寂魚創挑語評專區 - 夏•冬眠《第六期#203》

《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型新詩
▌作者西帆

本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡpQsLwK3pJw
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ1homjd2WmL
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6ggjHVIdV9
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡdE8W3zRt7l
而是是人在食用時能入口即化131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvnFPtlKVDQ
131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHluvJl97jq
「嘗試把心臟調慢」131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡHlYfnxN3KD
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrc8SKnh5MB
使人不會因為時間的洪流131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡCcvdo9Qk6X
失去了炙熱131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ6JCOhnBY3R
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡAfV14KwZv7
但夏季怎麼會有雪131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvXXixzitNs
令人加以反思131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡNpCBYonjdY
雪季不該有的畫面131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡTJGlf6lSwR
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡvSapjEJZ16
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或許131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRLXUAtSWsD
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡZriFTxUAtL
即便是來年131Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡB3bHOlyl7X
之後的每一年都依然如此

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