着” <-> “著”8964 copyright protection105PENANAh0SjjYP70O 維尼
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- 以前寫完不會核對,造成錯字不斷,重寫後,發現錯字多到離譜,會用檢查工具XD。錯字檢測會用兩個檢測工具8964 copyright protection105PENANAt2fYEYkvu4 維尼
- 一個是大陸的網絡小說網頁「書旗小說」(好像要實名):https://www.shuqi.com/8964 copyright protection105PENANAt1ZrWykkhA 維尼
- 主要測錯字和少許贅語。我試過「的地得再在」混淆的也能測,用來快速判別錯字堪用。8964 copyright protection105PENANAFjLndn6JNM 維尼
- 另一個是繁簡轉換:https://www.ifreesite.com/gbk-big5-gb2312-utf8.htm8964 copyright protection105PENANA6Awig7M46t 維尼
- 繁簡轉換後有機會誤判。8964 copyright protection105PENANAT8UieeiiSU 維尼
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3.代名詞8964 copyright protection105PENANApep0tOYhF6 維尼
- 我不懂主謂賓定狀補(考試偷看隔壁)……請放過我(´◓q◔`),我下去督督好了。8964 copyright protection105PENANA6RPJmgTU7l 維尼
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督督8964 copyright protection105PENANAztXt8ZgBrW 維尼
1. 創作:8964 copyright protection105PENANAeA2X6x61Vn 維尼
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- 繼續寫《鹿尼克晨的晨曦》8964 copyright protection105PENANAxxVVaezfBA 維尼
- 其他文沒有進展。8964 copyright protection105PENANAwastBEA4aC 維尼
- 正在練一幅畫,看看下星期能不能開始上色。8964 copyright protection105PENANAsaPvpJZy57 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANAkq4QSvZzMD
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- 寫了兩萬左右,改了幾千字。8964 copyright protection105PENANAfOd21g78fR 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANAGLXFAfcaW2
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- 《鹿尼克森》篇章「蘿莉控之丘」完結,本週進入「七色欠片篇」,完結後回歸日常。8964 copyright protection105PENANAL3P8S1jBxx 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANAdnyvCy4bS0
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- 練畫練到畫板會當機XD。8964 copyright protection105PENANAzIxxyo4b4z 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANA3P2LL85sNF
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- 找了些墓碑做參考。8964 copyright protection105PENANASeHF1YHtG7 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANAWPaRut2M9b
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- 今週暫無8964 copyright protection105PENANAZMDfRunXMq 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANARYbF0zeKsM
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2.經營8964 copyright protection105PENANASiuXCbOEJO 維尼
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- 目前在ig,t什麼的放些畫畫練習。8964 copyright protection105PENANAwOFjRUS8K7 維尼
- 繼續在原創星球推推和留奇怪的言。8964 copyright protection105PENANABf3XsrrTjp 維尼
- 不考慮youtube,目前會選擇在B站。拍片十月再算。8964 copyright protection105PENANA6Ah8xXj4np 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANA9C2PJKUdD4
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- 經營慘況:突破三位數追蹤,雙數讚和回應 (っ´ω`c)8964 copyright protection105PENANA2uJHQPi5U0 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANAxoQ3m8ZcTY
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3.生存8964 copyright protection105PENANAl6ttXHmWBT 維尼
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- 聽雨聲,睡眠品質有改善(≖ᴗ≖๑)8964 copyright protection105PENANAUQDpXCE20o 維尼
- 手老樣子,繼續物理治療,眼睛沒問題。8964 copyright protection105PENANAnHPOmjMrg1 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANAov31IQLc1W
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- 這週工作有點多,尚能應付,因為下週更多。8964 copyright protection105PENANALhYYLhrkks 維尼
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- 暫無。8964 copyright protection105PENANA1sZzLWhMgC 維尼
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- 我沒朋友 XD8964 copyright protection105PENANAcWmnkEWRH1 維尼
109Please respect copyright.PENANARFMj454msV
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希望每周都報一下,督督自己٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶8964 copyright protection105PENANAhqo4GnFNHV 維尼
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