寂魚創挑語評專區 - 夏•冬眠《第六期#203》

《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型新詩
▌作者西帆

本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDcwJnRkOlP
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1rEIFliiEF
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFv9x3rj8sA
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRmj8ia6CGQ
而是是人在食用時能入口即化181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaqhCfCaqg5
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvBPvUGimZG
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp55Csc6P9Z
使人不會因為時間的洪流181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡsy0hoPkJEx
失去了炙熱181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡkVbJzdKnQb
181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡOfChhSWuWT
詩名為《夏，冬眠》181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡI9Ca9FCpSd
但夏季怎麼會有雪181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡbtwb4fxNeH
令人加以反思181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMuK8mhNES0
雪季不該有的畫面181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡQ4AdPmeqxK
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5uiZWInPez
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或許181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjKBT80CzqF
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡfmBA8tkky2
即便是來年181Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjcRHSFLS7S
之後的每一年都依然如此

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