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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區 - 《心鏈：魔女與她的光之羽》　作者：潔爾狄 | Penana
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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #97
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #97
《心鏈：魔女與她的光之羽》　作者：潔爾狄
No Plagiarism!DAaFRn0qKy8ue1uZyXTjposted on PＥNAＮＡ

　

　　主題走向（單看簡介）：奇幻、中世紀類型。很特別的簡介，劇情可以選擇？

　　作品名字很吸引。

　　目前看到第１章　

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：８０％

　　流暢度：８０％

　　標點符號：８０％

　　文字美感：９０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：８０％

　　完整性：８０％

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　　優點：文字美感高，靜謐的氛圍感。劇情會依照選擇的不同而有不同的發展。

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　　吸引度：整體氣氛表達優美，屬於互動式劇情。這也意昧作者兩個劇情都會寫出來？很特別，有吸引到。

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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