《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧460Please respect copyright.PENANAWWlzHysZtX
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍460Please respect copyright.PENANARe5jP6dOvw
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)460Please respect copyright.PENANAQXtslzBCjU
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單460Please respect copyright.PENANAZJxwFYUBza
而是是人在食用時能入口即化460Please respect copyright.PENANAspAdZXcgft
460Please respect copyright.PENANAu1Ygw4Z2OT
「嘗試把心臟調慢」460Please respect copyright.PENANAd0CxxOzB20
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久460Please respect copyright.PENANAhbGPmj3tKY
使人不會因為時間的洪流460Please respect copyright.PENANAwsTo9Kcz5x
失去了炙熱460Please respect copyright.PENANAsrXy9HxFcP
460Please respect copyright.PENANAmchM70bMV2
詩名為《夏,冬眠》460Please respect copyright.PENANAKv8EFr3MXH
但夏季怎麼會有雪460Please respect copyright.PENANAMfQpARKVIO
令人加以反思460Please respect copyright.PENANAlTJUmQ8nlZ
雪季不該有的畫面460Please respect copyright.PENANAmf4wF0GXTf
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏460Please respect copyright.PENANAlaO5F0BcRZ
460Please respect copyright.PENANAe8lUUI4HzV
或許460Please respect copyright.PENANAMBhq9R7xoz
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣460Please respect copyright.PENANAFJXLuanmrg
即便是來年460Please respect copyright.PENANAqnXAoM4db8
之後的每一年都依然如此


