No Plagiarism!7NiwnTDZIYqgydUIYo9kposted on PENANA 今天早上,我寫了比較低迷的場景,那段是為了接下來的揭露所做的鋪陳,我一直思考要用什麼方式呈現。8964 copyright protection179PENANAl4Isuc88D9 維尼
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如果沒經過打磨,人物產生價值衝突、爭吵、誤解的橋段就很容易變得俗氣,喪失美感和藝術性,而作者入情太深,就會顯得自說自話,是個不好處理的段落。8964 copyright protection179PENANAFj6PPjaS46 維尼
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於是我翻了翻桌上的書,欣賞一下別人是怎麼處理的。再加上,我的腦海也浮現了心法,剛好可以分享給大家。8964 copyright protection179PENANAGjCDLQqESY 維尼
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以前我讀到相樂總老師的《被學生脅迫這種事是犯罪吧》時,裡面有一整段我一直將它的概念銘記在心。8964 copyright protection179PENANAkk0tJIkBdW 維尼
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那段全文我應該背不出來,只是憑藉記憶來描述。8964 copyright protection179PENANA6CNzliVCGK 維尼
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那是一個講述場景構成的橋段。8964 copyright protection179PENANAmDdNpNZJ4v 維尼
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它說:8964 copyright protection179PENANARi15317vw7 維尼
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將複雜的事情,用單純的方式表現出來。8964 copyright protection179PENANAHzbi0dpqYc 維尼
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將簡單的道理,用深刻的方式描述出來。8964 copyright protection179PENANAYbdK8S7I2T 維尼
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將無趣的事情,用幽默的手法呈現出來。8964 copyright protection179PENANAxzIpacFz8n 維尼
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將平淡的互動,用深邃的方式表現出來。8964 copyright protection179PENANAW6PArXnyuj 維尼
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差不多是這種感覺。8964 copyright protection179PENANAfupjDGgIkz 維尼
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拿更簡單的道理來說,我們要描述的一個人的悲傷,不是寫大哭打鬧,而是平靜的,或者強顏歡笑。8964 copyright protection179PENANAdA5beIsSwt 維尼
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透過描述上跟劇情上、概念上的對比,就能賦予整個場景深度。8964 copyright protection179PENANA1qInqz4dDd 維尼
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相樂總老師用形容詞這種偏向虛的描寫,就傳達了不好傳達的概念,我很佩服他。況且上面的東西也能用自己的理解,以貫串的道理隨意改編,就能使場景構成變得更加多彩多姿。8964 copyright protection179PENANAQXI5jrcd7I 維尼
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而拿捏描述的比例、用對話的拋接來撰寫低迷的場景,我也還在練習這種自己不擅長的地方。8964 copyright protection179PENANAA4FGsQ210L 維尼
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前天我認識了一位新朋友,而昨天我又跟他聊了好一陣子,幾乎都忘了時間。8964 copyright protection179PENANAy3cqQvhK3k 維尼
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幾個月前也發生過這種事,但至今為止,我一直感到不可思議。8964 copyright protection179PENANAYOU9nANKi3 維尼
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不久前還是陌生人的兩個人,透過網路就能隨意交談、分享自己的看法,那就感覺像是魔法一般。8964 copyright protection179PENANATNVujCrXtg 維尼
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又或者從簡短的互動,慢慢加深關係,這種方式也依然會產生「啊,我原來跟他合得來啊」的訝異。8964 copyright protection179PENANAk0hiXbUSI0 維尼
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創作、文字、網路,真是奇妙的東西。8964 copyright protection179PENANA8jLoxJ4UB5 維尼
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如果能好好使用,肯定能成為自己與對方的助力。8964 copyright protection179PENANAvWn5lb8R7q 維尼
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昨天下班打鈴時,我為了弄完手邊的事情而多待了兩分鐘。雖然也不是立刻要弄完,但當時就是有種要弄完的感覺。8964 copyright protection179PENANAVl2DOjSGOT 維尼
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一邊感嘆自己真是有責任感,一邊走下樓梯,在下一層,一位小姐姐就剛好開門走出來。8964 copyright protection179PENANAskyXUb52Ed 維尼
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她一見到我,或許是覺得自己擋到路,就將兩隻手舉到腰部附近,做出「請先過吧!」的可愛動作,還露出開朗的笑容。8964 copyright protection179PENANA5yfwMMqJxE 維尼
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本來臉部因為疲累而僵硬的我忍不住笑出來,跟她說了聲「謝謝」,然後就承蒙她的好意走下樓梯。8964 copyright protection179PENANAGa9bZtzndV 維尼
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因為她的動作跟人都蠻可愛的,讓我有種被治癒的感覺。嗯嗯,真是賞心悅目。8964 copyright protection179PENANAgePn3DznLj 維尼
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但我忽然又覺得是不是之前工作時有去其他部門找過她談事情,所以她才那麼友善,畢竟我這個人很臉盲,很容易忘記別人長什麼樣子。8964 copyright protection179PENANAHNsTLTyxXG 維尼
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總之,現在想起來又開心起來。感覺真好吶。8964 copyright protection179PENANAPyQrXNhYEv 維尼
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