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必須和眼前這群美男們為愛鼓掌,232Please respect copyright.PENANAvD2B2zombw
否則就會小命不保?
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難道不能先從害羞地牽牽小手開始嗎?
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對這個創挑觀望好久後終於鼓起勇氣參加,232Please respect copyright.PENANAjdz9SrmJRR
雖然碼字有段時間了,但今年才開始認真寫,232Please respect copyright.PENANAXsv41L9n1X
也是六月時才成為蕉友,232Please respect copyright.PENANAW2DkpyURvi
心態上還是把自己定位為初心者,232Please respect copyright.PENANAgHR6hzSUMn
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但因為是大長篇,232Please respect copyright.PENANAwHkriCSR9b
為了鋪陳情節開頭敘事偏向緩慢,232Please respect copyright.PENANAIBUd0VU8FE
也擔心自己是否有細節太多讓讀者不耐煩的情況。232Please respect copyright.PENANAqq43aB1iv0
任何閱讀體驗或心得,232Please respect copyright.PENANAfxlo8kyPjT
都還請主辦大大和各方路人不吝點評指教 🙏232Please respect copyright.PENANAl4cXFeuQS1
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感謝這個創挑的舉辦,232Please respect copyright.PENANAOgynCahIIz
希望參加的大家至少都因為這個挑戰232Please respect copyright.PENANAPZHGnXdrxZ
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