《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧276Please respect copyright.PENANApPbq0SuoTK
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍276Please respect copyright.PENANABDbxs3eVJL
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)276Please respect copyright.PENANAFw2qKviz8y
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單276Please respect copyright.PENANAOAVjHiyDTx
而是是人在食用時能入口即化276Please respect copyright.PENANAhkfn2rpmQt
276Please respect copyright.PENANAmD6WO1hIuM
「嘗試把心臟調慢」276Please respect copyright.PENANA1FqY7ig3Zm
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久276Please respect copyright.PENANAObxNQEBgvf
使人不會因為時間的洪流276Please respect copyright.PENANAL6Z7vpdmbY
失去了炙熱276Please respect copyright.PENANAjeVZa3IkjY
276Please respect copyright.PENANAIWNCg2zaxE
詩名為《夏,冬眠》276Please respect copyright.PENANArRM2En30x5
但夏季怎麼會有雪276Please respect copyright.PENANA6xJX3uZYBy
令人加以反思276Please respect copyright.PENANAXeXsyv208c
雪季不該有的畫面276Please respect copyright.PENANAYFDm2yoRv1
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏276Please respect copyright.PENANAtX3zOeCESB
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或許276Please respect copyright.PENANAOVg1Qfr83r
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣276Please respect copyright.PENANAvzd6dmF2ub
即便是來年276Please respect copyright.PENANAiCRmor7q0L
之後的每一年都依然如此