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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #90
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #90
《 嘿，戀愛病不輕呢？》　作者：黑靈
No Plagiarism!27uQUb2O8MvcFKT73jajposted on PＥNAＮＡ

　

　　主題走向（單看簡介）：奇幻、愛情類型。看下來很像校園日常，純友誼不存在吧。

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　　目前看到第６章　

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：７０％

　　流暢度：８０％

　　標點符號：７０％

　　文字美感：７０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：７０％

　　完整性：７０％

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　　評語：前面沒有說清楚會以為在奔跑的是男的，不知道作者是有意還是無意整體的你都是用「你」。

　　優點：整體意外的好看（可能有冰山系學長加持），讓從來不看校園愛情的我看下去了。中間忽然冒出老司機語言整個無語。

　　呃。

　　文筆偏簡潔。

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　　吸引度：對於劇情的配角開始認真吐槽了，很意外，因此有吸引到。

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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