《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧239Please respect copyright.PENANAumf2aasJdk
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍239Please respect copyright.PENANAUG0emHgsed
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)239Please respect copyright.PENANADTRbpcLgDN
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單239Please respect copyright.PENANAKy3fWzVeWg
而是是人在食用時能入口即化239Please respect copyright.PENANAz4g9gV0OiN
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「嘗試把心臟調慢」239Please respect copyright.PENANAA6MyqdTmKT
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久239Please respect copyright.PENANAj9NnLNkSbh
使人不會因為時間的洪流239Please respect copyright.PENANAPHnj13PZ3H
失去了炙熱239Please respect copyright.PENANAwx1DPKmvH4
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詩名為《夏,冬眠》239Please respect copyright.PENANAIO8za4QCPM
但夏季怎麼會有雪239Please respect copyright.PENANAZpas79qxYY
令人加以反思239Please respect copyright.PENANA01Foe1pSQZ
雪季不該有的畫面239Please respect copyright.PENANA5x3YH4D0n6
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏239Please respect copyright.PENANAzTNfHuj6Uy
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或許239Please respect copyright.PENANAIh5kFpmspO
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣239Please respect copyright.PENANAOEZeINwpNh
即便是來年239Please respect copyright.PENANAMPIGhidOd0
之後的每一年都依然如此