《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧241Please respect copyright.PENANA11UEmcmvye
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍241Please respect copyright.PENANAPZbUcc1m1Q
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)241Please respect copyright.PENANAc5K2agicWN
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單241Please respect copyright.PENANAscoBFyMjqx
而是是人在食用時能入口即化241Please respect copyright.PENANAtLzrv6EOC7
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」241Please respect copyright.PENANAlj5PlJimiB
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久241Please respect copyright.PENANAaddB8suAke
使人不會因為時間的洪流241Please respect copyright.PENANAQk6zG8R1zs
失去了炙熱241Please respect copyright.PENANAu5DqLnASRc
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》241Please respect copyright.PENANAWbs5LNlZ8Z
但夏季怎麼會有雪241Please respect copyright.PENANA0cSThaAbb4
令人加以反思241Please respect copyright.PENANAsn0vrkY4zS
雪季不該有的畫面241Please respect copyright.PENANA61beDTQGgJ
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏241Please respect copyright.PENANAtaHCbExBU9
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或許241Please respect copyright.PENANAEecJChwuEu
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣241Please respect copyright.PENANAR0ZnJRyzmn
即便是來年241Please respect copyright.PENANAcp5bivJYxL
之後的每一年都依然如此