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沉默的戰歌
LEE KEN
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中古奇幻大陸，三個人種，三個國家，維持著巧妙的平衡，然而，異界的妖魔入侵，政局動盪不安，三國間的平衡逐漸瓦解...

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Total Reading Time: 6 hours 36 minutes
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響木 sponsored 1000coins!
故事還挺有意思的，會讓人期待後續發展！
不過有幾點建議/提醒：
1. #1的背景介紹可以稍微分段一下，讀起來會比較輕鬆。
2. 有不少錯漏字，不過找時間重修一次應該就能改掉。
3. 可以的話多請善用頓號和句號，而不是每個小段落內都從頭逗號到尾XD
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LEE KEN
感謝建議，有時間會再回頭潤一下稿
2 years ago ⋅ 0 repliesReply
冒險 輕小說 魔法 戰鬥 2024暑期日更挑戰 中古奇幻
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Last updated: Dec 4, 2024
Total word count: 118,914
Total reading time: 396 Minutes
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冒險 輕小說 魔法 戰鬥 2024暑期日更挑戰 中古奇幻
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