《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩128Please respect copyright.PENANAX1VIkhDqec
詩意要較為薄弱128Please respect copyright.PENANAf8yqnBPWJ4
但仍是一首很棒的古詩128Please respect copyright.PENANAb9UevQQ54l
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分128Please respect copyright.PENANADXZI15d5q0
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感128Please respect copyright.PENANAutHipn2Nvp
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。128Please respect copyright.PENANAonYZRzn6Uy
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。128Please respect copyright.PENANA4bwy98tiJD
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。128Please respect copyright.PENANAqqPI8AOJOe
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。128Please respect copyright.PENANANI3dfSGWUL
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。128Please respect copyright.PENANAwlEfYFPCkr
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。128Please respect copyright.PENANA4yAs50Y9go
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。128Please respect copyright.PENANAKSiHMHNafy
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。128Please respect copyright.PENANAAYwPLERgeO
每個人的角度皆為不同。128Please respect copyright.PENANAlVQmK9PAMz
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有人感受深刻,128Please respect copyright.PENANAQYw7jucihH
有人無感,128Please respect copyright.PENANAw9DluRKJEp
各有差異。128Please respect copyright.PENANA8umG6v0BZo
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,128Please respect copyright.PENANApNr2vjeBN6
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。