《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#170 夏祈杳杳
▌類型 樂府詩
▌作者 宅米蟲子
本篇相對於前兩篇樂府詩218Please respect copyright.PENANAUOLdKMNMfD
詩意要較為薄弱218Please respect copyright.PENANAIwWHgFNyRt
但仍是一首很棒的古詩218Please respect copyright.PENANAh3nvAWFR6v
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之所以我認為相對較弱的部分218Please respect copyright.PENANAgAxF9w50Xc
是其意境 與用詞的閱讀感218Please respect copyright.PENANAWmiZFIUQbK
【兩世笙花】、【殘夏中秋】中皆有一個顯眼的主題,但在【夏祈杳杳】中以花鋪景,望卻天上星闕流露出了一絲孤寂與深沉的感受。218Please respect copyright.PENANA5s65Gxhfwo
或許是【兩世笙花】的一抹玄龍劃破淡薄心防,思念太深。218Please respect copyright.PENANAF3ceclDPqS
也許是【殘夏中秋】的細雨紛飛絕情綿綿,景色太美。218Please respect copyright.PENANAiv7ccaQs6f
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再嗑完了兩份深沉的憂愁後,重回到了【夏祈杳杳】,別有另外一種,希望來年梧桐花開,伊人會再來的期望。218Please respect copyright.PENANAdx7Jwd9Dy5
更多是抱持著,能夠等待,並且那人是可以等得到的感受。218Please respect copyright.PENANAnY7nerIZZG
故此,以其作為比較下,兩者意境高低立判。218Please respect copyright.PENANAvRupryifxa
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當然,宅米的詩無庸置疑放在蕉園上都是罕有敵手,皆為佳作。218Please respect copyright.PENANA6tZvdUCNRS
詩的優缺,僅憑讀者當下的心境去解讀。218Please respect copyright.PENANAnqfTSO5h3w
每個人的角度皆為不同。218Please respect copyright.PENANA8lCAYd2TGi
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有人感受深刻,218Please respect copyright.PENANAqbcu6bVFZC
有人無感,218Please respect copyright.PENANA9OnftAENCI
各有差異。218Please respect copyright.PENANAt5xpowCvUM
而我僅是那茫茫人海中,218Please respect copyright.PENANAukrxTdkr1p
因其而感受到詩中情摯所渲染一名騷客。