《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧249Please respect copyright.PENANAz9HioV97O2
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍249Please respect copyright.PENANATQdC8mo00I
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)249Please respect copyright.PENANALQsLx9CdQc
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單249Please respect copyright.PENANAzRQ6mfnOkP
而是是人在食用時能入口即化249Please respect copyright.PENANAgSEIzgdfC3
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」249Please respect copyright.PENANA6mN1JQfQEn
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久249Please respect copyright.PENANAGPUYyTiPZC
使人不會因為時間的洪流249Please respect copyright.PENANAzZaLrN65k2
失去了炙熱249Please respect copyright.PENANAwbA9R27EuI
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》249Please respect copyright.PENANAECpzd3t3ba
但夏季怎麼會有雪249Please respect copyright.PENANATmeH63JN3e
令人加以反思249Please respect copyright.PENANAMNe06HPlus
雪季不該有的畫面249Please respect copyright.PENANAuCmgVfeDXQ
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏249Please respect copyright.PENANAqCcGqCh2DF
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或許249Please respect copyright.PENANAODyiPnWHU1
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣249Please respect copyright.PENANAPdV0SgMILw
即便是來年249Please respect copyright.PENANAZKKbW2JAAo
之後的每一年都依然如此