《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩215Please respect copyright.PENANAPJ1rvzY8P9
詩意要較為薄弱215Please respect copyright.PENANAc3F7ozHJhn
但仍是一首很棒的古詩215Please respect copyright.PENANAOK433rXuWo
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分215Please respect copyright.PENANAsBCHZCf6Ax
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感215Please respect copyright.PENANApPmRiypM7P
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。215Please respect copyright.PENANA29cxSgrdd1
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。215Please respect copyright.PENANA76I4t9i5mv
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。215Please respect copyright.PENANADVZn5Epfuh
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。215Please respect copyright.PENANAcXjDL98MqA
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。215Please respect copyright.PENANAOm1KJX8aLv
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。215Please respect copyright.PENANAA1OKMHDFnl
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。215Please respect copyright.PENANAhSilfWsmBr
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。215Please respect copyright.PENANAegQvyKZEFu
每個人的角度皆為不同。215Please respect copyright.PENANAQt8PB8Ogmz
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有人感受深刻,215Please respect copyright.PENANALRhjhroIo8
有人無感,215Please respect copyright.PENANA4AK1bAEpcF
各有差異。215Please respect copyright.PENANA1ZkeeeRI8W
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,215Please respect copyright.PENANANvZVK7iYfg
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。