寂魚創挑語評專區 - 夏•冬眠《第六期#203》

《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型新詩
▌作者西帆

本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpBhJLYvGav
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡhIVESbTyhh
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡO1NrYAcZcx
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡc9du7vZ4Hi
而是是人在食用時能入口即化132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYsOAN2womC
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYEl85jOWJx
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8cQxfStR7B
使人不會因為時間的洪流132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡp4pkwRHmXV
失去了炙熱132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF98iKuVn7I
132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDHCMQDioZ1
詩名為《夏，冬眠》132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡxvGvAExaKu
但夏季怎麼會有雪132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGbg54kHX6O
令人加以反思132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeaklOWRDoQ
雪季不該有的畫面132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡgTxlXbpSaI
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHmVdsDShSK
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或許132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVb05aApxXI
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡSwdpKw3tMz
即便是來年132Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6Afr7fJOjk
之後的每一年都依然如此

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