寂魚創挑語評專區 - 夏•冬眠《第六期#203》

《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型新詩
▌作者西帆

本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkc9SWqKoIu
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQPKog9WMBo
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKIWrk6IVhr
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9wzW0qj79W
而是是人在食用時能入口即化212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeEP184Iwgr
212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMtEaxaZvhj
「嘗試把心臟調慢」212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡe7Khj1MTYB
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkAl8DS5hFF
使人不會因為時間的洪流212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡv6eX3N0ngd
失去了炙熱212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFtiIhNcEY2
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡajBgkjY4Mm
但夏季怎麼會有雪212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyULPRZgcEs
令人加以反思212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWUDwenUZM6
雪季不該有的畫面212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKrHap4krbd
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPZAO5zQozd
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或許212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡEAqO2NUDdq
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ25dQfYXLGe
即便是來年212Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡW5VqnSoixb
之後的每一年都依然如此

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