《魚魚創挑第六期》 連結
▌#203 夏•冬眠
▌類型 新詩
▌作者 西帆
本作於擬人、擬物手法上十分精巧274Please respect copyright.PENANAujJkmoYiho
重複運用卻又沒有多餘的氛圍274Please respect copyright.PENANAQJYBfIMAGs
而藉由水果方式提升(味覺)274Please respect copyright.PENANAB8bHjo3AmG
我想更是使閱讀來能有另一種味道,而不止是品詩這麼簡單274Please respect copyright.PENANAvyPWiqUgCq
而是是人在食用時能入口即化274Please respect copyright.PENANAaQUbNYIhme
274Please respect copyright.PENANAljcCuxFtlv
「嘗試把心臟調慢」274Please respect copyright.PENANAIIVui0lEPg
我尤以喜歡這句,心臟當然不會跳動變慢,但內心(精神)的感覺卻可以,慢而持久274Please respect copyright.PENANAGO7jvXA8Wk
使人不會因為時間的洪流274Please respect copyright.PENANAkiUHAxoFLT
失去了炙熱274Please respect copyright.PENANAP6lPtVZv17
274Please respect copyright.PENANAW7z1J0sRGp
詩名為《夏,冬眠》274Please respect copyright.PENANAoffpUrAY7q
但夏季怎麼會有雪274Please respect copyright.PENANACf5nzMZJ99
令人加以反思274Please respect copyright.PENANAGaemQ9R9ln
雪季不該有的畫面274Please respect copyright.PENANAPWze2KvB2E
卻如那噠噠的馬蹄聲,走過歲月的容顏274Please respect copyright.PENANAJayR2FJY92
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或許274Please respect copyright.PENANAmh2frJw7Al
不只這個夏季呼吸充滿著冰凍的雪氣274Please respect copyright.PENANACx8Xfw99Ya
即便是來年274Please respect copyright.PENANA6iwEVnEk4E
之後的每一年都依然如此