作品:《魚魚創挑第三期》
類型:短文、新詩
作者:PENANA各路人馬 ▶ ▶ ▶ 連結
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▌篇101 來自雪山中的雪花信25Please respect copyright.PENANAxe3FSfLAAw
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAnGHs4YByOq
▌作者 雪姬雪月圓
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雪女原為誘惑山下,而常與辜負輕薄女子的男人報復有關。25Please respect copyright.PENANAPsQ96ykIq2
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此處,化身為一名初次戀愛般的少女,似是這名單純只為雪花蓮而來的主角,獻上了一絲好意。25Please respect copyright.PENANAlvp4ornlKE
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當然,我覺得輕吻是否也是在考驗著男孩的一場試驗,但似乎……仍舊落入過往任何男子都會陷入的圈套之中?25Please respect copyright.PENANA30v7SR1ncE
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正巧,男孩也住在雪村,是否會村莊時雪女卻早已在家中等候著將他變成了冰棒呢?
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▌篇102 學伴25Please respect copyright.PENANA9QDKLmK5Kf
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▌作者 柏木葵
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有緣千里來相見,即便相隔螢幕卻能緣分巧遇。25Please respect copyright.PENANA6G1wFlGCI8
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兩人性格的冷淡,在全文中可以藉由不斷地拒絕了其餘第三者中,明顯察覺而出。25Please respect copyright.PENANArzmwrPZnmT
旭陽,是率先認出了晨暖的人,而非她不可的毅力,也能在字句之間顯露而出。25Please respect copyright.PENANAqrSDxjR5pm
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只是尾段,既然晨暖不想再高中談戀愛,卻又為何跟自己還沒相識出來的旭陽,共同約會,這是我比較想問的地方。
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▌篇103 冬夜細雨25Please respect copyright.PENANAQS8xZoQumw
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▌作者 東津雲
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東珒是兩人的起點,也是兩人的終點。25Please respect copyright.PENANAfELTndNyWk
在故事中,我所期待的複合沒有到來,反倒迎來更加感傷的醒悟,但卻加強了成長的那些說不清的痕跡。25Please respect copyright.PENANAzb7ptTaOfE
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所謂「易得無價寶,難得有情郎。」如果說,勉強不來的感情,終究無須勉強結合,再多都只會是徒勞增加彼此的厭煩感。25Please respect copyright.PENANAayWHTtkOyu
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有好的下一站,又何嘗停留在過去的月台呢?25Please respect copyright.PENANAhCxXPEuBBN
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祝福她,卻也同時是在祝福自己未來即將相遇的那名有緣人。
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▌篇104 男人也期待著白馬公主25Please respect copyright.PENANAxx9sOlF4w9
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAM6YVgzrsyR
▌作者 笑具
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失而復得,再去失去的萬惡循環,是天道不測,造化弄人。25Please respect copyright.PENANANhlAvzotE3
唯有莉莉知道,只是莉莉無奈無人知曉。25Please respect copyright.PENANAhK3SvF9ssw
如果說此事發生在我們自身,那我們會選擇結束這段旅程,割捨痛苦循環嗎?25Please respect copyright.PENANA2OiVwn851A
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因為知道了憶草的喜好、因為知道了憶草的狀況、因為知道了他所知道的問題。25Please respect copyright.PENANAOy6OeW7T1V
所以便選擇了留下。25Please respect copyright.PENANATZUwmyxgHf
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我們從文字中看出了笑具大的細膩之處,想藉由不斷挑戰著重複的一道困難,卻也勇敢直往的衝勁。25Please respect copyright.PENANA2Tp4BRwyPo
好比如,此刻的莉莉,深嘆一起,闔眼睜眼對著一臉疑惑的他,再次開口說道:「你好!我喜歡你,請務必和我交往!」25Please respect copyright.PENANA7byuTG3dPZ
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反覆讀取文章,字句雋永,可以說是容易敲醒內心那一塊柔軟的心田。25Please respect copyright.PENANAkjuMR9Du6N
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PS:抱歉!!!我一開頭就看成白馬王子,差點以為是裝甲車故事(?),等到讀完才驚覺是白馬公主XDDD
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▌篇105 你這麼喜歡愛撒嬌的貓咪,會不會也喜歡愛撒嬌的我?25Please respect copyright.PENANA039pCsFVzz
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAMViIfXyHKk
▌作者 伍拾陸
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這般直球對決出現好結局只會在小說實現,唷...不對,這裡就是在小說裡面了,但為何沒有好結局? 25Please respect copyright.PENANAh6chV1FAsZ
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---寂魚25Please respect copyright.PENANAM9qsjVlcMa
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以第三人稱的視角,重新檢視了這一場的即興寫生,漁夫與魚的搏鬥不在是主場秀。是牠與她的際遇,伴隨著手中隨興地勾勒佐味,亮麗的校服映襯著少女海風凌厲拍打著她飄逸地長長的髮絲。25Please respect copyright.PENANAgc6RfLIbVr
<<貓,女孩,我。>>三者之間,終究沒有辦法在天平中取得平衡。如果真能的話,那便只好取下我吧。正如同喜愛撒嬌貓咪的妳,也棄下了妳對我撒嬌的選項。25Please respect copyright.PENANAyxNgn5ls7s
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貓走了,妳也走了。而我的一次冬季戀歌,也隨之而去。
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▌篇106 冬季暖暖25Please respect copyright.PENANAgf5KcJCnvt
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANALordogCDjg
▌作者 海風依舊溫柔♡
如詩中所提,如說冬,是個孤寂的寒冬。25Please respect copyright.PENANA58gRp0HNB6
藉由淡忘疼痛,那便是冷咧的風一頭灌入我至今未醒的腦中了吧。25Please respect copyright.PENANADuQDc0f6E5
成長難免如此,又何苦一再憶起。25Please respect copyright.PENANAC7QlJmkgUb
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她像夏季螢火飄盪,這般耀眼。25Please respect copyright.PENANAhCkbl0uIDr
她如春季百花盛開,如此明媚。25Please respect copyright.PENANAO94UwelpbI
她彷彿秋風掃過落葉,有些冷淡。25Please respect copyright.PENANANNdHu2Uq8M
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要說真像是母愛的親情,我覺得那便是更像是內心一直缺乏的避風港了。25Please respect copyright.PENANAhnymRf0AMl
直至走出後,才能知道冬才是最思念的季節了。
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▌篇107 寒夜中的溫暖25Please respect copyright.PENANAg4Wv8HgP5W
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANASuO7C78tJV
▌作者 阿塞爾
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冬季降下的第一場雪,讓薛竣煬坐在超商不再只是孤單獨自品嘗咖啡的味道。25Please respect copyright.PENANADxWojg6tJN
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至於,加不加上糖早已不是重點。25Please respect copyright.PENANAbXKarEyLnW
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等待的那人,終究到來。25Please respect copyright.PENANAYKHqBq2xly
即便等待了一個又一個凌晨三點的夜晚,卻在最後撐起的傘下,刻劃下所謂「復燃的爐火」。
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▌篇108 冬粉芋頭大混戰25Please respect copyright.PENANAg3Uay5JTzh
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▌作者 夏目
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兩人小心翼翼的試探,終究難掩旁人想幫忙推進一把的想法。25Please respect copyright.PENANAATzuh26rBF
如果是大半夜下班肚子餓看到一篇文章,肯定要口水四溢了,終究我還是忍住了。25Please respect copyright.PENANASoWT7QEl4b
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少女與少男如此純情,卻會讓人容易勾引起,自己求學時期,那位背影與之相似的人,同樣如此單純與美好時光。25Please respect copyright.PENANArx54CqM4tM
兩人後續是否真如劇情走向地交往,猶未可知,但可以知道彼此肯定是互相深深了解的一對知己。
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▌篇109 一年一次的相逢25Please respect copyright.PENANAJl6HgFtpxR
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAV6FaBk01mE
▌作者 文友
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景色敘述是那般優美,而良人金髮碧眼卻更是美豔的不可方物。25Please respect copyright.PENANAM3G53KYAbK
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雖然不清楚,毒咒如何發生,以及為何彼此無法相見,卻又是在何地發現了他的初戀。25Please respect copyright.PENANAm3a6etlasq
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而後面故事比較曲折,讀完後仍有幾處不解,或許,不知道真正的原因,也是這篇故事迷人的地方。
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▌篇110 致已逝去的你25Please respect copyright.PENANAhZgBG1Vy0D
▌類型 *新詩*25Please respect copyright.PENANACRJuR2k2gQ
▌作者 櫻井美咲
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詩句中,在我生命中逝去的你25Please respect copyright.PENANAyCCD7sweL1
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在冬季應該飄零的日子中25Please respect copyright.PENANAnd4CV0PPke
它卻透過風信子飄盪著應屬永遠懷念的花語25Please respect copyright.PENANAueBdymo4sb
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冰與雪是這般透涼清晰,卻穿不透我和你之間的熱情羈絆25Please respect copyright.PENANAcHm2MqetRV
雖然,塵土之下都化雲煙仍舊撥不開偶爾憶起你的濃稠思緒25Please respect copyright.PENANAMzYIr8ozeb
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再次問道「你還好嗎?」25Please respect copyright.PENANA8NnWIXHl1d
這冬風中
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▌篇111 懲罰的獎賞25Please respect copyright.PENANADaA5aHm8X2
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANASudq431IMY
▌作者 柳柳丁
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柳丁大的瑟瑟的功力要比起鋪敘景色的文字更為強勁呢!25Please respect copyright.PENANAGblYCqqG40
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從指尖滑落而下,直至鎖骨停留。25Please respect copyright.PENANAsqUvfkir50
但觀眾不滿足的眼角早已赤裸裸的等待著,主動滑落而下的絲袍,濕漉漉的粉潤櫻唇貼覆蓋在任時遠的因火而乾燥的厚唇上,一直之間激起更大的波濤…….25Please respect copyright.PENANAS1E6u02V0k
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抱歉,稍微克制不住了!!25Please respect copyright.PENANAtaVzKAwzNm
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說好的懲罰,就是是對男人的懲罰,還是對觀察的懲罰(??
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▌篇112 失去一切的冬日25Please respect copyright.PENANAc93MtyKnr3
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAeFz6zeXZQc
▌作者 無元人
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方隸臣在告白失敗了以後,以那極盡自虐形式追尋自愛的表現。25Please respect copyright.PENANARyZU4Um1QP
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以魚死網破,同歸於盡把自己此生所愛保留了下來,在旁人眼底,或許,人性早已扭曲抹滅,已然沒有了救治的希望。25Please respect copyright.PENANAkruaYEQESP
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而另一方面,卻向自己所愛表達,自己一生鍾愛獨一人的覺悟。25Please respect copyright.PENANAtXU0uhFjeJ
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可嘆。人世間,卻多數時候都要以悲劇收場。25Please respect copyright.PENANARwCteTSgaR
我們的初戀,又有幾人是美好甜蜜的呢?25Please respect copyright.PENANAV17WCnY65B
這個平安夜,白雪緩緩飄落在兩具血泊軀殼上。而這終究算是得到了一切,還是算失去了一切呢?
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▌篇113 冬日的醬油炒飯25Please respect copyright.PENANASpWYGq9CJS
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAgKOmdkDeN1
▌作者 錢飛飛
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結局意外地令我爆笑好一陣子。25Please respect copyright.PENANAilPwHWCxEh
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原以為禿頭的刺青男人是失戀主角的人生轉涙點,卻更想不形如趁火打劫的疊加在心頭雪季的他身上。25Please respect copyright.PENANAjSsGkEeQY9
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而既然金錢三觀早已不正的女友,分離說不定對彼此來說都是一種解脫。你擁有不了她想要的夢想,那強迫彼此在一起,只會更附加奪走你的一切。25Please respect copyright.PENANAtBBSwjRmyy
有時候,認清現實卻也反倒是一種成長。走出陰霾,總有一日,屬於自己的幸福也會到來。
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▌篇114 儍 (上) —初嘗試言情微小說25Please respect copyright.PENANArdGO1xAFMA
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAGM57gdDwtO
▌作者 大道無所為 第1篇
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男孩將其年少時期奉獻給了那女孩25Please respect copyright.PENANARX5iJrZiFe
而近期出現的總總現象讓他內心的安全感逐漸消逝,尤以在地鐵上,此刻同時,極度相似的身影隱約地揭開他內心潘朵拉的盒子。25Please respect copyright.PENANAfMwBCebRks
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而故事的結局又為何?更竟是讓我們感到一絲絲的期待,想趕緊向下看下去。
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▌篇115 儍 (下) —初嘗試言情微小說25Please respect copyright.PENANASzTkf0exML
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAOIWePBUbeX
▌作者 大道無所為 第2篇
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在下篇,故事轉折曲折。25Please respect copyright.PENANAjkXPIoaJbu
女孩的物慾早已遠超男孩的經濟能力,雙方觀念早已不是一個層次,即便內心彼此還深愛著對方,同樣也不行。25Please respect copyright.PENANAr7Mt91MlVN
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彼此觀念不合適造就了今天的局面,能跨出那一步去夜店上班的那刻,身心早已不在是純淨女孩,又哪裡能有純純的愛。25Please respect copyright.PENANABpHn3X1vHh
我不清楚,這算不算的上是善意的謊言。25Please respect copyright.PENANA0RUzTYWvrn
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然而,阿晨在現實面中,不僅只是逝去了愛情,更是徒然浪費了金錢與夢想。25Please respect copyright.PENANA4IFCYaahol
當然「當局者迷,旁觀者清。」陷入愛情的男孩,又豈能在當下保持理性,洞悉全局。25Please respect copyright.PENANAzsA26MN6dl
感謝大道這篇文,讓我產生如此強烈的讀後觀。
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▌篇116 冬日的鈴聲25Please respect copyright.PENANAs2NmyCmCYh
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAPcqrJS6HvL
▌作者 茶味的貓
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兩人真摯的情感,在冬天醞釀開來。25Please respect copyright.PENANAzLNhthmDER
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冬日祭是此地的獨特文化,兩人在雪中徜徉著屬於遠距離兩地的不安心情。25Please respect copyright.PENANA7IVt6rz1e7
北極光照映在莉莉的髮絲上,美的好不勝收。25Please respect copyright.PENANAjlVFMndKs9
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正如雪花落在里昂的賞心上,他憂愁著兩個月後將再次離去的複雜心情。
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▌篇117 於冬日盛開的流星雨25Please respect copyright.PENANA3fDYCqoDHJ
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAsKFqQcjKT8
▌作者 夏季雨
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兩小無猜的姜子夜與許星雨,在生日這天,以流星雨陪伴下劃過一次絢麗的夜晚,星光閃耀卻沒有此刻彼此凝視著對方那般好看。25Please respect copyright.PENANA1aN3RyWvfL
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而假使她沒有對他有所情感的話,那自然是騙人的,否則便也不會陪同他來到瞭望台共賞星空遍布。25Please respect copyright.PENANAoLQ1xBNtjC
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此時情境,或許無聲更勝有聲。
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▌篇118 冬與櫻25Please respect copyright.PENANA70K0jHU1B5
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▌作者 KLC
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記憶雖已消逝,卻仍不忘諾言。25Please respect copyright.PENANAKXekBscCGr
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萊斯特踩著冬季的落雪,再次尋覓被帶走的五年記憶,而櫻花的相伴是冬小姐緣分的羈絆。25Please respect copyright.PENANAk1aVG8Qu21
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一吻蓋上,雖然不知道還能剩下幾個五年......25Please respect copyright.PENANA7jjjBPpNAH
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但,那分愛意相信無論歷經多長時日都無法將其阻攔。
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▌篇119 獨台戲25Please respect copyright.PENANA2YijkG3Q5j
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▌作者 清溪
▌第1篇
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我特別喜愛那一蓑煙雨任平生的無懼逆境與那分曠達胸懷。25Please respect copyright.PENANAQvXHwzX4U7
咖啡店坐落在都是叢林的一隅,卻在隨著她的光臨,點綴上幾分憂愁。25Please respect copyright.PENANA9u7JylmlIk
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「暗戀」又如何?曾以還沒開始的結束,不也是個好結局嗎?25Please respect copyright.PENANATeddhqHUyt
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時間凝結昇華,而友誼有時更甚過愛情。
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▌篇120 戴普加与夏提丽亚的早晨25Please respect copyright.PENANAkgjgSceeAi
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▌作者 L_雷梦
兩人雖為師生卻又同如眷侶那般,簡單的在咖啡廳中用餐,卻能展現出內心純純的愛戀。25Please respect copyright.PENANABC9ycdnc7E
要說只是師生普通關係的話,我可不同意。25Please respect copyright.PENANAnjrpMKGsFG
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魔法學園充滿著未知的挑戰,可僅是這番平凡的舉止,便可見出夏提丽亚絕非常人般的苦修。25Please respect copyright.PENANA1tSHWzlIvm
戴普加或許是想在不過度干涉夏提丽亚的情況下,讓其成長吧。
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▌篇121 我和Sadako(貞子)小姐的聖誕
▌類型 短文
▌作者 森兔Treebbit
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我是真的差點沒笑趴在電腦螢幕前。25Please respect copyright.PENANAPxfHtr6YUt
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貞子小姐是不是忘記自己從井裡起來是幹嘛來著了,但嚴格說起來,「田中貞子」的身世,卻是無比的淒涼,在那個年代下的她竟是如此被生活給重壓的喘不過去。25Please respect copyright.PENANAxLHXXIj0QY
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如今有個人可以陪伴她,或許,也是個不錯的冬季吧?
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▌篇122 新北耶誕城的大雪25Please respect copyright.PENANAdTq167UuWb
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▌作者 焙茶凍
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前世今生,因果早已注定;即便輪迴幾世,兩人終究冥冥之中注定相遇。25Please respect copyright.PENANA5EZl78Xt4l
前世為她,重生在孟婆湯下忘記了當時的誓言,上天是公平的,任何人都須喝下那碗忘情水。25Please respect copyright.PENANAPqofcStn1Q
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而此時,悄悄落下的雪片,多的僅是無言的重聚,雖然突破的紅色朱門而言救下了重生過後她的這條命,但我們卻不知道另一個世界的他,是否早已付出了難以支付的代價也說不然。25Please respect copyright.PENANAkK18GVGI8q
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只為了一個愛妳的理由,此後,後許餘生不見。
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▌篇123 調皮的冬日25Please respect copyright.PENANAoB4HzzYmI6
▌類型 新詩25Please respect copyright.PENANAtDjNmkwXwx
▌作者 小河
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冬日是妳,而妳亦如那冬日。25Please respect copyright.PENANAqXxBrb7A2d
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冬風裡,妳想要來場令人難以忘懷的旅途、也想著獨享屬於冬之饗宴,可最讓人悸動的尤以男女之間擁抱取暖的幸福片刻了。25Please respect copyright.PENANA9lvbwhYFrL
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在這令人眷戀的冬季,無聲地畫下了幾百萬分情,譜出了幾千萬分愛。25Please respect copyright.PENANAo197XphyWh
其實,我們早已沐浴在這片愛神的甘霖之下了,驀然回首,身在雲中卻已不知處。
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▌篇124 一池冬25Please respect copyright.PENANAFWn0ynxSaj
▌類型 新詩25Please respect copyright.PENANAbdrbK2e2Xy
▌作者 c.j.Vic
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以冬劃作池,是如此絢麗的譬喻。25Please respect copyright.PENANAMgmKYYnmdB
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前三段,以池喻風雪泛起了一絲漣漪,卻怎麼樣也無法停止早已轉動的盪樣心頭。25Please respect copyright.PENANAaHOxHMyzOs
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而雪融之際,卻道盡了落幕情懷,而以那春有百花秋有月、夏有涼風冬有雪,若無閒事掛記心頭,那可如此令人感懷的好時節。只可惜,被攪動了一池中的深水,卻怎麼樣都無法平復了滿溢而出的傷痕;而大夢初醒誰又能先察覺出愛已不在?25Please respect copyright.PENANACFVgYafoCb
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此刻,春暖緣盡。一心只想著再與你心頭探戈,誦著一首名為回憶的圓舞曲。25Please respect copyright.PENANAxV7XJraCxT
低頭,卻發覺,怎麼忘記了那步伐。
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▌篇125 永不回頭25Please respect copyright.PENANAx1XXnOnBP8
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAZIf1qjNpN1
▌作者 海洋
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雖未能從文中看出,半年的感情為何令他覺得可笑,卻恐怕男孩早已動情已深,只見他獨自遠望著清秀佳人遠去的身影。25Please respect copyright.PENANAZhWuf51YNb
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此一別,餘生不見。猶如我們的每段逝去的美好記憶,只好淺嚐著曾經的幸福。25Please respect copyright.PENANAKcQtCxGu71
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偶然憶起,或許,仍舊有點苦澀吧。
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▌篇126 一碗來自冬天的麵25Please respect copyright.PENANAIbafMyxjBc
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANA35edKs8hg6
▌作者 斬盡
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快樂的幸福,像是與伴侶一同攜手努力生活,像是鍋燒意麵美味的飄香,是如此簡單。僅有我們內心,拋開貪戀癡嗔的欲情,回首皆是隨地可見的浪漫。25Please respect copyright.PENANAspvLR3PfjT
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爺爺奶奶,我想即便出生於這個世紀的我們,或許,冥冥之中他們仍舊會再次相遇,白頭偕老吧。25Please respect copyright.PENANAzdsEhjyBiH
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同時,也衷心感謝他們不計損益的為了每一位想品嘗鍋燒意麵的我們。
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▌篇127 【牽手】第一步曲: 笑話25Please respect copyright.PENANAsSJuhH0piI
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAjCb8yThNLs
▌作者 花赤兒 hanaakai
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本篇作品,男主角不斷地在心中持續與自己的對話,是個很活潑的內心小宇宙。25Please respect copyright.PENANAe3vFi4iu1U
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即便,原定計畫是想牽到女孩的手,有了遊樂園的計畫被打斷卻也能隨機應變;雖然都已能約會20次還沒牽手的程度,似乎不太像是充滿自信的他該有的可能,但確實很有趣。25Please respect copyright.PENANAu4aIIGXsvw
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而更轉折處是愛神邱比特的笑話。25Please respect copyright.PENANAbSRQS39q3J
只是原先期待會有後篇,卻只剩下首部曲便斷更了,很可惜。
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▌篇128 先是國家,才是妳25Please respect copyright.PENANAWQYYT57nf5
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAsi67RocFUB
▌作者 月白狐
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簡短的敘述中,卻可以明顯感覺到前線戰場的悲壯感,與守衛國疆的使命。25Please respect copyright.PENANA3v7Y6yjZ5p
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有種東西叫做約定,我們有時候給予口頭承諾,那就是定情。25Please respect copyright.PENANATXBf03nzbC
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然而,在戰場最忌諱「這場仗打完,我回去就娶你。」的flag,因為通常要不就是戰死了,要不就是小美改嫁了(???25Please respect copyright.PENANAV0uhJGUz5r
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沒關係,一千字考驗的往往是刪字,保留其最佳的語意與敘述,這很考驗功力,加油!25Please respect copyright.PENANA5hfOqXZLfp
另外就是,一開頭看到毛茸茸的腦袋,第一個直覺以為是獸人異世界(??),應該有人跟我是同樣的直覺吧?
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▌篇129 語言的溫度25Please respect copyright.PENANAEdoxouCEmc
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAwHmFcROvOa
▌作者 阿石先生
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透過逐漸加溫的語言,可以瞧見許瑞雪耐心地等待著詹謙誠的察覺。25Please respect copyright.PENANATbdS1eI5pD
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原來兩人的溫度,卻也隨那日文之中,溫度的昇華,從無感冰冷轉而羞澀溫暖。25Please respect copyright.PENANA1fotiU8GNI
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一場雨、兩種心頭。愛的日文課,下課。
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▌篇130 初雪之戀25Please respect copyright.PENANAx8vvxMXuiC
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAUt8DWNKpEo
▌作者 白浠
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等待,是件考驗男女之間,嚴肅又沉重的事情。25Please respect copyright.PENANAruB5eyFx9T
許多人都可能會在來來往往的站台上車、下車。25Please respect copyright.PENANACGLAuyjdPd
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一次又一次,孤單又寂寞的感覺席捲而上,我們又如何能真的初衷不變,去一股傻勁的等候著她的歸來呢?
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▌篇131 八年后的冬季恋愛25Please respect copyright.PENANAF90HEKFSB7
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAsoS9qRel3N
▌作者 李精字
▌第1篇
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難以想像這會是個多麼令人煎熬的故事。25Please respect copyright.PENANA8Wu2cjjcki
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再重讀了一次羽海野千花【蜂蜜與四葉草】的動畫,我腦海中也反覆憶起這個片段,如原田理花的丈夫也是在車禍中過世,而她飽受煎熬,不斷地反覆想揮手訣別世界的想法,同樣令讀者虐心。25Please respect copyright.PENANA6NELtXY2PR
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無助、徬徨,充斥著這個獨留在世間的人。朋友的關懷,正是此時最佳的良藥。
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▌篇132 〈逃出香港番外I穿花蝴蝶〉上篇25Please respect copyright.PENANAhe3Y7MRVMo
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAdSeMolHMN5
▌作者 逆流而上
▌第1篇
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優美的景色敘述,讓我閱讀間偶然沈醉在故事的情境裡。25Please respect copyright.PENANAuX8EC9kgGz
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走在與原先不符期待的曼徹斯特街道,片段的字句中我聞出區穎的一絲無奈感。25Please respect copyright.PENANAoGkB7UKeHk
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尾段,突然出現的黑夏克,會讓我想去了解那是什麼生物?
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▌篇133 巧克力25Please respect copyright.PENANAwMru2T9nsa
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAjrBU63rgsy
▌作者 貓玄
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主廚的心美如入口即化的巧克力般,直到最後回甘,才知道他早已默默地為了多少徒弟,來奉獻自己。25Please respect copyright.PENANACVMWBx2RjQ
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而我們的愛情呢?25Please respect copyright.PENANAp2wBatChur
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忽冷忽熱的戀情,就好像需要調溫的製作過程般,而每個人都有屬於自己口感的愛情巧克力。25Please respect copyright.PENANA5Qb1jFFnOb
但願,女子早日與自己男友修好。
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▌篇134 冬季遇见暖阳25Please respect copyright.PENANAyHWrtvh8aV
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANA5hGkDtVTh2
▌作者 成小子
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網路的速食愛情,給予了二十一世紀忙碌生活的人群,一道便捷的交友管道。25Please respect copyright.PENANAxwGgVORfgX
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同時,透過資訊發達的年代,交友的便利性高的同時,標準也提高了許多。25Please respect copyright.PENANAA8aMYbDDZA
正如冬季帥哥,首次的網路戀愛,止於一個星期之後。25Please respect copyright.PENANABv8eD1WjvQ
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網戀,有時也會成就不少羨煞旁人的神仙眷侶,在刻骨銘心的線上約戰、在地下副本中,幻化的英雄,是如此不可言喻的經歷。25Please respect copyright.PENANAmWOUlVDRDP
但真實中,卻往往被所謂的「外貌協會」給一擊擊倒。25Please respect copyright.PENANAsbhD3wbVlM
我們應該試圖想著不去拆穿,而讓想像去醞釀下去,也許是另外一種美麗的曖昧。
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▌篇135 窒愛〔應版主要求PART2,豪車慎入(〃∀〃)〕25Please respect copyright.PENANAJ5BCZv0uMl
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAvk7wn1I2oW
▌作者 落花
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時隔半年再次擔任落花的短評,更是感到另一份不一樣的感覺。25Please respect copyright.PENANAJQ7Vr983WO
與#84冬梅那篇比對,這期間度過了人生好幾個階段,也同時經歷了這個創作挑戰上百篇的短評,希望這次的評論能更加客觀。25Please respect copyright.PENANAsYLSaiUpjA
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與前篇比對,#135窒愛著重在敘述對於兩人"鬥牛"方面的對手戲,尤以巴著籃球不斷進出籃框粗暴與挑逗對手的話語,更是讓人意猶未盡,想多看幾次秦白楓上籃的那種慾望。25Please respect copyright.PENANA25KCc0s6rN
在形容黃宣麓方面,雖有「他」這個字眼帶給我閱讀時的幾分困惑,但在言情方面涉獵多年的讀者,絕對不會在意這一點點的小瑕疵,反倒如果沒有在尾段所出現的「後框」一詞,我都覺得「他」與「她」的疑問。25Please respect copyright.PENANA39sjtU2HHq
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...等等。25Please respect copyright.PENANANk0s2lweQR
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...難道,真的是「他」。冷汗再度直流,電流直擊我內心最後的那道防線,我被破防了,是我那僅存的矜持。25Please respect copyright.PENANAksxscNX80A
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鬥牛的賽事,在短篇後段,在一場次隱約又悄悄地敲響了起來,只是眾多讀者肯定想一窺究竟絕不止步於此。25Please respect copyright.PENANASQcAr9W1KS
下筆於此,魚魚完全認定這篇球賽不僅有「實用」這番解析,更是有著用詞優美的美譽,至於兩人是否僅是短暫的球場上過客,我們早就不在乎了。25Please respect copyright.PENANAslAxKhSlrs
畢竟,讀者早就享受完了這篇萬用好文。25Please respect copyright.PENANAtJQzzxKKr5
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期待,還能再見其他選手上場的好球賽。
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▌篇136 冬季下的相遇25Please respect copyright.PENANA6AxQyYLC6P
▌類型 短文25Please respect copyright.PENANAUf1OEIqmLL
▌作者 李精字
▌第2篇
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命運的線(同#131篇)再次神奇地巧妙串連了起來,而停止擺動的車輪又再次轉動起來了。25Please respect copyright.PENANACccqSs76FU
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少年,卻也是鼓舞著自己活下去的良藥。25Please respect copyright.PENANATaYy679V7x
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很奇妙吧?!有時,命裡有時終須有,命裡無時莫強求,總是這般令人感到無法言喻的飄渺感。
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▌篇137 西方情人節25Please respect copyright.PENANAKOGVTwTnin
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▌作者 馮子緣
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「還沒開始的結束」就是最美好的結局了。25Please respect copyright.PENANA5tUGCXGhUE
女生僅只想要有個可以剎那分享心情的知心朋友,而即便是慕豪溫柔如伴侶,卻也能明白阿晴的心意,沒有死纏爛打,也沒後續的奪命連環CALL。25Please respect copyright.PENANAqSsaHZ2b8x
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我喜歡這種一決勝負的感覺,絕不拖泥帶水,不耽誤別人的時光。25Please respect copyright.PENANAf60UKWXfFd
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情感戲上,阿晴與柏傑的互動,我們可以在簡短幾句中,就聞出兩人這些日子來的漸行漸遠,直至分手,實屬明確地寫出感情的描述。25Please respect copyright.PENANACiSHoDUhxN
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而有人說,分手需要三倍的時間,才能真正沖淡對於一個人的想念,至於阿晴與柏傑還會不會復合,我們並不知道,然而我們所得知的是,情人節確實不是個分手的好時節。(??)
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▌篇138 這是个玩笑的圣誕节吧!25Please respect copyright.PENANA8DBAT9u4mi
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▌作者 李精字
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我本以為這會與131、136兩篇,串聯一起的冬季戀愛故事,卻反倒是篇新的故事。25Please respect copyright.PENANARJQAyuCIst
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雖說,有點突然之間的打鬥,卻也挺新奇的。那麼不講道理的打鬥,又那麼不講道理的成為了伙伴。
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▌篇139 醜小椏25Please respect copyright.PENANAxsAsDnaR21
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▌作者 Tey
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語意敘述、錯字及沒有排版的文,是這篇仍需要改進的地方,但整體來說故事的完整性還是能表達出來。25Please respect copyright.PENANAyRj4vqVhlW
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透過筆下刻劃出了自己的情感,結尾透過孩子第三人稱的視角發覺到了臨摹筆下的小椏,原來內心仍是暗自鬱鬱蒼蒼。25Please respect copyright.PENANA1HlbUTlMG3
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尤以風吹動拂面而來,卻在眾人見識不到的視角中,她捕捉到了那一絲女人的另外一面,非常可貴。
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▌篇140 最後的白25Please respect copyright.PENANALnOx3yjZbs
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▌作者 龍飲虎洨
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感謝龍飲大讓我望見了動物界(哺乳類?)的天性,那是最純真、最原始的物慾與競爭。25Please respect copyright.PENANAD6ZZlsAbhe
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快速激烈的來回,母熊最後在物競天擇中,被迫無奈與異族同行,就好比倒臥在富家中的慾女(?),正也是原始的勝者為王的自然法則。25Please respect copyright.PENANAQmttK7wZIK
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而最後的白,將徜徉在時光的洪流之中,成為了下一代的養分,我們只是讀取這故事的一名讀者。25Please respect copyright.PENANAXOnnfMZPmd
失敗者,將被汰除。25Please respect copyright.PENANA0Bij4UiFXH
勝利者,獲得了蜜桃的果實。25Please respect copyright.PENANAVOR1cFpwyL
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社會也同為如此現實。25Please respect copyright.PENANAb3lwlE5NLb
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但我,還是覺得案情不單純…….?