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第四期詩情畫意之徵文而評（第二回）
ENTRY #8
Author: 離月霜
Published:
Apr 5, 2024
第四期詩情畫意之徵文而評（第二回）
Published:
Apr 5, 2024
ENTRY #8
【愛情】孤玉伴月
Author: 離月霜
Published:
Apr 5, 2024
1 Min Read
194 Words
No Plagiarism!gfZvIpOvsmehz4MKvMdCposted on PＥNAＮＡ

【篇名】孤玉伴月72Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡPuM7oN2RZE

【網址】孤玉伴月

【核心概念】一個想要什麼就會竭盡所能爭取的女主，為了追求所愛於是用計嫁給男主，之後的一系列故事。

【動機】想增進文筆、知道他人的讀後感，以及會不會因敘事不當或者伏筆太重導致看不懂劇情

【範圍】不限

【問題點】想知道怎麼將文字描寫的更生動，而非單純的敘事文字（像是人物、景色的描寫）

【著重面】文筆、內容、角色刻畫

【評論類型】閱讀心得／技巧交流

【想對評論者說的話】感謝您舉辦這個活動，讓我有機會得到指教並進步，而非停滯不前卻找不出原因。

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