《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧168Please respect copyright.PENANAlYr47HOg4h
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍168Please respect copyright.PENANA0HNe9NxR6P
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)168Please respect copyright.PENANABrpUpXBjOr
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單168Please respect copyright.PENANAlMNvDXb5Oq
而是是人在食用時能入口即化168Please respect copyright.PENANAensMnAqz4t
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」168Please respect copyright.PENANArBFIAnSPZc
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久168Please respect copyright.PENANA3hDpQANCBW
使人不會因為時間的洪流168Please respect copyright.PENANAIPdxDALWPQ
失去了炙熱168Please respect copyright.PENANA3CCFcKsxkc
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》168Please respect copyright.PENANABWup4DuP9z
但夏季怎麼會有雪168Please respect copyright.PENANA92nl6vmMSh
令人加以反思168Please respect copyright.PENANAda1aqNlMDv
雪季不該有的畫面168Please respect copyright.PENANAEeuMstPGW4
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏168Please respect copyright.PENANAY54RrAqWQU
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或許168Please respect copyright.PENANAFbevkbzzTj
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣168Please respect copyright.PENANAmeu4XKlYaP
即便是來年168Please respect copyright.PENANAKe0doC3F8q
之後的每一年都依然如此