語評：創挑第六期 - 夏•冬眠《第六期#203》

《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型新詩
▌作者西帆

本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡwyENcgwxxi
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDPnwpLNJBN
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeKnL6CFgTJ
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ7j1Mu4LCxv
而是是人在食用時能入口即化461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJLNWr0EXfc
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡK8k99EZMRw
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡFHwZPpPnNx
使人不會因為時間的洪流461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡq2hdsRva8M
失去了炙熱461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡzZpIvikHHQ
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCdYdHPN3V1
但夏季怎麼會有雪461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIpS80pXf6q
令人加以反思461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡYMmf4pGbiI
雪季不該有的畫面461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ47DuplMoAI
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNA0mnNEayh
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或許461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZdS9PbkCcG
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ9Yay97U12p
即便是來年461Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ2t2TDVStXm
之後的每一年都依然如此

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