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小黑屋的早讀筆記第二本
ISSUE #1
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Aug 1, 2024
小黑屋的早讀筆記第二本
Author: 倒提壺
Published:
Aug 1, 2024
ISSUE #1
2024/08/01-從塔頂往下看啊！
No Plagiarism!ZI4uDeFEHmZlrA6fPqHSposted on PＥNAＮＡ

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343Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡtF8EyzCqH3

我幫人家看稿的時候，第一輪是用讀者角度去看，很多人這一關就卡死了。

創作者心中有非常宏大的故事要說，但往往注意力放在金字塔頂端。

這是身為故事創世神的特權，但被遺留在底下起點的讀者要怎麼辦？

地（背景設定）不熟還人（角色）生時，願意花時間爬上去的讀者也會變少吧？

比起曲折安排的劇情，人物要讓讀者有親近感相對是比較方便的。

343Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdDQkpQnJsO

「性格決定命運」這句話應該不少人聽過。

有時在給人寫作建議時，我會建議寫同一個事件不同人的反應，藉由了解人物的反應回推思想脈絡，這樣人物雖然還是有角色標籤，但是不會出現毫無記憶點的情況。

343Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTj9coyibkM

不過原型我覺得不等於滴水不漏的設定，反而是當事件發生時，人物的行動是基於什麼脈絡的依據。

這在人物出現反轉的時候，會影響讀者的認同感。

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小黑屋的早讀筆記第二本
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Last updated: Feb 9, 2025
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Total reading time: 38 Minutes
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