《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩219Please respect copyright.PENANAlQjifCgLod
詩意要較為薄弱219Please respect copyright.PENANAzs2c8VgwXw
但仍是一首很棒的古詩219Please respect copyright.PENANADm1YqdlJti
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分219Please respect copyright.PENANAeyfdZL8DGO
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感219Please respect copyright.PENANAtPs0Dfd8ew
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。219Please respect copyright.PENANAPS3xeU0ebm
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。219Please respect copyright.PENANADUByCOzUzn
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。219Please respect copyright.PENANAyPGAsA2QVF
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。219Please respect copyright.PENANA3CxLNvWUJ4
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。219Please respect copyright.PENANAzOrlIZWu20
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。219Please respect copyright.PENANA8veWHbwtJM
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。219Please respect copyright.PENANAYghbtPdMtK
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。219Please respect copyright.PENANAlZDJdgZUmA
每個人的角度皆為不同。219Please respect copyright.PENANAg0rknPayMe
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有人感受深刻,219Please respect copyright.PENANANdUfJY5F21
有人無感,219Please respect copyright.PENANAoKIL5ILZSn
各有差異。219Please respect copyright.PENANAIgqqCI7WVr
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,219Please respect copyright.PENANA37lOBpGhg8
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。