《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧164Please respect copyright.PENANATVxqYRwY9W
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍164Please respect copyright.PENANA2xSo35T8pI
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)164Please respect copyright.PENANAWjwT8s5Pqb
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單164Please respect copyright.PENANAeATbv4bNt3
而是是人在食用時能入口即化164Please respect copyright.PENANACUIWKGW1AW
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」164Please respect copyright.PENANAEKYPYoKmkQ
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久164Please respect copyright.PENANA6i9KiKyheF
使人不會因為時間的洪流164Please respect copyright.PENANAHAhEom9mxM
失去了炙熱164Please respect copyright.PENANAIH18xPnANz
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》164Please respect copyright.PENANAttrkgyxJuS
但夏季怎麼會有雪164Please respect copyright.PENANA2eB183ptjN
令人加以反思164Please respect copyright.PENANAhHPBKZsS9S
雪季不該有的畫面164Please respect copyright.PENANAF5wHZCnJo5
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏164Please respect copyright.PENANA56W0rc4Zys
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或許164Please respect copyright.PENANA56kGqGNRt2
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣164Please respect copyright.PENANApwvYzSjc5s
即便是來年164Please respect copyright.PENANAa4qgblIXkA
之後的每一年都依然如此