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灰瀾鳴語（新詩集放處）
ISSUE #7
Author: 楓崎綾夢
灰瀾鳴語（新詩集放處）
Author: 楓崎綾夢
ISSUE #7
【灰瀾鳴語】青跡 【麵音白湯二週年紀念贈詩】 #長詩
No Plagiarism!AQTUixWZ4jrpjGW2rAdyposted on PＥNAＮＡ

#我知道在負面詩這部放麵音白湯二週年賀文是很奇怪

不似水澄澈

白黃色的流動在藍色電波中響徹

橙黃的暖流在白色湯底逸散

在水面下浮出的

是無法觸及的微笑

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhNncHEbDkx

卻見虛構的零與一下隱藏的

那青藍色的軌跡

藍灰色的曲流依然流淌

在藍色逕流下流淌的

卻是赤裸的鮮紅

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeUeOoLGkJM

不忍探其底

正如

我們不會把拉麵湯底喝乾    也不忍

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5bdKpSQScr

總說自己喜歡拉麵

一年卻只上幾次餐館

總說經濟能力不夠

不過自欺欺人的藉口

愛是如此混濁    正如

無法見其底的拉麵湯頭

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡV3UnLuT1Xd

就讓氣氛

在悲傷的物語中沉澱

自以為看出了灰藍下

汩汩流出的赤紅

火焰似的吶喊卻化為清流

略油膩的白湯卻洗滌過客如我

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgN7WYPZAov

「拯救」的妄言終止於嘴邊

在隱晦又直接的表述下

自明不該擅自臆測

就算似窺見了曾渴求終止的⋯⋯

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIy5l9Z3DoJ

噓⋯⋯別說了

正如那條規則

我和你的聯繫

僅只有藍色的虛構

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡiS38UABa7R

「我喜歡你」終究說不出口

但兩年的光顧

斷斷續續的    串連

似顧客與煮麵師傅的情愫

但也說不出

喜歡的是其人或其麵

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQcpKiPLR2E

無法明說

只能留下一張紙條陳述

私心在湯裡翻攪

讓浮上表面的油滴

陳述著

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡupQbUk5fVY

麵體在湯中漸糊而無能雋永

音色在時間的流淌下漸遠

白光在你臉上映上的

湯一般寄語表述著愛

523Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsms9iwLXcs

​​​​​​​#麵音白湯二週年快樂

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Last updated: Aug 31, 2024
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