《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡd25XErIPT0
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡKuJrkZZ2f7
而藉由水果方式提升（味覺）240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5rMAcdXOYQ
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道，而不止是品詩這麼簡單240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡGgycmHXxxj
而是是人在食用時能入口即化240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡRg9u29GVex
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡDQBZxdivay
我尤以喜歡這句，心臟當然不會跳動變慢，但內心（精神）的感覺卻可以，慢而持久240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡuGY4kPMeVq
使人不會因為時間的洪流240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡmewTPMskra
失去了炙熱240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqfyO1b2Q4n
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詩名為《夏，冬眠》240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡze5oOb3ZCA
但夏季怎麼會有雪240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡVAMEx0pkfZ
令人加以反思240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡm9KP7yRbGG
雪季不該有的畫面240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡjAbByB3Of1
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲，走過歲月的容顏240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡrl5sNV5L6c
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或許240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ5X3dbuwTYF
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡqabeBOlmz1
即便是來年240Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡ8HES4uyphJ
之後的每一年都依然如此
然後按「加至主畫面」