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沉默的戰歌
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不過有幾點建議/提醒：
1. #1的背景介紹可以稍微分段一下，讀起來會比較輕鬆。
2. 有不少錯漏字，不過找時間重修一次應該就能改掉。
3. 可以的話多請善用頓號和句號，而不是每個小段落內都從頭逗號到尾XD