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溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
ISSUE #95
Author: 溫水天荷
溫水天荷另類書評／創挑放置區
Author: 溫水天荷
ISSUE #95
《落日之箭—降臨》　作者：凜冬
No Plagiarism!W5zT1xgOK2Jqy9mBPC8Zposted on PＥNAＮＡ

　

　　主題走向（單看簡介）：奇幻冒險、魔法穿越、希臘神話類型。244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡlUdXjb3F2z

　　作品名字跟簡介很吸引。

　　這部作品已經看到很多遍對於封面有印象，只是都沒有點來看。最近才開始閱讀。

244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOJlVyz8nD7

　　目前看到第３章　

　　已經看到第６章

　　以比例表示整體

　　旁白：６０％

　　對話：４０％

　　排版舒適度：９０％

　　流暢度：８０％

　　標點符號：９０％

　　文字美感：８０％

　　跳脫：ｎｏ

　　深度：８０％

　　完整性：８０％

244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhBroMNitqv

244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNuIMpjKJHU

　　優點：人物刻畫細緻，流暢度、整體性高。

244Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJRcFgc0GSX

　　吸引度：設定上很用心，看得出作者有去研究過弓（個人蠻喜歡弓），排版也舒服，有吸引到。

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Last updated: Jul 9, 2026
Total word count: 15,247
Total reading time: 51 Minutes
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