作品:《魚魚創挑第3期》
類型:短文、新詩
作者:PENANA各路人馬 ▶ ▶ ▶ 連結
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▌篇101 來自雪山中的雪花信82Please respect copyright.PENANAdbLYqulTNL
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANA3LtnCuaxFw
▌作者 雪姬雪月圓
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雪女原為誘惑山下,而常與辜負輕薄女子的男人報復有關。82Please respect copyright.PENANAcRfX4pzB2C
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此處,化身為一名初次戀愛般的少女,似是這名單純只為雪花蓮而來的主角,獻上了一絲好意。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMEO8Gezs2G
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當然,我覺得輕吻是否也是在考驗著男孩的一場試驗,但似乎……仍舊落入過往任何男子都會陷入的圈套之中?82Please respect copyright.PENANAHP8RMeKcaL
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正巧,男孩也住在雪村,是否會村莊時雪女卻早已在家中等候著將他變成了冰棒呢?
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▌篇102 學伴82Please respect copyright.PENANA740oUXFaLJ
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAdfyzGAjU79
▌作者 柏木葵
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有緣千里來相見,即便相隔螢幕卻能緣分巧遇。82Please respect copyright.PENANAtPLdwpT4GM
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兩人性格的冷淡,在全文中可以藉由不斷地拒絕了其餘第三者中,明顯察覺而出。82Please respect copyright.PENANAS1p86lcaur
旭陽,是率先認出了晨暖的人,而非她不可的毅力,也能在字句之間顯露而出。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMqdJBW8AVJ
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只是尾段,既然晨暖不想再高中談戀愛,卻又為何跟自己還沒相識出來的旭陽,共同約會,這是我比較想問的地方。
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▌篇103 冬夜細雨82Please respect copyright.PENANANDrTk5AgSv
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAgUOab07NjN
▌作者 東津雲
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東珒是兩人的起點,也是兩人的終點。82Please respect copyright.PENANA8UW1871Bd7
在故事中,我所期待的複合沒有到來,反倒迎來更加感傷的醒悟,但卻加強了成長的那些說不清的痕跡。82Please respect copyright.PENANAiQftveDKNL
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所謂「易得無價寶,難得有情郎。」如果說,勉強不來的感情,終究無須勉強結合,再多都只會是徒勞增加彼此的厭煩感。82Please respect copyright.PENANAhu71X2a1Km
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有好的下一站,又何嘗停留在過去的月台呢?82Please respect copyright.PENANArUewIOsaEq
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祝福她,卻也同時是在祝福自己未來即將相遇的那名有緣人。
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▌篇104 男人也期待著白馬公主82Please respect copyright.PENANAOVPzD0ALk2
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANACr2bpzBNmZ
▌作者 笑具
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失而復得,再去失去的萬惡循環,是天道不測,造化弄人。82Please respect copyright.PENANArxBgkdadTR
唯有莉莉知道,只是莉莉無奈無人知曉。82Please respect copyright.PENANAXGSlSppU4G
如果說此事發生在我們自身,那我們會選擇結束這段旅程,割捨痛苦循環嗎?82Please respect copyright.PENANAj0Ih0QtK4D
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因為知道了憶草的喜好、因為知道了憶草的狀況、因為知道了他所知道的問題。82Please respect copyright.PENANACcvokiIVAD
所以便選擇了留下。82Please respect copyright.PENANAn4yunOINK7
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我們從文字中看出了笑具大的細膩之處,想藉由不斷挑戰著重複的一道困難,卻也勇敢直往的衝勁。82Please respect copyright.PENANAYuuDIQCTA4
好比如,此刻的莉莉,深嘆一起,闔眼睜眼對著一臉疑惑的他,再次開口說道:「你好!我喜歡你,請務必和我交往!」82Please respect copyright.PENANAua4OPDUnQj
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反覆讀取文章,字句雋永,可以說是容易敲醒內心那一塊柔軟的心田。82Please respect copyright.PENANAFqCobfjezz
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PS:抱歉!!!我一開頭就看成白馬王子,差點以為是裝甲車故事(?),等到讀完才驚覺是白馬公主XDDD
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▌篇105 你這麼喜歡愛撒嬌的貓咪,會不會也喜歡愛撒嬌的我?82Please respect copyright.PENANAmz1dZcztUR
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAMjrWI4QrSH
▌作者 伍拾陸
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這般直球對決出現好結局只會在小說實現,唷...不對,這裡就是在小說裡面了,但為何沒有好結局? 82Please respect copyright.PENANAqQ5HdPK8rR
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---寂魚82Please respect copyright.PENANAVCyYLQbh7g
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以第三人稱的視角,重新檢視了這一場的即興寫生,漁夫與魚的搏鬥不在是主場秀。是牠與她的際遇,伴隨著手中隨興地勾勒佐味,亮麗的校服映襯著少女海風凌厲拍打著她飄逸地長長的髮絲。82Please respect copyright.PENANADr5U3Uatcs
<<貓,女孩,我。>>三者之間,終究沒有辦法在天平中取得平衡。如果真能的話,那便只好取下我吧。正如同喜愛撒嬌貓咪的妳,也棄下了妳對我撒嬌的選項。82Please respect copyright.PENANAjpHpYblwW6
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貓走了,妳也走了。而我的一次冬季戀歌,也隨之而去。
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▌篇106 冬季暖暖82Please respect copyright.PENANAIl7mlvZG7z
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANA2OOsduUT5W
▌作者 海風依舊溫柔♡
如詩中所提,如說冬,是個孤寂的寒冬。82Please respect copyright.PENANAiPZLxTmMcQ
藉由淡忘疼痛,那便是冷咧的風一頭灌入我至今未醒的腦中了吧。82Please respect copyright.PENANAVlpUWVegrq
成長難免如此,又何苦一再憶起。82Please respect copyright.PENANAqXB81tjni0
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她像夏季螢火飄盪,這般耀眼。82Please respect copyright.PENANA91hi1gK23x
她如春季百花盛開,如此明媚。82Please respect copyright.PENANA6Hd2f9erl7
她彷彿秋風掃過落葉,有些冷淡。82Please respect copyright.PENANAUfT7iQLXKD
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要說真像是母愛的親情,我覺得那便是更像是內心一直缺乏的避風港了。82Please respect copyright.PENANASEnZPGYSP9
直至走出後,才能知道冬才是最思念的季節了。
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▌篇107 寒夜中的溫暖82Please respect copyright.PENANAm7ray9n61v
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAc6GG71DzSI
▌作者 阿塞爾
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冬季降下的第一場雪,讓薛竣煬坐在超商不再只是孤單獨自品嘗咖啡的味道。82Please respect copyright.PENANA37WclhgNHk
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至於,加不加上糖早已不是重點。82Please respect copyright.PENANAOm5HP0j8LV
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等待的那人,終究到來。82Please respect copyright.PENANA5gEvOmVuam
即便等待了一個又一個凌晨三點的夜晚,卻在最後撐起的傘下,刻劃下所謂「復燃的爐火」。
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▌篇108 冬粉芋頭大混戰82Please respect copyright.PENANANaezzH93P6
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANApiBt5mNz7B
▌作者 夏目
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兩人小心翼翼的試探,終究難掩旁人想幫忙推進一把的想法。82Please respect copyright.PENANAN7frGJzSp7
如果是大半夜下班肚子餓看到一篇文章,肯定要口水四溢了,終究我還是忍住了。82Please respect copyright.PENANAbZtKotRyKS
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少女與少男如此純情,卻會讓人容易勾引起,自己求學時期,那位背影與之相似的人,同樣如此單純與美好時光。82Please respect copyright.PENANAftsltJoMpE
兩人後續是否真如劇情走向地交往,猶未可知,但可以知道彼此肯定是互相深深了解的一對知己。
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▌篇109 一年一次的相逢82Please respect copyright.PENANAHbAH87IuEO
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAXQdHBNH4ot
▌作者 文友
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景色敘述是那般優美,而良人金髮碧眼卻更是美豔的不可方物。82Please respect copyright.PENANAaMkThQG14j
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雖然不清楚,毒咒如何發生,以及為何彼此無法相見,卻又是在何地發現了他的初戀。82Please respect copyright.PENANAOHzw9GNfH5
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而後面故事比較曲折,讀完後仍有幾處不解,或許,不知道真正的原因,也是這篇故事迷人的地方。
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▌篇110 致已逝去的你82Please respect copyright.PENANAvBASG08mHi
▌類型 *新詩*82Please respect copyright.PENANAgD7dpOUlZ7
▌作者 櫻井美咲
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詩句中,在我生命中逝去的你82Please respect copyright.PENANA70q7DMhN1o
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在冬季應該飄零的日子中82Please respect copyright.PENANAYno9lJgkgK
它卻透過風信子飄盪著應屬永遠懷念的花語82Please respect copyright.PENANAaRj9c0cHsP
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冰與雪是這般透涼清晰,卻穿不透我和你之間的熱情羈絆82Please respect copyright.PENANA0NNwuTlXFJ
雖然,塵土之下都化雲煙仍舊撥不開偶爾憶起你的濃稠思緒82Please respect copyright.PENANAtfEClatwci
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再次問道「你還好嗎?」82Please respect copyright.PENANAcHDexDsuOU
這冬風中
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▌篇111 懲罰的獎賞82Please respect copyright.PENANAYHVXzrKGNb
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANASb040b13HI
▌作者 柳柳丁
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柳丁大的瑟瑟的功力要比起鋪敘景色的文字更為強勁呢!82Please respect copyright.PENANAWRprtiseCD
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從指尖滑落而下,直至鎖骨停留。82Please respect copyright.PENANApZqfeocbRo
但觀眾不滿足的眼角早已赤裸裸的等待著,主動滑落而下的絲袍,濕漉漉的粉潤櫻唇貼覆蓋在任時遠的因火而乾燥的厚唇上,一直之間激起更大的波濤…….82Please respect copyright.PENANA7ewY4yt22i
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抱歉,稍微克制不住了!!82Please respect copyright.PENANA7Gw6OzaEat
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說好的懲罰,就是是對男人的懲罰,還是對觀察的懲罰(??
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▌篇112 失去一切的冬日82Please respect copyright.PENANAtzY47jHA9W
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAODeMuLVlnU
▌作者 無元人
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方隸臣在告白失敗了以後,以那極盡自虐形式追尋自愛的表現。82Please respect copyright.PENANAcfyEb4tYcl
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以魚死網破,同歸於盡把自己此生所愛保留了下來,在旁人眼底,或許,人性早已扭曲抹滅,已然沒有了救治的希望。82Please respect copyright.PENANA5rJRNdfoMn
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而另一方面,卻向自己所愛表達,自己一生鍾愛獨一人的覺悟。82Please respect copyright.PENANA78kpAYqZ3C
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可嘆。人世間,卻多數時候都要以悲劇收場。82Please respect copyright.PENANAa7oR6Q2eat
我們的初戀,又有幾人是美好甜蜜的呢?82Please respect copyright.PENANAyf09LCaQtX
這個平安夜,白雪緩緩飄落在兩具血泊軀殼上。而這終究算是得到了一切,還是算失去了一切呢?
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▌篇113 冬日的醬油炒飯82Please respect copyright.PENANAMxFMiQkGSK
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANA9bcNnD7KPP
▌作者 錢飛飛
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結局意外地令我爆笑好一陣子。82Please respect copyright.PENANA2ahHLt4FWT
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原以為禿頭的刺青男人是失戀主角的人生轉涙點,卻更想不形如趁火打劫的疊加在心頭雪季的他身上。82Please respect copyright.PENANAKorvW3OESq
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而既然金錢三觀早已不正的女友,分離說不定對彼此來說都是一種解脫。你擁有不了她想要的夢想,那強迫彼此在一起,只會更附加奪走你的一切。82Please respect copyright.PENANAwCB7rzLgpT
有時候,認清現實卻也反倒是一種成長。走出陰霾,總有一日,屬於自己的幸福也會到來。
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▌篇114 儍 (上) —初嘗試言情微小說82Please respect copyright.PENANAcO9d8h2Loz
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▌作者 大道無所為 第1篇
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男孩將其年少時期奉獻給了那女孩82Please respect copyright.PENANAAqbUfmiZ4J
而近期出現的總總現象讓他內心的安全感逐漸消逝,尤以在地鐵上,此刻同時,極度相似的身影隱約地揭開他內心潘朵拉的盒子。82Please respect copyright.PENANA8M7Tz9UE2t
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而故事的結局又為何?更竟是讓我們感到一絲絲的期待,想趕緊向下看下去。
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▌篇115 儍 (下) —初嘗試言情微小說82Please respect copyright.PENANAWQCrWsratr
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAINGGKBct6V
▌作者 大道無所為 第2篇
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在下篇,故事轉折曲折。82Please respect copyright.PENANAb1t7edLHon
女孩的物慾早已遠超男孩的經濟能力,雙方觀念早已不是一個層次,即便內心彼此還深愛著對方,同樣也不行。82Please respect copyright.PENANA9Ljacc3Yvj
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彼此觀念不合適造就了今天的局面,能跨出那一步去夜店上班的那刻,身心早已不在是純淨女孩,又哪裡能有純純的愛。82Please respect copyright.PENANAWu1K4144TB
我不清楚,這算不算的上是善意的謊言。82Please respect copyright.PENANAnMlf20Fg7P
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然而,阿晨在現實面中,不僅只是逝去了愛情,更是徒然浪費了金錢與夢想。82Please respect copyright.PENANACT5GZayPY1
當然「當局者迷,旁觀者清。」陷入愛情的男孩,又豈能在當下保持理性,洞悉全局。82Please respect copyright.PENANAGqf32JqhJ8
感謝大道這篇文,讓我產生如此強烈的讀後觀。
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▌篇116 冬日的鈴聲82Please respect copyright.PENANAfShwGPyu9T
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAXaELViKj13
▌作者 茶味的貓
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兩人真摯的情感,在冬天醞釀開來。82Please respect copyright.PENANAooDJnry3kG
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冬日祭是此地的獨特文化,兩人在雪中徜徉著屬於遠距離兩地的不安心情。82Please respect copyright.PENANADYAo0FWAjZ
北極光照映在莉莉的髮絲上,美的好不勝收。82Please respect copyright.PENANAHJC9FFuqOM
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正如雪花落在里昂的賞心上,他憂愁著兩個月後將再次離去的複雜心情。
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▌篇117 於冬日盛開的流星雨82Please respect copyright.PENANAU8hFVaVync
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▌作者 夏季雨
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兩小無猜的姜子夜與許星雨,在生日這天,以流星雨陪伴下劃過一次絢麗的夜晚,星光閃耀卻沒有此刻彼此凝視著對方那般好看。82Please respect copyright.PENANAo7hf9VjTcC
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而假使她沒有對他有所情感的話,那自然是騙人的,否則便也不會陪同他來到瞭望台共賞星空遍布。82Please respect copyright.PENANAXAvwCRhoKv
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此時情境,或許無聲更勝有聲。
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▌篇118 冬與櫻82Please respect copyright.PENANAD3qbCoMKEO
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAOYjiwXWsqN
▌作者 KLC
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記憶雖已消逝,卻仍不忘諾言。82Please respect copyright.PENANAvuNFBViiJd
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萊斯特踩著冬季的落雪,再次尋覓被帶走的五年記憶,而櫻花的相伴是冬小姐緣分的羈絆。82Please respect copyright.PENANAjniEQBi9Ze
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一吻蓋上,雖然不知道還能剩下幾個五年......82Please respect copyright.PENANAJdFVoSGRw4
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但,那分愛意相信無論歷經多長時日都無法將其阻攔。
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▌篇119 獨台戲82Please respect copyright.PENANAkfaVCcSHLR
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAlW1T4ZK6cY
▌作者 清溪
▌第1篇
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我特別喜愛那一蓑煙雨任平生的無懼逆境與那分曠達胸懷。82Please respect copyright.PENANARcRxT2kvOB
咖啡店坐落在都是叢林的一隅,卻在隨著她的光臨,點綴上幾分憂愁。82Please respect copyright.PENANAsFbA5Rp9jg
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「暗戀」又如何?曾以還沒開始的結束,不也是個好結局嗎?82Please respect copyright.PENANALPdIrDgXFE
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時間凝結昇華,而友誼有時更甚過愛情。
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▌篇120 戴普加与夏提丽亚的早晨82Please respect copyright.PENANAWhcRzpEGba
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAfEAPSQB5wQ
▌作者 L_雷梦
兩人雖為師生卻又同如眷侶那般,簡單的在咖啡廳中用餐,卻能展現出內心純純的愛戀。82Please respect copyright.PENANAKzit4ZUYlW
要說只是師生普通關係的話,我可不同意。82Please respect copyright.PENANAz7a2p5bxh5
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魔法學園充滿著未知的挑戰,可僅是這番平凡的舉止,便可見出夏提丽亚絕非常人般的苦修。82Please respect copyright.PENANARk5SfcrVzH
戴普加或許是想在不過度干涉夏提丽亚的情況下,讓其成長吧。
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▌篇121 我和Sadako(貞子)小姐的聖誕
▌類型 短文
▌作者 森兔Treebbit
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我是真的差點沒笑趴在電腦螢幕前。82Please respect copyright.PENANA7nyQFv5WKr
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貞子小姐是不是忘記自己從井裡起來是幹嘛來著了,但嚴格說起來,「田中貞子」的身世,卻是無比的淒涼,在那個年代下的她竟是如此被生活給重壓的喘不過去。82Please respect copyright.PENANAFbOvL2TMQF
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如今有個人可以陪伴她,或許,也是個不錯的冬季吧?
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▌篇122 新北耶誕城的大雪82Please respect copyright.PENANAGp7VAGYbFw
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANACLkFtQ0hRp
▌作者 焙茶凍
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前世今生,因果早已注定;即便輪迴幾世,兩人終究冥冥之中注定相遇。82Please respect copyright.PENANApOcd5ky95y
前世為她,重生在孟婆湯下忘記了當時的誓言,上天是公平的,任何人都須喝下那碗忘情水。82Please respect copyright.PENANAoajgql6Y8p
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而此時,悄悄落下的雪片,多的僅是無言的重聚,雖然突破的紅色朱門而言救下了重生過後她的這條命,但我們卻不知道另一個世界的他,是否早已付出了難以支付的代價也說不然。82Please respect copyright.PENANA9bm7isCLOG
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只為了一個愛妳的理由,此後,後許餘生不見。
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▌篇123 調皮的冬日82Please respect copyright.PENANAlTSeOOLQFA
▌類型 新詩82Please respect copyright.PENANAv2NEExT4hX
▌作者 小河
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冬日是妳,而妳亦如那冬日。82Please respect copyright.PENANAEX04ZV8Lr6
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冬風裡,妳想要來場令人難以忘懷的旅途、也想著獨享屬於冬之饗宴,可最讓人悸動的尤以男女之間擁抱取暖的幸福片刻了。82Please respect copyright.PENANAacd2XNTYx3
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在這令人眷戀的冬季,無聲地畫下了幾百萬分情,譜出了幾千萬分愛。82Please respect copyright.PENANAOnLotZbgem
其實,我們早已沐浴在這片愛神的甘霖之下了,驀然回首,身在雲中卻已不知處。
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▌篇124 一池冬82Please respect copyright.PENANAdWmeYdmq23
▌類型 新詩82Please respect copyright.PENANAUWRF7xRDoK
▌作者 c.j.Vic
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以冬劃作池,是如此絢麗的譬喻。82Please respect copyright.PENANADpslKP1ke8
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前三段,以池喻風雪泛起了一絲漣漪,卻怎麼樣也無法停止早已轉動的盪樣心頭。82Please respect copyright.PENANAa0pgZzrnCU
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而雪融之際,卻道盡了落幕情懷,而以那春有百花秋有月、夏有涼風冬有雪,若無閒事掛記心頭,那可如此令人感懷的好時節。只可惜,被攪動了一池中的深水,卻怎麼樣都無法平復了滿溢而出的傷痕;而大夢初醒誰又能先察覺出愛已不在?82Please respect copyright.PENANAVdKDkKFiFV
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此刻,春暖緣盡。一心只想著再與你心頭探戈,誦著一首名為回憶的圓舞曲。82Please respect copyright.PENANAPsijT9ADxQ
低頭,卻發覺,怎麼忘記了那步伐。
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▌篇125 永不回頭82Please respect copyright.PENANAhMX4l8phNQ
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAC97y2ZNIAY
▌作者 海洋
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雖未能從文中看出,半年的感情為何令他覺得可笑,卻恐怕男孩早已動情已深,只見他獨自遠望著清秀佳人遠去的身影。82Please respect copyright.PENANAFPTxc6j1a3
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此一別,餘生不見。猶如我們的每段逝去的美好記憶,只好淺嚐著曾經的幸福。82Please respect copyright.PENANAmgMAeVRKEo
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偶然憶起,或許,仍舊有點苦澀吧。
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▌篇126 一碗來自冬天的麵82Please respect copyright.PENANAPFWuxYi3ve
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAyxvhQuF4s1
▌作者 斬盡
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快樂的幸福,像是與伴侶一同攜手努力生活,像是鍋燒意麵美味的飄香,是如此簡單。僅有我們內心,拋開貪戀癡嗔的欲情,回首皆是隨地可見的浪漫。82Please respect copyright.PENANARUSjKtBHpl
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爺爺奶奶,我想即便出生於這個世紀的我們,或許,冥冥之中他們仍舊會再次相遇,白頭偕老吧。82Please respect copyright.PENANA3n1JTvd4kg
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同時,也衷心感謝他們不計損益的為了每一位想品嘗鍋燒意麵的我們。
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▌篇127 【牽手】第一步曲: 笑話82Please respect copyright.PENANAnWZ0GMSpHf
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANA9RGR0pJHtW
▌作者 花赤兒 hanaakai
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本篇作品,男主角不斷地在心中持續與自己的對話,是個很活潑的內心小宇宙。82Please respect copyright.PENANAmnNAIY4MJR
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即便,原定計畫是想牽到女孩的手,有了遊樂園的計畫被打斷卻也能隨機應變;雖然都已能約會20次還沒牽手的程度,似乎不太像是充滿自信的他該有的可能,但確實很有趣。82Please respect copyright.PENANADwOStO47o9
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而更轉折處是愛神邱比特的笑話。82Please respect copyright.PENANAk3VyYDCxmJ
只是原先期待會有後篇,卻只剩下首部曲便斷更了,很可惜。
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▌篇128 先是國家,才是妳82Please respect copyright.PENANAQAyszZvwoL
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAliwYKdDowD
▌作者 月白狐
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簡短的敘述中,卻可以明顯感覺到前線戰場的悲壯感,與守衛國疆的使命。82Please respect copyright.PENANARMem9E0kbA
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有種東西叫做約定,我們有時候給予口頭承諾,那就是定情。82Please respect copyright.PENANAPxj5EIFTzf
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然而,在戰場最忌諱「這場仗打完,我回去就娶你。」的flag,因為通常要不就是戰死了,要不就是小美改嫁了(???82Please respect copyright.PENANA5RLfV8ZGv7
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沒關係,一千字考驗的往往是刪字,保留其最佳的語意與敘述,這很考驗功力,加油!82Please respect copyright.PENANAkBrYmXbMhA
另外就是,一開頭看到毛茸茸的腦袋,第一個直覺以為是獸人異世界(??),應該有人跟我是同樣的直覺吧?
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▌篇129 語言的溫度82Please respect copyright.PENANAkPNjkFVIPl
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAZbU6WkPweZ
▌作者 阿石先生
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透過逐漸加溫的語言,可以瞧見許瑞雪耐心地等待著詹謙誠的察覺。82Please respect copyright.PENANA9zhbiPFa7j
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原來兩人的溫度,卻也隨那日文之中,溫度的昇華,從無感冰冷轉而羞澀溫暖。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMpiRJrNl89
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一場雨、兩種心頭。愛的日文課,下課。
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▌篇130 初雪之戀82Please respect copyright.PENANAJ0qLEFhYUA
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANANpt6KAeiLF
▌作者 白浠
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等待,是件考驗男女之間,嚴肅又沉重的事情。82Please respect copyright.PENANA3DKaW3GqtK
許多人都可能會在來來往往的站台上車、下車。82Please respect copyright.PENANAI7zpucl5ZD
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一次又一次,孤單又寂寞的感覺席捲而上,我們又如何能真的初衷不變,去一股傻勁的等候著她的歸來呢?
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▌篇131 八年后的冬季恋愛82Please respect copyright.PENANA46NTuYZM6s
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAw7KIKveh21
▌作者 李精字
▌第1篇
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難以想像這會是個多麼令人煎熬的故事。82Please respect copyright.PENANAPYN0CFMV90
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再重讀了一次羽海野千花【蜂蜜與四葉草】的動畫,我腦海中也反覆憶起這個片段,如原田理花的丈夫也是在車禍中過世,而她飽受煎熬,不斷地反覆想揮手訣別世界的想法,同樣令讀者虐心。82Please respect copyright.PENANAK1e1UX2DTa
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無助、徬徨,充斥著這個獨留在世間的人。朋友的關懷,正是此時最佳的良藥。
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▌篇132 〈逃出香港番外I穿花蝴蝶〉上篇82Please respect copyright.PENANA8grNmYEqXe
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANADRfKTMPoNC
▌作者 逆流而上
▌第1篇
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優美的景色敘述,讓我閱讀間偶然沈醉在故事的情境裡。82Please respect copyright.PENANABCYq9P4LSt
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走在與原先不符期待的曼徹斯特街道,片段的字句中我聞出區穎的一絲無奈感。82Please respect copyright.PENANAr1tBwFlSlC
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尾段,突然出現的黑夏克,會讓我想去了解那是什麼生物?
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▌篇133 巧克力82Please respect copyright.PENANAV7mgSOjMsW
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAZNQRg9jPmt
▌作者 貓玄
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主廚的心美如入口即化的巧克力般,直到最後回甘,才知道他早已默默地為了多少徒弟,來奉獻自己。82Please respect copyright.PENANAzyNlYC4Tpi
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而我們的愛情呢?82Please respect copyright.PENANALTfT9RttBQ
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忽冷忽熱的戀情,就好像需要調溫的製作過程般,而每個人都有屬於自己口感的愛情巧克力。82Please respect copyright.PENANAlYx7eRo89T
但願,女子早日與自己男友修好。
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▌篇134 冬季遇见暖阳82Please respect copyright.PENANAhvUtHsNYKY
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANARdsrBzX7It
▌作者 成小子
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網路的速食愛情,給予了二十一世紀忙碌生活的人群,一道便捷的交友管道。82Please respect copyright.PENANAYqUN5InYdc
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同時,透過資訊發達的年代,交友的便利性高的同時,標準也提高了許多。82Please respect copyright.PENANA6oVfRvSePr
正如冬季帥哥,首次的網路戀愛,止於一個星期之後。82Please respect copyright.PENANAf9DiCQUZMH
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網戀,有時也會成就不少羨煞旁人的神仙眷侶,在刻骨銘心的線上約戰、在地下副本中,幻化的英雄,是如此不可言喻的經歷。82Please respect copyright.PENANAvjWmWIbHM4
但真實中,卻往往被所謂的「外貌協會」給一擊擊倒。82Please respect copyright.PENANA4oo7dKWMu2
我們應該試圖想著不去拆穿,而讓想像去醞釀下去,也許是另外一種美麗的曖昧。
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▌篇135 窒愛〔應版主要求PART2,豪車慎入(〃∀〃)〕82Please respect copyright.PENANACfgqF5bFTe
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANA0QSkB8hoef
▌作者 落花
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時隔半年再次擔任落花的短評,更是感到另一份不一樣的感覺。82Please respect copyright.PENANAM9spsJZwYq
與#84冬梅那篇比對,這期間度過了人生好幾個階段,也同時經歷了這個創作挑戰上百篇的短評,希望這次的評論能更加客觀。82Please respect copyright.PENANAsSri7XGwrj
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與前篇比對,#135窒愛著重在敘述對於兩人"鬥牛"方面的對手戲,尤以巴著籃球不斷進出籃框粗暴與挑逗對手的話語,更是讓人意猶未盡,想多看幾次秦白楓上籃的那種慾望。82Please respect copyright.PENANAoZzOiUDu93
在形容黃宣麓方面,雖有「他」這個字眼帶給我閱讀時的幾分困惑,但在言情方面涉獵多年的讀者,絕對不會在意這一點點的小瑕疵,反倒如果沒有在尾段所出現的「後框」一詞,我都覺得「他」與「她」的疑問。82Please respect copyright.PENANAlBmsnvrXxf
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...等等。82Please respect copyright.PENANAWZ9rK6hDzj
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...難道,真的是「他」。冷汗再度直流,電流直擊我內心最後的那道防線,我被破防了,是我那僅存的矜持。82Please respect copyright.PENANAjwuX5yGJ35
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鬥牛的賽事,在短篇後段,在一場次隱約又悄悄地敲響了起來,只是眾多讀者肯定想一窺究竟絕不止步於此。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMLadAWGArh
下筆於此,魚魚完全認定這篇球賽不僅有「實用」這番解析,更是有著用詞優美的美譽,至於兩人是否僅是短暫的球場上過客,我們早就不在乎了。82Please respect copyright.PENANAXteoSQGPSp
畢竟,讀者早就享受完了這篇萬用好文。82Please respect copyright.PENANAWURdqlXVbK
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期待,還能再見其他選手上場的好球賽。
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▌篇136 冬季下的相遇82Please respect copyright.PENANAh3vrBuQH9m
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAOi8GztjKcE
▌作者 李精字
▌第2篇
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命運的線(同#131篇)再次神奇地巧妙串連了起來,而停止擺動的車輪又再次轉動起來了。82Please respect copyright.PENANAkMTgGCab3n
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少年,卻也是鼓舞著自己活下去的良藥。82Please respect copyright.PENANAA3hVwX7BiB
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很奇妙吧?!有時,命裡有時終須有,命裡無時莫強求,總是這般令人感到無法言喻的飄渺感。
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▌篇137 西方情人節82Please respect copyright.PENANAmBjR57FcbQ
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAI4U6UWZ5PX
▌作者 馮子緣
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「還沒開始的結束」就是最美好的結局了。82Please respect copyright.PENANAyICiKW2qsA
女生僅只想要有個可以剎那分享心情的知心朋友,而即便是慕豪溫柔如伴侶,卻也能明白阿晴的心意,沒有死纏爛打,也沒後續的奪命連環CALL。82Please respect copyright.PENANA0kHwgGk8V4
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我喜歡這種一決勝負的感覺,絕不拖泥帶水,不耽誤別人的時光。82Please respect copyright.PENANAFFmB72CZz6
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情感戲上,阿晴與柏傑的互動,我們可以在簡短幾句中,就聞出兩人這些日子來的漸行漸遠,直至分手,實屬明確地寫出感情的描述。82Please respect copyright.PENANAh0frBAoGKy
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而有人說,分手需要三倍的時間,才能真正沖淡對於一個人的想念,至於阿晴與柏傑還會不會復合,我們並不知道,然而我們所得知的是,情人節確實不是個分手的好時節。(??)
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▌篇138 這是个玩笑的圣誕节吧!82Please respect copyright.PENANAH3SpvcDrzP
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▌作者 李精字
▌第3篇
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我本以為這會與131、136兩篇,串聯一起的冬季戀愛故事,卻反倒是篇新的故事。82Please respect copyright.PENANAk4bhPnWyyA
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雖說,有點突然之間的打鬥,卻也挺新奇的。那麼不講道理的打鬥,又那麼不講道理的成為了伙伴。
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▌篇139 醜小椏82Please respect copyright.PENANAEL59XMMhkg
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAoBnmAKOxvg
▌作者 Tey
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語意敘述、錯字及沒有排版的文,是這篇仍需要改進的地方,但整體來說故事的完整性還是能表達出來。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMHRc4ccNCv
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透過筆下刻劃出了自己的情感,結尾透過孩子第三人稱的視角發覺到了臨摹筆下的小椏,原來內心仍是暗自鬱鬱蒼蒼。82Please respect copyright.PENANAqd95w1u1De
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尤以風吹動拂面而來,卻在眾人見識不到的視角中,她捕捉到了那一絲女人的另外一面,非常可貴。
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▌篇140 最後的白82Please respect copyright.PENANAsucUBvBNTn
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAkjNiA41PEJ
▌作者 龍飲虎洨
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感謝龍飲大讓我望見了動物界(哺乳類?)的天性,那是最純真、最原始的物慾與競爭。82Please respect copyright.PENANAyhioPS4Cdm
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快速激烈的來回,母熊最後在物競天擇中,被迫無奈與異族同行,就好比倒臥在富家中的慾女(?),正也是原始的勝者為王的自然法則。82Please respect copyright.PENANAGAnDWft7XK
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而最後的白,將徜徉在時光的洪流之中,成為了下一代的養分,我們只是讀取這故事的一名讀者。82Please respect copyright.PENANASOMey2MUZy
失敗者,將被汰除。82Please respect copyright.PENANAWWs5yDUyjC
勝利者,獲得了蜜桃的果實。82Please respect copyright.PENANAQUlCK1ZuOY
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社會也同為如此現實。82Please respect copyright.PENANAvrGFoJbev3
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但我,還是覺得案情不單純…….?
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▌篇141 喜歡的人82Please respect copyright.PENANAs8zhzZMiYj
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAHKojMMVz1b
▌作者 夏初
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暗戀的心情在瑣碎平凡的日子裡,簡單的舉止卻又令人明瞭。82Please respect copyright.PENANA6LPaskht95
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許拾光嚴格來說,在求學階段,抽菸與在車上寫字等行為應該算是個屁孩的行為(意義不明?)而買了杯奶茶、等待了她就是另外一回事了。82Please respect copyright.PENANA9aXeT4I9e8
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藉由輕輕撕開了糖果的包裝,伴隨著唾液流入了喉嚨之間,我卻見到了江緣片點的細膩之處,猶如於那遲來的公車,兩人難等的明示暗戀。82Please respect copyright.PENANAjQj6l8OIhR
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下一站,逐漸通往戀人的階梯。
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▌篇142 灰色的一天82Please respect copyright.PENANAWKKONMe4QX
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAZCE1yAKCkx
▌作者 一碗周
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元宋源隻身離家來到了雪華學院就讀,也體會到了自己以外的天外世界。82Please respect copyright.PENANAdn01vXNfHi
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正如,人,如果沒有走出舒適圈,就沒法知道外面是如此競爭,現實就是這麼殘酷。82Please respect copyright.PENANAo8KCl718Pw
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同時期望,他能在下一個學期,在濃厚文化底蘊、與多元社會、豐富人文之下的英國,能劃下自己的一道新足跡。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMq3LHWtAn6
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同時,與室友的永恆羈絆。
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▌篇143 〈逃出香港番外I穿花蝴蝶〉中篇82Please respect copyright.PENANAtLzI4MVVNF
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAmtNgKRQIHP
▌作者 逆流而上
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歌曲聲再次響起。82Please respect copyright.PENANAo8GHhKoZRD
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原來黑夏克,竟是隻惡靈(?),看到這地方轉折處還有那名夾藏著刀的渣男,意外地似乎有點熱血。82Please respect copyright.PENANACeh0YQyCd9
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故事後,寫道了穿花蝴蝶的伏筆,為故事延伸下一篇的精彩開端。
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▌篇144 皇天道 番外戰記82Please respect copyright.PENANA91cvdOLAbo
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAdzLui3fN1x
▌作者 大道無所為 ▌第3篇
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科幻情景下的槍法極強的王籽與刀千轉換戲法萬千的蘿莉,在這異獸遍地的世界,卻也及時享受著兩人的殺敵美好時光。82Please respect copyright.PENANAeJ5RkcFiW9
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深情之下,將周遭的三頭變異犬全數滅殺,是否也有片點的一絲絲浪漫?82Please respect copyright.PENANApM2YG9jKo0
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灰濛雪地卻有著同樣冬季裡的愛戀,雖用科幻手法,卻在眾多的作品中有著不同的類別,是校園愛情裡面所沒有的元素。82Please respect copyright.PENANAhC9mx7ZtiX
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很是新奇。82Please respect copyright.PENANA3N6T1juYt4
也獨特。
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▌篇145 冬日的暗戀(上)82Please respect copyright.PENANAC8EkA7XIMd
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAO1a4ayUNQN
▌作者 平平
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大殿與米井原為一對彼此相熟的知己,當然要從好朋友昇華成為戀人,除了要有面對失去這個好友的風險外。82Please respect copyright.PENANAsGEDy9UdZn
另一方面,當然是勇氣居多。當然米井在被叫上了頂樓,或許,早已猜測到了某些事情準備發生,但直到發生了卻也沒料想到怎麼應對。82Please respect copyright.PENANAlCUvhhQj9Y
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男孩鼓起了勇氣,不敢告白的心情,以生日來為自己舖了條後路,確實挺明智的。82Please respect copyright.PENANAYNQX0LyYt3
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當然,勝負結果一瞬間將以打破這個不可說出口的暗戀了。
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▌篇146 冬日的暗戀(下)82Please respect copyright.PENANAJG9yxvlE5s
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAl7pHq1GUwf
▌作者 平平
▌第2篇
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米井犯了花癡這件事情,卻也是稀鬆平常的事情,別人她看不上眼,但她看眼的別人亦同沒看上她。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMzvjSjHZdT
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而人們往往瞧不見,原來,在自己的身旁的那個人才是最好的,最了解自己的。82Please respect copyright.PENANAlp6nFEfHQn
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驀然回首,那人卻在燈火闌珊處。82Please respect copyright.PENANAkSVcv49JH7
芽弰敲醒了她關鍵之處,或許,真如她所言,失去這一次,未來將再也尋覓不著也說不定。82Please respect copyright.PENANAY8XgKUZeF9
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「大殿,我......我們交往吧。」這個冬天,手心之間多出了一個自己不熟悉的溫度。竟,意外地不在寒冷了。
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▌篇147 合掌82Please respect copyright.PENANAjAbklSJ9bE
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAqD9V9mpK1T
▌作者 濁酒屋
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心不動,萬物皆不動;心不變,萬物皆不變。82Please respect copyright.PENANATJ62i4ejR8
狼神之所以為狼神,卻因其有著想幫助人們的內心,卻又不願承認罷了。82Please respect copyright.PENANAhIe3q0ABgf
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女孩的孝親方式,有違背常理藉以殺害自己母親來解脫其病患,而反遭上天降臨反殺的命運,萬物皆有其善惡倫理。
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我們無法選擇家庭,人生亦同。身為人子女,雖為出自於好意,讓母親可去黃泉路上與父親相伴,這番虔誠最終仍是打響了狼神內心的那絲絲情感,或許,一雙合掌,屹立不搖的毅力,給予牠動力也說不定。82Please respect copyright.PENANAtgdVHyPc05
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當然,不知道死後的世界,是否能與親人相聚。82Please respect copyright.PENANAFEy28altW2
但,女孩與母親皆能解脫,也說不定這算是個還不錯的結局了。
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▌篇148 階梯82Please respect copyright.PENANAe08MPy7xJs
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAjPpWkw11Lz
▌作者 Chaos
▌第1篇
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以突如其來地求婚,女生卻驚嚇地以傻笑清撇過,轉以那賣藝的情歌來掩飾自己內心的幾絲雀躍。82Please respect copyright.PENANA6WDgSvhKj6
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忙碌之間的約會。82Please respect copyright.PENANAoy5CJ8XBAB
或許,女孩只是想一個放鬆心情的平凡約會,卻反倒被男孩給嚇住了。82Please respect copyright.PENANACzkYUkiZfF
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這,確實會令人不知所措。
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▌篇149 寒假82Please respect copyright.PENANAovYCucjdzs
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAfdfJD9KXRa
▌作者 Chaos
▌第2篇
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第二篇82Please respect copyright.PENANArYmmjY6LA0
以另外一對男生、女生的不同情境來營造出男女朋友之間,尚無法再邁前一步的心聲。82Please respect copyright.PENANADT9i9a0HMS
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同樣的公園中,猶如身旁隨處可見的情侶檔。82Please respect copyright.PENANAczDCczvmas
只是,轉換了角度。82Please respect copyright.PENANAzIK1AAzQBg
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「我喜歡妳。」一句等待已久的話,另兩個人終於把情感再次昇華提升。82Please respect copyright.PENANAYojDEqDSuf
這個寒假不在冷却,而是溫和。
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▌篇150 禮物82Please respect copyright.PENANAfcBb049ytw
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANA6RVwWE3qxV
▌作者 墨云
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未能表明的曖昧時期,卻是男女之間最美的片段時光。82Please respect copyright.PENANAREPmVf8y98
女孩總是滿心期待,卻又不願真實透露的心情,是那般矛盾,但卻可愛。82Please respect copyright.PENANAvBPbcKrV5N
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毛毛蟲口味的汽水,未免太好笑了吧XDDD82Please respect copyright.PENANAHCyJrGfvJV
不知道喝起來像是甚麼飲料的口感,如果可以幫我喫一杯吧,我才不要什麼正常的紅茶(???82Please respect copyright.PENANAe05SKVcDSl
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當男孩取下了那份巧克力,同時,也繼續畫下那緣分,期望兩人可終究走進心房,喜結連理,在天化作比翼鳥。
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▌篇151 賣藝82Please respect copyright.PENANAP0YQtGgeSk
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAzCv8eroUvS
▌作者 Chaos
▌第3篇
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天啊!!!是牙彈吉他的G.M.C,根本回憶殺。82Please respect copyright.PENANA7W88yxSeuV
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(......不小心顯露出年齡了><)82Please respect copyright.PENANAl2O9Iys12U
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第三對情侶,卻預料不到竟是三部曲中的公園演奏者,而有別於驚喜、膽怯,這裡更多了點暗戀與曖昧的心思,卻未料想女孩會在歌唱一刻,如來閃光乍現,閃耀著如男孩眼中最明亮的那顆星星。82Please respect copyright.PENANAdpFAqz9FOi
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同樣,也令平行時空中,男孩許下了一輩子的婚姻承諾、及神仙羨煞的愛戀告白。82Please respect copyright.PENANAFLYSstMYbh
預祝,他們都可攜手共同度人生過數十個的暖冬。
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▌篇152 憂鬱的櫥窗模特兒82Please respect copyright.PENANAa8oZuoa7ts
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAlI0rxhbQaV
▌作者 蕗舟Lunoe
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擬物為人,卻不料真的是人,可把我驚呆了。82Please respect copyright.PENANAG2vZRlp3w5
文末的轉變,十分有勁,卻有一種鶴立雞群的創新感。82Please respect copyright.PENANAdLlFAivJNs
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冬季,自古便是憂鬱的季節,即便在世界某一處的角落,我們也沒法躲避那世間的萬有定律。82Please respect copyright.PENANArjKXNnO8Zi
而蕗舟大藉由假人模特兒的引頸期盼,來襯托出等待著一整個冬季未到時的良人皈依。82Please respect copyright.PENANALiQiwmECcD
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終究,那個男人還是回來了。82Please respect copyright.PENANAdPF7beFpDH
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銀色喜悅,銀色象徵著高貴、永恆,卻如同我們每個人心中,不可取代的純潔,想展現出的特質。82Please respect copyright.PENANAQ4ZupaHgm6
然而,眾多人群來來往往,卻無一人可識破真人的所扮演,而如同世俗,人們往往只看表面,卻無法深入思索真實的涵義。82Please respect copyright.PENANARWiJAibIAv
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但願,此刻的我,也能尋覓到內心真正的期望。
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▌篇153 聖誕節的某日82Please respect copyright.PENANAqLbA38MZXJ
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANA4ieH8ojksr
▌作者 死神 黑崎一森
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從文中可以感受到那股單純的戀愛感官,而稚嫩卻又可以表達出內心的情感。82Please respect copyright.PENANArNfg0n75Y9
如是對話中,可以加點情緒,可以加以描繪情景會有意想不到的效果唷。82Please respect copyright.PENANAtM2xlS7anv
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PS 另外關於文筆是可以藉由多寫、多看,自然而然便會有層次上的提升。
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▌篇154 笑面82Please respect copyright.PENANA9DSAQBf1GE
▌類型 *新詩*82Please respect copyright.PENANAbBIwiQT8L9
▌作者 虛冲
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馬特峰的巍峨確實壯闊的令人為之讚嘆,猶如一高冷難近的美艷女子,即便座落於狹長的阿爾卑斯山一隅,世人也能輕易的尋覓中「她」來,正是獨特的皚皚白華飄著雪的盈盈地笑靨。82Please respect copyright.PENANAUU6KbFdqVd
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在那寒風刺骨的日子裏,深嘆口氣。82Please respect copyright.PENANAAgUzFt0gpR
豈料腦中揮之不去的都仍是妳的畫面。82Please respect copyright.PENANApGoo6nWhzI
只是日日夜夜,歲月過去,走盡千萬里。82Please respect copyright.PENANAhGl0OODqhg
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百忙之中,即便偶然一瞥妳過往相印片,才知道我倆已與過去的純真走的漸行漸遠。82Please respect copyright.PENANAzYL2kwLYHM
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再次回頭品嘗著沖虛的詩,此刻,我迷醉於這完美排列的字句組合與尾聲奇妙安排,竟可如此這般美的堪比句中那笑顏。82Please respect copyright.PENANAoX3y4ID3iE
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「青春,總是留下著那明媚的憂傷。」
1 星期前
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▌篇157 冬、愛、文字(上)82Please respect copyright.PENANAscAzOQh88K
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▌作者 氦氣
▌第1篇
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起因於本作品,有區分成上、中、下三部曲的緣故,我反覆地看過了好幾遍,才決定了如何下評語,首先,我想先針對第一部曲的分布進行賞析:82Please respect copyright.PENANAceoh056ukD
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冬戀湖,以冬季落雪而湖在一絲泛起漣漪下使人容易感受眷戀。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMkSxpvMnCt
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年少輕狂的青澀兩人是各自懷著心思卻不易說出口的簡單心思,在雪景的點綴下,以「冬」字使得兩人產生了故事通篇的羈絆,男孩仍只在意著內心的理想卻沒有更多的心思。82Please respect copyright.PENANAsPmnouHRxV
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在第一篇裡,魚魚覺得在景色的形容上如果可以把關於景色的形容,能夠佈置更多在男孩、女孩之間的互動,會讓首篇給讀者更多的吸引,轉折部分稍偏弱些,但卻也不錯的給與了伏筆。
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▌篇158 冬、愛、文字(中)82Please respect copyright.PENANAm2Z78QekPs
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▌作者 氦氣
▌第2篇
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第二篇描述著男孩即將遠去的複雜心思,提起勇氣宣告著內心獨白,與不確定的心思,就深怕冬戀女孩將在自己的世界,此後,餘生不見。82Please respect copyright.PENANAw7gIyrONvT
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卻也未料想,女孩早已在幾年前就已暗自定下了心意,撥開那絢麗奪目的棕色髮絲下,那雙明媚墨黑靈眸子早已將眼前的他深刻烙印在瞳孔之中。82Please respect copyright.PENANAxKQETbEUJR
即便,再遙遠只要心是在一起的,路,依然會在終點平行交會。82Please respect copyright.PENANAZqi27k5hrP
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雖說,在男孩的行為上,實屬私心佔有,但一方面卻有活現出男生的主權宣示:「妳就是我的。」那種給女孩的信任感。82Please respect copyright.PENANAYxLy7fLtEJ
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至於,此去會多久歲月並未點題,卻早已沒留下了兩人的遺憾,更多的我覺得反倒是女孩的寂寞。
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▌篇159 冬、愛、文字(下)82Please respect copyright.PENANAzXJ8tM2FkK
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▌作者 氦氣
▌第3篇
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末篇,以年邁的疾病纏身刻畫出女孩的不離不棄,更是難得可貴看出,通篇都是女孩無謂犧牲的偉大辛勞。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMHCyECA1fb
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冬戀湖的廟神,將兩人緣分再次相繫相聯,雖牽起了忘記了自己的那名男人的手,卻仍堅定自己的內心的想法。以冬,再次畫下落幕。82Please respect copyright.PENANAG72DHa2D8S
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點評至此處,實在不忍想碎嘴一番。那男孩,丟下一句拋棄人家,然後一場大病要女孩照顧終生,這更多的是惡劣龍傲天男主嗎🤧82Please respect copyright.PENANA9hR2d1RSn5
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另外就是有幾點建議:82Please respect copyright.PENANAj16QoGzr7B
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1.三篇區分,上、中、下,建議別分成第三人稱、第一人稱混用寫文,容易造成讀者混亂。82Please respect copyright.PENANAmREA74DGyQ
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(對!!那個讀者正是我!!)82Please respect copyright.PENANAe39ImCTGjV
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2.形容某個特定的景物時候,冗字稍多,仍有改進空間,有時候這部分是需要一些適當的點綴即可的,因為你故事的主角不是它們。82Please respect copyright.PENANA4TK1eYP2jU
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3.女主角的思維可以再更細膩些,如多上一些自己的小脾氣等等,畢竟,上中下篇以三篇為起承轉合,應當可以更好發揮。82Please respect copyright.PENANAuNdBesVazO
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以上。
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▌篇160 〈逃出香港外番I穿花蝴蝶〉下篇82Please respect copyright.PENANA4zO7tZBrmQ
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▌作者 逆流而上
▌第3篇
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竟還有技能的設定嗎?82Please respect copyright.PENANAIfcvQD7Gz6
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其實透過片段,我能明顯感受到這部作品用詞非常優美,故事敘述也到位,雖然節錄中段的地方,我仍舊銜接不太起來,而我卻可在女孩飛去香港的同時,剎那明白了逃出香港的意思。82Please respect copyright.PENANAUoDovSNwvT
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感謝逆流大的參賽,也分享了外傳。
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▌篇161 冬……嚴冬82Please respect copyright.PENANA8smQmduNqS
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▌作者 楚聞歌
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楚聞歌大的詩中,雖無法直接判明男孩是否為過往的交往對象,抑或只是暗戀的男孩。82Please respect copyright.PENANAUZGHzsEgON
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然而三段台北,三種情境。82Please respect copyright.PENANAraRzRU1s9X
第一段,訴說著渴望在車水馬龍的大台北,望見女孩的心思。82Please respect copyright.PENANANPyWHAfmYJ
第二段,期待予以實現,在陰鬱蒼蒼的大台北,僅只期盼著妳的轉身驀然回首處與妳相見、相繫。82Please respect copyright.PENANADPAyuaPewS
第三段,大男孩之間的互相碰撞,夢破碎了,思念斷了線,在這一刻,冷漠離去。82Please respect copyright.PENANAYbinyPLaQS
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增溫,高溫,冷卻。三種心情,多種轉折,只為再次見到妳。82Please respect copyright.PENANAQ5dTIKKJ3Q
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如此心情,誰又可知?今晚就讓他在寒冬中獨自買醉吧。
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▌篇162 北極光82Please respect copyright.PENANAUDgA5wFUSJ
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▌作者 白無常
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男孩在她與世別離後的最後一哩路,仍舊不忘那個約定,獨身前往了冰島刻畫下如天塹遙遠般的誓言結尾。82Please respect copyright.PENANAdAsnChPYRj
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令我想起了十前年,還在求學階段時候,一部岡田和人所著【思春期誘惑】,男主角在睡袋與女主角胡桃望著浪花,結束了人生如此短暫的生命盡頭。同樣的感傷,同樣的冬季,不同樣的悲傷。82Please respect copyright.PENANAOFeCHAxKxG
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三年時光,卻早已萌生了三世情緣,就讓傷痛逝去,同樣帶著重病的糾纏一起走。82Please respect copyright.PENANA8wD8pr1NCc
北極光下,那戒指銘記著兩人今生的無緣與續緣。
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▌篇163 塔林的雪夜82Please respect copyright.PENANAHRYNDotEgx
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▌作者 flyfish愤怒
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首先感謝飛魚的地理知識給我了新的一課。82Please respect copyright.PENANAB7Akb0wcGl
這位於愛沙尼亞極北的城鎮,塔林。82Please respect copyright.PENANAGhc0kknhGn
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上網爬了一下文,看了一下街道城鎮,確實非常美麗且滿富歐洲建築的氣息,一別於亞洲地區出生的我們,即便只有出國過四次的我,也不過在東北亞、東南亞走過。82Please respect copyright.PENANArCbf9nmHOa
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其實,有朝一日,我也期待著一訪這神秘面紗,與曾經獲選歐洲文化之都的盛名。想必此生便可長存於記憶中。
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▌篇164 冬天予你82Please respect copyright.PENANAdBbGxbZNG3
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▌作者 長月生
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炫麗雪花結尾,是如此柔美如歌。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMVA1ctsdOP
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男孩女孩這般青澀的愛情看地令人欣羨,在細雨之下,彼此的擁抱簡單地表述了兩人情感。82Please respect copyright.PENANADvSViRt7JK
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即便倒數三十秒後,迎接不到雪片,卻也仍可持續得到是覆蓋嫩唇的擁吻,正如同長月生筆下那未盡的故事,女孩在冬季裡想予以男孩的魔力光瓣。
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▌篇165 外套82Please respect copyright.PENANAUHkPeoonD6
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▌作者 AnTeD
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跟隨著的故事開頭,都快被故事主角的他,那絲絲片點細膩的舉止,差點沒要做死自己的衝動了。82Please respect copyright.PENANArZKwIgGH04
然而,作為首次約會的她更是思慮成熟不已,僅只作為冰凍發寒的手掌都尚可觀察入微,如此相伴,可謂夫復何求?82Please respect copyright.PENANA9p0wG3zbpa
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男女在戀愛中所在意的角度本就不同,而在AnTeD大的作品中,更可感受到景色間的優美、兩人間美好的細膩互動,皆可輕易波動了正在欣賞這篇文章的我們,是如此暖和,是否這件外套遞給的已非男主,而是我們呢?82Please respect copyright.PENANAJjaYPqbnkd
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後續,兩人是否走下去不得而知,但可以知道的是,男生的心中此生怕是再難以忘懷這場約會了。
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▌篇166 天橋下的祈禱82Please respect copyright.PENANAzYwN3EjKh2
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▌作者 墨云
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以來了破題,外加第一段的迴文方式,去襯托寒霜擬人般悄悄佈滿是他的容顏,以雪再次劃破天際。82Please respect copyright.PENANAjWBrywEAaR
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天橋,也許正是內心的一道避風港,而那毯子卻缺少了那名祈禱之人的共暖,致感受不到溫煦的氣息。82Please respect copyright.PENANACXpUFVdMDi
藉以祈禱來想妄著內心之人,正如輕輕地走過那康橋底下,只盼望這波寒冷尚未結束之前,見到期盼知人輕輕地對著他再次招手。82Please respect copyright.PENANAJXNj0J5vKX
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不再幻想。
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▌篇167 蝸牛少女82Please respect copyright.PENANAsUI2AvDJlP
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▌作者 雙杺
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孤寂的寒冬吹響了冰封的少女,或許她再也找不到能過取代掉他餘溫的掌心了。82Please respect copyright.PENANASEhniX2vQb
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耳鳴的原因,早已不再是想聽到任何一句我愛你,此刻,少女需要的是內心的沉靜。82Please respect copyright.PENANAOeO2bMjZRW
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期盼她可以冬季過後,春暖花開再次踏出冰封蝸居。
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▌篇168 雪月花時最憶君(惠施X莊周)82Please respect copyright.PENANAfhBnKcSj8r
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▌作者 hikari
▌引用逍遙遊、莊周化蝶、郢人
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抱歉,歷經了好些時日才回覆,實則是對於莊子的典故,僅認識「魚樂之辯」那段,花了時間惡補了,以前求學階段的老莊學識。82Please respect copyright.PENANAxAaq3jZQW3
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第一段中,hikari大在莊周與惠施的故事中,加以透過了自己的情境模擬了惠施因張儀的死去,再次回到魏國當相國,而莊子這番看中兩人的情誼,才會不故惠施下令追捕,仍舊要看上故人一面。82Please respect copyright.PENANArI9EGGZTYv
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後面呈人那段,更是顯露出了一種莫逆之交的那樣敬重,可見兩人雖常鬥嘴,卻又早已認定彼此的一生摯友。82Please respect copyright.PENANAhQCRkmL6HJ
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以上,是我個人的見解。
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▌篇169 流痕82Please respect copyright.PENANA9Viqxn3RbQ
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▌作者 千眾忘雨
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流痕,如同為忘雨大大所謂的流逝傷痕。82Please respect copyright.PENANAJuAlvk6His
而譬如過去的那個她,在他的內心刻印下了一如天塹的傷痛疤痕。82Please respect copyright.PENANA7H37NtY7oh
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過去的愛,同如初戀萌萌發芽,鬥嘴、青澀、幼稚,皆以被名為成長的傢伙給覆蓋了,而錯過了就不再回頭,即便有了床邊人,那些過去就是沒有辦法取代的東西。82Please respect copyright.PENANARw2rbH9eDK
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「夢裡擺花正盛開,夢醒在沒有存在......」那個她如今大夢一場,名字、點點滴滴都將伴隨著他進入墳墓之中了。
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▌篇170 獨處的時候82Please respect copyright.PENANAj11rutayM7
▌類型 短文82Please respect copyright.PENANAbIFJbN6TCU
▌作者 大便大
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Damnit !The annoying boss!82Please respect copyright.PENANAYPazVQ8Pe2
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漫長的愛情旅途,走至了六年之久,雖不至於泯滅了愛的火花,卻也難以點燃一絲熱誠,男孩確實仍為了小羽的幸福著想,是如此希望能過上更好的日子。戀愛中的人,確實容易因為一些舉止懷疑對方,信任什麼的是建立在彼此的那把衡量尺上,需靠兩人相互扶持。82Please respect copyright.PENANAfC0gDoesdA
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故事最終男孩仍舊將這道想法挾藏於內心深處,有時往往善意的隱匿是一種對於雙方都是好的,不明說能減少更多的摩擦,但也會因此產生未來步入禮堂時的不安定因素。82Please respect copyright.PENANAhKwG8QUFPP
故事的結尾,是男孩誤會了女孩,或許,更應該請上那頓火鍋,為自己的懷疑獻上歉意XDD
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▌篇171 應該埋藏在雪地裡的珍貴的遺憾82Please respect copyright.PENANAH95yCgUSei
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▌作者 吟遊C人
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以奇幻鋪敘來說,C大的伏筆非常順暢,讀起來像泡在溫泉暖和身子,享受冬季反差的那絲溫和感受。82Please respect copyright.PENANAkWrlhlj1te
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以極光前後呼應點題,「極光」是故事的羈絆,因其而再續前緣,也在最後一刻畫下句話。82Please respect copyright.PENANArVq5QoYEE4
法特,是傭兵隊長也同為年少時期的異性好友,此刻,更多的是彼此間相互緬懷的歲月靜好。82Please respect copyright.PENANAV74UZaY9Hc
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不論是否在劍與魔法的世界,抑或是,現實生活中,再臨自己的初戀那是個想將對方的手給牽繫起來的心思,是如此的妄想。82Please respect copyright.PENANAwtke9jbIq4
法特,或許能憑藉自身異能,把整個小隊都滅了也說不然,如今自追隨拜月女神後,早已身不由己。82Please respect copyright.PENANAyqecLDDh2p
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緣分再次出現,或許,只要他的一句「與我共度下半輩子吧?」說不定,兩人可背負上世界的罵名,卻可擁有法特自己的理想生活。82Please respect copyright.PENANAJzDzPDFlJZ
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可當光逐漸畫下了無際的星空,他卻不自覺沒有察覺出,希梅娜的眼角邊也同為畫下一記淺稀的淚痕。
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▌篇172 白色回憶82Please respect copyright.PENANA33CZ8kqlnq
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▌作者 獨孤幻靈
▌(排版問題!!!!!)
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首先是排版有點問題,如果可以能否調整。82Please respect copyright.PENANAxTWdGe7z4U
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在便利超商突然對著陌生人詢問座位確實有些唐突,而轉折處是突如其來的貨車撞擊,所產生的現場災禍。82Please respect copyright.PENANA0KhPHjeLhp
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一段與陌生人的際遇,卻可留下一段令人忘懷的恐怖經歷,我想應該早已給予了她此生都無法抹滅的冬季回憶了吧!
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▌篇173 冬雪(上)82Please respect copyright.PENANAG3bUqhVV1x
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▌作者 糖解
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WOW!!!!竟是喪屍主題,好興奮又好期待(?)。82Please respect copyright.PENANADYKwmSxDz3
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營區成了躲避喪屍的絕佳地點是個很好的想法。一開始還想著米小鬼戴上墨鏡是何用處,直到下篇章,才知道這是個伏筆,寥寥數句幾筆卻能埋下暗梗,確實不易。老男人彼此間的簡短互動,雖說我看不太明白話語間的意思,卻仍看出他倆平日裡的默契,與相識已久的熟識。82Please respect copyright.PENANAJxOlL06AKw
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咦?82Please respect copyright.PENANA8Yog6ImOCC
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對了,這篇並沒有要打喪屍嗎XDDD
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▌篇174 冬雪(下) 82Please respect copyright.PENANAjDbXyPygOG
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▌作者 糖解
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下半章竟能加上了異能元素。
再搭配上與末世給予的惆悵感,確實非常神展開。
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雖然彼此間互動性非常好與同為童年愉快的感覺,卻免不了多出了更多的悲傷感。冬天,雪仍舊飄下,幾個孩子這般童年的純真看得確實令人觸動人心。
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▌篇175 我愛上那位喜歡冬季的女孩82Please respect copyright.PENANA0kD3hU3OTc
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▌作者 喘氣的蠟燭
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女孩因重大的事件變故,轉而失去了對於冬的眷戀。正如文前開頭所點題的愛情來臨時,走得很快,只需一道感覺,那走的時候同為如此,也正是失去那種感覺。82Please respect copyright.PENANAeMtRSXHOmN
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「一眼萬年,閉眼也是萬年。」 82Please respect copyright.PENANAgCtbytbd6D
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只是世人往往只看的到前頭,卻思不了後頭的同理。 82Please respect copyright.PENANA6YNGnYZBzd
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也許,失去了感覺再拖延,多的都是對彼此的一種傷害,何不認真放手,走出那道高聳圍牆。望這男孩度過了這場冬季,內心將終成長,再下一場雪飄下時,遇見了真正陪同自己走上萬年的女孩。
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▌篇176 微微微故事: 媽媽的暖暖頸巾82Please respect copyright.PENANAGde92IxL41
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▌作者 東加豆
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意外的想把這條暖巾送給心儀的女孩,卻反倒把父母親的冷戰給處理了,就整體而言,結果是好的。82Please respect copyright.PENANAClx4ob0R7T
魚毛是學生,多的是時間可以與女孩打持久戰,即便這一次計畫失敗了,下一回合,鹿死誰手猶未可知。82Please respect copyright.PENANAkGTTax9lOb
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圖很美、字很簡潔,均是暖冬的一陣暖意。82Please respect copyright.PENANAJzhuQkp2dD
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相信魚毛,即便是往後的三十多年,都能再續與她的緣分。
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▌篇177 (輕百合)寒冷的心,被妳的溫柔治癒82Please respect copyright.PENANAPt1NL2YZ1Z
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▌作者 AcesDeny
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詩奈、凌雫從兩人的同好,再到信任終至互相的喜歡,是三段不同的情感關卡,尤以最後當兩人面對告白之時的情緒表達,深怕對方會婉拒的心情,片片地展露出了那一絲風吹草動就能切斷這些日子以來的關係。82Please respect copyright.PENANAp75XYpQN6T
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然而,最終百合終究結為連理枝(?),幸福就是這般簡單,走得長遠與短都已然不成重要的事情,能在短暫擁有過的那才是真實的。82Please respect copyright.PENANApZWEhHzeMW
至少這個寒冬,冰冷的手不在獨自搓暖,而是有雙暖熱的不熟識手掌正緊緊握著自己。
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▌篇178 紅顏棄軒冕,白首臥松雲。82Please respect copyright.PENANADzbWkZZDAL
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▌作者 Endlessly
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「紅顏棄軒冕,白首臥松雲」82Please respect copyright.PENANAUbriQwMGF9
按其原意,是大詩仙李白內心所仰慕的棄名利而追隱世生活,同如那邊閒雲野鶴,清高自德猶如高山這般為人所景仰。82Please respect copyright.PENANAxCF1WX4TIi
由於文中未能點提出,確切可人兒逝去的緣由。魚魚猜測或許正如官場險惡,那深水洶湧的官場同如戰場,不僅鬥心機,更是鬥的是長氣。人兒的死已成必然,而嚮往著隱世生活的他,下一步的選擇為何,就不得而知,但如今冰涼的屍體,正一步步朝著他內心所望的方向而去。82Please respect copyright.PENANAoNlM9ToALX
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話說...你的寒冬跑去哪裡了????
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▌篇179 千層酥皮82Please respect copyright.PENANA6n8dZtF97L
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▌作者 少女
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「前任就像一所學校,你總要畢業的,就像小時候總希望快點長大,長大後才發現---82Please respect copyright.PENANAdFpSsm3C0V
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原來長大是有代價的,而代價就是那些無條件愛你的人們將會一個接著一個老死去。」82Please respect copyright.PENANA6Zdgmr4OJj
W是個渣男,而這又能怪誰,真要點評,女生本身卻也沒有在相處中認清了對方,並且自己的性格問題。82Please respect copyright.PENANAosuSKlFFOZ
我們不能完全認定L先生就是完美的人,但能肯定的會比起前任的他是個更好的選擇。82Please respect copyright.PENANApO9QUw8XZV
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即便繞了好大一圈,卻也在世界的某個角落,遇見了他。82Please respect copyright.PENANAQoA5GH6DOa
起點慢,動作不快,但每一步伐卻都能細心呈現,好比如酵母經過時間的累積,終才成為一塊美好的素材。82Please respect copyright.PENANAMjFN73jyyJ
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而,那千層才如此入口即化。
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▌篇180 這樣的方式回憶82Please respect copyright.PENANAiSBZvNt1dW
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▌作者 裕賢先生
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這樣的方式回憶82Please respect copyright.PENANAkvzN3w3eFh
同為貓派,我可以感同身受喵喵離你遠去的思念之意。牠如同冬季的使者,來時,冬來報到,而今下一個冬季來,牠離開了。
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或許,生命就是這般的奇妙,周圍的人與生物,歷經輪迴了幾世,終究和你相逢,可那緣分不夠,只好下輩子再續前緣,在和你見上一面。喵喵或許牠僅只想告訴你,我終於見到了你了,即便在最後要走的前幾天,牠早已告訴過了你「勿再掛懷,只是冬季,希望你能憶起我與你的那個短暫回憶」罷了。
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▌篇181 鬧脾氣82Please respect copyright.PENANAkj25076Cal
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▌作者 析梓燕
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新年快樂我覺得主體上需要的是一種情緒上面的表達,不過前面舖陳的雪景與冬意仍是令人感覺有冬季的味道。82Please respect copyright.PENANAH7nLgzkpjQ
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析梓燕大其實可以多往為何鬧脾氣?82Please respect copyright.PENANAn6JpTiyW3B
及為何和好後等等如何發展,延伸敘寫,說不定會有更好的想法。
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▌篇182 那一晚,你走了,我也將隨你離去。82Please respect copyright.PENANAqfuw4rCwhM
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▌作者 木木凡
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看著宥芯悲懷的望著心跳示波顯影器上滴滴滴的聲響,遠隔螢幕上的讀者都可感受到絲絲同情悲憫的心意。82Please respect copyright.PENANARbVMLDsTyN
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話說,如果住過院的話,頭上就會有一個名字的看板,不過考慮到有些人會想保持隱私性的情況下,也有可能會不知道的情況。82Please respect copyright.PENANARYadq1LilB
少年我們並不知道他是何故原因會產生了休克,甚至沒有親人的往來,想必生活必然辛苦無比,然而有著宥芯的鼓舞,今年身處於病床上的寒冬,比與往常要溫暖了許多,後續期待兩人經歷與發展。82Please respect copyright.PENANA9akzSmhLc9
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話說你那同學很壞,他有寫嗎,還是先說,那同學就是你自己(?)
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▌篇183 世人笑我太瘋癲82Please respect copyright.PENANASRpeVcCCOw
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▌作者 清溪
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隱忍了三年之後的,女子絕不會想到命運產生了反轉,言少風返回原本屬於自己的歸所,卻未料想女子竟會跳下了城上,躍下自縊。82Please respect copyright.PENANASG1cy6o5kx
然而真正要說瘋的人,又會不會是言少風,而他卻不知;尤以見其隱忍數年,城府極其之深不可見。82Please respect copyright.PENANATyPkKBhgac
雪仍飄落,但殞落的卻是這三年來的復仇目標,那該是多麼令人惆悵的存在。82Please respect copyright.PENANAS6siRyMcqS
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只知,曾經的冷冰女子,在其內心是多麼地狂熱,如此的執著。82Please respect copyright.PENANAjONgUCmetv
就讓今晚的寒風伴隨著過去一道悄悄地的流逝而去吧。
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