精彩的爭吵對白，最好能夠說出讀者心裡想說的話，代替讀者把對方罵一頓。
例如角色A從頭到尾不停劈腿，戀人B總是傻呼呼相信他，讀者自然會期待B終於覺醒把A痛罵一頓。
等到後來B真的翻臉了，說出來的話卻是：「你都不帶我去那家飯店住」,這時讀者的心情一定是：WTF？只要帶你去住飯店，怎麼劈腿都行嗎？
作者最好是在心裡揣摩一下讀者在閱讀時的心情，試著代替讀者罵出想說的話，免得寫出WTF的對白。
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