《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩217Please respect copyright.PENANAsD8l7OcNgW
詩意要較為薄弱217Please respect copyright.PENANA17LVZpJncd
但仍是一首很棒的古詩217Please respect copyright.PENANABwjHd6LapR
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分217Please respect copyright.PENANA7eVvLW0Mut
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感217Please respect copyright.PENANAHFnlHgSbW7
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。217Please respect copyright.PENANAYEYgnULSeg
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。217Please respect copyright.PENANAiuthQ6hyMb
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。217Please respect copyright.PENANAwfldKuPhvH
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。217Please respect copyright.PENANAx15QRFUuDe
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。217Please respect copyright.PENANA3m9H2HOuFA
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。217Please respect copyright.PENANA90asXl8hJk
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。217Please respect copyright.PENANA3wZaruJYjw
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。217Please respect copyright.PENANAoi4Ogcj7zL
每個人的角度皆為不同。217Please respect copyright.PENANANDJC0hqqbB
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有人感受深刻,217Please respect copyright.PENANAXQGj0fqSPe
有人無感,217Please respect copyright.PENANAqnjOlBc2hi
各有差異。217Please respect copyright.PENANAa0208RKSKj
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,217Please respect copyright.PENANADubPTfQYQf
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。