《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩219Please respect copyright.PENANAg8hS74USIC
詩意要較為薄弱219Please respect copyright.PENANAnAqiROjadU
但仍是一首很棒的古詩219Please respect copyright.PENANA9qUWm2Qrwj
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分219Please respect copyright.PENANAdbOnPrUGuo
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感219Please respect copyright.PENANAejyJJocXlw
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。219Please respect copyright.PENANA6dO55Y5vl6
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。219Please respect copyright.PENANAuyegkhf7rE
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。219Please respect copyright.PENANAMLsz7tZszA
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。219Please respect copyright.PENANAAo0G8vIPdw
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。219Please respect copyright.PENANAc4Ma3p2xtX
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。219Please respect copyright.PENANA2PH0P0zjkQ
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。219Please respect copyright.PENANAlJV4BBssAw
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。219Please respect copyright.PENANAtFc2rWDPGd
每個人的角度皆為不同。219Please respect copyright.PENANAY373nAB2p1
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有人感受深刻,219Please respect copyright.PENANAmw2yabgQxB
有人無感,219Please respect copyright.PENANAaoDn3UvInL
各有差異。219Please respect copyright.PENANAuA3Fjf7ZYQ
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,219Please respect copyright.PENANAVKU7azDYL5
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。