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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #93
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #93
〈疼〉　作者：月穎靈
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　　主題走向（單看簡介）：愛情bl、師生類型。看了簡介才知道是ＢＬ，劇情感覺還不錯，但是作者好像都把劇情都寫光了。

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　　目前看到第５章　

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：７０％

　　流暢度：８０％

　　標點符號：７０％

　　文字美感：７０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：７０％

　　完整性：７０％

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　　評語：雖然看了簡介劇情還不錯，只是作者全放出來沒有驚喜了。

　　優點：人物描寫佳，流暢度高。

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　　吸引度：簡介出賣了劇情，因此沒有吸引到。

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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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