作品:《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#49 天使大人的玻璃傘
▌類型 小說
▌作者 夜臨
▌結語心得:35Please respect copyright.PENANAhZzFFv8UQ7
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因一場悲慘車禍,串連起了奇妙邂逅的緣份。35Please respect copyright.PENANAAZ6ggehEUu
純白通透的玻璃雨傘,正是本文兩人的羈絆。35Please respect copyright.PENANANPleDFXR8s
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繼兒時後,大學圖書館又再起勾起了奇妙的續緣,只是這次說什麼暮時森都絕對不再放手。35Please respect copyright.PENANAhgJmprODVe
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一季傳接球,突如起來的轉涙點卻加深了彼此的感情的過渡空間。35Please respect copyright.PENANA6vPmDcWiGc
或許,萌發的種子早已在小舞的心裡發芽了。35Please respect copyright.PENANAR7SFc8Urq1
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執子之手,而能否白頭還猶未可知。35Please respect copyright.PENANAufRwt5M9t0
但,我想遙遠彼端贈與他倆情傘的天使,早已譜上這段姻緣了。35Please respect copyright.PENANA4skEOZvMvE
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▌文筆能力:35Please respect copyright.PENANA6YQqJwbm0I
好吧,超出字數就沒辦法列入評選名次了。35Please respect copyright.PENANAdVOluHYaku
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流暢的故事,以奇幻手法來表現出不存在的天使,使得讀者內心早已種下了註定是在一起的結局。35Please respect copyright.PENANAu0lGv9Nnn5
四次出現的傘,也將短文中的起承轉合分明地展現出來,尤以在「執起她的手將手掌的溫度傳過去。」此處,使我們內心不自覺的感受到兩人之間的距離縮近。35Please respect copyright.PENANA5K4pGL6s2d
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唯有國中時候,全家出遊不幸的意外,給人原本讀者應該會設定主角應傾向「陰鬱類型」的人設,卻仍在文中沒流露出發生過重大災後的性格,稍微有所出入,但卻不影響整篇的閱讀感官。35Please respect copyright.PENANAxouPIM9RVB
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整體來說,用字簡要情節卻完整。35Please respect copyright.PENANAbrwM89IUYP
會令讀者會在讀後,聯想這之後兩人未來的遐想。