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《寂杋填詞簿 》
ISSUE #9
Author: 寂杋
《寂杋填詞簿 》
Author: 寂杋
ISSUE #9
《愚作》 | 芥田レンリ -《愚作》粵語填詞
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原曲

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《愚作》

生~鏽的血沖擦在我身  血肉似穿上重盔甲                        

心~無力浮下沉在世間  那讓我幽冷中缺氧 凍傷好嗎

等~痛感與失意抹走  困累駐足每一晚

死~離別麈俗嚥下晚餐 要讓我苦笑恰上眼     

               

遺憾我沒力氣  沒要死的勇氣

無藥可救 自作孽 習慣被遺棄      

惰性的奮鬥 你或我沒法處理

這痛苦都不過 叫我 拙作試著放棄

無聲掙扎吶喊的你 活出了我 代替自己

誰自憐自欺 誰是誰 是誰自作墓碑

                                                  

群鴉總期盼腐透的美 嘲笑我的痛悲    

全自由地想 任由你啄 

活著也視作死屍 當作盛宴

--                                                   

啊 感覺沒了吧 凝視鏡中吐出嘔吐物笑的我

幻覺已中和 從來沒我地 原來是我犯傻

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啊 如今我獨自上路 

尋覓夜深的光輝處 再走去

疑似找出心意 停駐在前路凝望去

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無聲掙扎吶喊的你 直奔向那綠信號燈

驟變成黃燈 就任由病症復生

圍觀者冷笑自作苦困 嘲笑我的抗爭                        

自殘自身 每天失意至此 活著也視作死屍嗎

活著也沒有意思 再也別見

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《寂杋填詞簿 》
Poetry
Last updated: Jul 8, 2026
Total word count: 17,187
Total reading time: 57 Minutes
Writer:
寂杋
歌詞 粵語 填詞
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