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語評：創挑第六期
ISSUE #31
Author: 寂魚
語評：創挑第六期
Author: 寂魚
ISSUE #31
★也許我還會夢見你《第六期#58》
No Plagiarism!6tZaqXdLA16yI3UOEZ8Wposted on PＥNAＮＡ

《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結

▌#58  也許我還會夢見你

▌類型 小說

▌作者 柏木桐柊

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▌文筆能力

柏木桐柊，在短短數筆之下，運用了大量的暗喻及景色來比擬離情的傷感。醪、櫺兩字都是極其罕見的同義字，在詩句之間也靈活運用自己的特色

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▌結語心得

或許，她的影跡已成過往。窗櫺映入柔情似水，而匯聚成今夜的輾轉難眠。420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFNWzsvg8dP
我望不及妳眼底的星空漫步，而夏季裡還仍猶存妳餘溫。妳說的那些在我的世界又算得是什麼，留下的不過是在保險櫃裡的一抹笑意。我早已分不清，夏日我倆是否曾約定過，而捧上手中代表著祝福的黃玫瑰。420Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡWgMvm2IRLf
這不代表著我倆有過曾經。夏夜裡。獨自釀著夢中還偶然遇見的妳。

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Last updated: Jul 5, 2025
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