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創作挑戰第六期語評
Author:
寂魚
創作挑戰第六期語評
Author:
寂魚
ISSUE #9
盛夏與魔女《第六期 #28》
No Plagiarism!5pnG5LC4AB2AEj2d4W6gposted on PENANA 《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結8964 copyright protection212PENANAOROVEwGkAv 維尼
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這是我見過最鮮蝦的奇幻劇情了。216Please respect copyright.PENANAp2H6J7SXt3
尤其這男人,絕對是個狠人,全部的純情只為了鋪敘結尾的那慾望。 ---LonelyFish216Please respect copyright.PENANA61vNvypE41
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開門見山的斗大魔女標題,早已告訴了這不能用平常的校園看待故事。216Please respect copyright.PENANAvzMb6KnR0L
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而更為新奇的是簡單的一個小手段就處理好了,蟬靈的糾結,這同時打破了我對魔女的刻板印象。216Please respect copyright.PENANAkYy3AjZ5QL
魔女的天然呆更是突如其來一筆。216Please respect copyright.PENANAOWJ46gkITd
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最後,故事的結尾再次迎來一次,天外飛來兩筆的性慾交易,這確實打破了讀者對於故事原先的美好幻想。216Please respect copyright.PENANAQCcxUSDEB6
只得獲得一次白眼與冰冷感。8964 copyright protection212PENANAlWigxS6P95 維尼
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