寂魚創挑語評專區 - 夏•冬眠《第六期#203》

《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型新詩
▌作者西帆

本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ3YCA33nKD1
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡalsliv0Kgq
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡinbdGqTMMP
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡBMnhSFnyFr
而是是人在食用時能入口即化199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuO4K93hQPM
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡMdi1IdoaIE
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡyMM5ddbHRX
使人不會因為時間的洪流199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvTPF1usfia
失去了炙熱199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡIWufB3wmzT
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTVpe7CJDrK
但夏季怎麼會有雪199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡnp3Jgl3Du4
令人加以反思199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAjG5nkkBVd
雪季不該有的畫面199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHlIFevI9Tc
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡaS2hLZ2osS
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或許199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAr9FF4zJ6F
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjj9WzBWrNi
即便是來年199Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ4Z7zAT0eKe
之後的每一年都依然如此

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