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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #80
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #80
2045的考試變成了大逃殺？　作者：殺出血路
No Plagiarism!TdwESsiZJQgyr6aolXxTposted on PＥNAＮＡ

　

　　主題走向（單看簡介）：戰鬥、科幻類型。

　　沒有簡介。

244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5KIvkHwTqI

　　目前看到第２章244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6RKvIlxjkA

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：７０％

　　流暢度：７０％

　　標點符號：７０％

　　文字美感：７０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：６０％

　　完整性：５０％

244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO3jBJ6Je3O

244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4fd7c7cdv8

　　評語：整篇很短只有兩頁而已。這篇很明顯是中間的劇情，沒有頭跟尾。也許只是單純想讓我看這部分。244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrPfDeXc1rU

　　優點：人物情感描寫有到位，文字也豐富。244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5kjLUNiKrX

244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡshzg38b6IL

　　吸引度：有表達出主角的特色，中間的劇情女主持那邊，光靠美貌來勸說就結束試題可能性不大，不足以說服讀者，因此沒有吸引到。

　　遊戲？是指網遊類型嗎？我很少在看網遊。244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbMRAj6ak3x

244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCyveARvxfG

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
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