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對不起，教主不知道如何讓書大賣
ISSUE #11
Author: killer
對不起，教主不知道如何讓書大賣
Author: killer
ISSUE #11
短文：情緒不是用形容詞堆出來的
No Plagiarism!1xeAk0V6cqPr98oTXVPlposted on PＥNAＮＡ

試問以下對白：

298Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡeMhyoKXu0z

「我現在又快樂又幸福又興奮又喜悅又開心！」

和

「哇！！！哈哈哈！呀！」

或是「太帥了！」「讚！」「爽啊！」

哪一句感覺比較快樂幸福興奮喜悅？

寫作者在描寫強烈的情緒的時候容易有個誤區，以為形容詞越多感覺越強烈，事實剛好相反。

人在處於強烈情緒的時候，無論是正面還是負面，其實都想不出那麼多個形容詞只能說出最直接、最符合心境的話，甚至說不出話，只能發出聲音。

當角色用力在形容自己的情緒的時候，感覺會很虛偽。

298Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡJrjhNn2DCT

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對不起，教主不知道如何讓書大賣
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Last updated: May 31, 2026
Total word count: 25,276
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